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Reviewer: Michi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 05:22 am Title: Prodigal

You got me hooked here. Please update this one soon! I'm really loving this. Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I appreciate your kind words. And I am working on an update.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 03:02 am Title: Prodigal

Oooh. Great chapter! Loved everything about it, and the end! Oh man, I can't *wait* to see what happens next! :D Continue soon!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this. The next one is slowly coming along. I don't pace myself well! Too much writer's block!

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:22 am Title: Prodigal

Thank You, i 've been wanting Scott to finally have this conversation with Wolverine..well..it wasn't really and conversation more of Scott yelling, lol. But still i like that chapter.

I was wondering since the med-lab part..hmm, does Scott have his eyes closed?, but i glad you answered my question for me

Author's Response: Glad to have answered your questions. I almost had him come back with his usual problem, but that would have created a different scene altogether, with everyone jumping all over the place, trying to get him back in his glasses, trying not to let him destroy the infirmary...that would have changed the flavor of the story, although I considered it briefly. Scott and Ororo will talk again, too.

Reviewer: batman_wolverine Signed [Report This]
Date: 07-24-06 - 02:10 am Title: Prodigal

Well, even though I just skimmed through the previous chapters, I read this one full....all because you make it just so damn hard not to read ur fics.

Also finished reading the one you mailed over. What about the other parts of it?

'nyways, now that I have read this, I think I'll keep on readin' till the end.

BW

Author's Response: I'm flattered that you picked this up, BW, even though you don't like movie fics, or at least not X3 fics. Reiko nicknamed this story my X4 fic! I will email you the previous parts of Sleepless later today or tomorrow. I'm logging off pretty soon.

Reviewer: Abby Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-23-06 - 03:45 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

OMFM YOU CANT LEAVE IT LIKE THAT YOU HAVE TO UPDATE !!!! AHHHHHH !!!! SO AWSOME !! I HAVE TO READ MORE !! AAHHHH !! Sorry better now update soo Please !!!

Author's Response: hee hee hee...great review. Thanks! I am working on more updates. More angst stuff ahead, but it will serve a purpose. Ro-Lo stuff coming up two, maybe three chapters from this one.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 06:50 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

OH SHIT! What was that? Did the newly reborn Jean take over Ororo's mind? How could she? How could she know about Scott? Woah...And Stryker is paying god again. Hopefully Wolverine will teach him a lesson permanetly this time. But can he really control Jean. Or will she go awry again. Damn you got me really interested in this story now! Oh and did i metion i love it, love it, LOVE IT! Update soon!

Author's Response: Still developing this out a little. Yes, Jean took control of Storm, though neither woman is certain how yet. It has a lot to do with their empathic link and Jean regaining some semblance of her memories with her rebirth. Instead of reaching out to Scott from the "grave," she reached out to Ororo too. I am glad you are enjoying it.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 04:04 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

omg, wow...just wow, i was so not expecting that...i'm speechless, that was an amazing chapter...wow...

Author's Response: glad you were wowed! Thanks for reviewing, angel.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 03:32 pm Title: Red Carpet

lol, i loved logan and ororo's chase scene...it was so cute, and the wet willie was sooo funny, absolutely loved this chapter!

Author's Response: ...I had fun typing that as it slipped into my head. Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 04:38 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Oh, fwee. That was highly unexpected. But fascinating nonetheless.

o_O

Let's just say I'm gonna just sit here and wait 'til you update again, 'kay?

Author's Response: I did update. Hope you can give it a read soon. Glad you were fascinated. I'm trying hard not to bore anyone if they don't like movieverse stories, but its different than my usual stuff, so bear with me. C

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-22-06 - 12:57 am Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

HOLY BOVINE! That was amazing. I NEED MORE! I dont have any more words... too many updates in one day. There needs to be some coordination, so that not one author gets all my words :P

Author's Response: Holy bovine...ha ha ha. I swear, you crack me up, girl. I enjoy your reviews as much as your stories, and like Windy, you come up with some great lines. Looking forward to that round robin you promised me, and the next addition to WAYW and Schadenfreude.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 11:25 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

FUCKING WHOOOOOHOOOOOOO!!! This is...is....OMG, what the hell, I actually can't find the words. Damn it. It's glorious.
Damn glorious. **Does a jig**

Author's Response: Wish I could see the jig...sigh. Oh, well. Thanks again for tuning in. No purple nerples in this one, but still contemplating the next method of torture for Ororo to use on Logan. More angst coming; things will get worse before they get better.

Reviewer: Jasmine Shigeru Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 09:55 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Okay that was interesting. I like Scott being back. Can't wait to see where you take that. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Interesting? I hope it was, and I hope you continue to read this, Jasmine. I did update, and I will again.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 08:42 pm Title: Red Carpet, Part Two – Dust

Ho-lee crap, what a chapter! And an awesome one at that. :D I am so addicted to this. So. Addicted. I can't *wait* to see what happens next! Continue soon! D:

Author's Response: More angst is what happens next, Logan isn't getting much of a break, and neither is Ororo. I will lighten it up again soon, I promise.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 06:53 pm Title: Red Carpet

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! Really! It's so...Okay so Ororo, the most serious of my favourite characters and mister grouchy himself Logan are acting like 12 year olds! Why does it feel so right then? It's so FUNNY! It's hilarious. I absolutely love this chapter. I love it. I really love it. Okay i will come back when i can write a proper review. *walks off grinning*

Author's Response: Glad you liked this. I just uploaded some more.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 09:50 am Title: Red Carpet

The theory on Scott is brilliant. I never thought of things that way.

Ororo and Logan. *laugh* The cutest thing ever. Even the most powerful mutants act like kids sometimes.

Author's Response: My theory is a little farfetched for me, but I kept wondering as I watched the movie, why would Jean kill the man she loved and then allow the guy she lusted after to kill her??? It was unplausible. Her reasons for killing Scott were never fleshed out at all, so I am trying to work with that here. Ororo and Logan have the kind of friendship, I think, where some horsing around is possible, or at least picking on each other once in a while. Glad you liked it.

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