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Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-21-06 - 12:26 am Title: Red Carpet

YOU SAID PUPRLE NURPLE!
OMG I have the image of Hal giving Hugh one, and its making me smile. You so fucking rock. I could see them frolicking in the woods too. SERIOUSLY GREAT JOB! Cant get this grin off, and my face hurts from all the smiling. =)

Author's Response: Hey, I give you full credit for that one, you got me started with it in your last update, I think...I just love that darned word. "Nerple..." it's funny even when you just say it out loud. glad to give you a smile. I listened to that song you sent me, and I was humming the melody all day yesterday, muttering "happiness as the expense of others..." That was SO funny. Keep updating too, you!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 09:17 pm Title: Red Carpet

"their tongues entwined and communed in a secret language that begged fluency by frequent practice"

Awesome, awesome line. I loved this chapter. I can't stop grinning and people are looking at me funny (I'm at work). They're all like "Why are you so happy?"

"Purple nerple."

"What?"

"You heard me." TWEAK!

Your fault if I get fired!! *grin*

Author's Response: ...sure, blame it all on me, I can't even keep my own job!!! I borrowed "nerple" from Reiko, since that's one of my all-time favorite silly words. And yeah, so sue me, I get all wishy-washy with the fancy words when folks get to kissin'. I read too many cheesy Susan Elizabeth Phillips novels and the like. I wanted to be a slush novelist back when I originally went to school. Never happened. Viva la fanfic.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 08:12 pm Title: Red Carpet

Ok, that was sooo funny. I coudn't help but laugh when he called her Sunshine. Little Miss Sunshine...no, i don't think she would like that much.

Author's Response: Hey, it could have been worse, he coulda called her Sprinkles. I had fun using that one. Glad you got to read it!

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 07:10 pm Title: Red Carpet

I *love* this! Love it! The whole playground thing cracked me up. And Sunshine? Hee. There's a new one. Can't wait for more, so continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Working on it...slowly but surely. This was harvested from who knows how many relationships that I've had with guys that have tickled me to death, and when I've taken umbrage.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

ok it's official...u've got me totally addicted....again...i'm lovin' this, u've got me anxiously wonderin' wat's gonna happen next...

Author's Response: half the time, I don't even know what's gonna happen next! Thanks for the review, 'angel.

Reviewer: roloangel09 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 03:54 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

ok it's official...u've got me totally addicted....again...i'm lovin' this, u've got me anxiously wonderin' wat's gonna happen next...

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're tuning in, 'angel. I'll be enabling that addiction a little (smiles) with the next chapter, once I finish it.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-20-06 - 12:46 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Scott is coming back...wow i never would have thought about his body being infused with the water and all.

Author's Response: The basic idea I was going for was that Jean didn't kill Scott; she merely tucked him into her pocket for safekeeping, because maybe she knew there was something about to happen that would put him in danger. I want to build on that. Although it will seem farfetched, since this is my first movieverse story.

Reviewer: ShadowDiva Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 11:26 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Oh, I love this. Love, love, love! Awesome job on this and I can't wait for the next chapter! Continue soon! :D

Author's Response: Thanks, Diva! Great to hear from you. Going to try to write more soon.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 08:33 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Is Stryker trying to bring Jean back? Under his control? Damn. How will Hank be able to bring Scott back? And I LOVE the way Roro & Logan lean on eachother for suport. If Stryker brings Jean back that will be over. I also loved Ororo & Logan's musings in this chapter! I so cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this, and yeah, I've got answers to your questions! Bring Jean back? Kinda. Under his control? Definitely. Hank's working on it, I am bending the plot very, very much. Jeannie coming back doesn't have to totally blow Logan and Ororo out of the water, but it will create consequences for different reasons between them...in the movie, Logan didn't want to listen to reason when Ororo said they had to do "what needed to be done." Hint, hint. I hope you enjoy the update, when I write it.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 08:23 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Even tho I knew it was comming, my mouth is still in the shape of "O". DANG LADY! I totally need more. This is like X4 times ten...thusly making it X40. o_O

Any waze more, more mooooooore!

Author's Response: Glad to have entertained you! X4... yeah, us fans should be the one to write that movie! Darn FOX. Darn Marvel. I will write more of this, I promise. Still looking for the plot, but its hiding from me.

Reviewer: Roxxibebe02 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 08:04 pm Title: Empty

This is really turning into a great story. Keep it up : )

Author's Response: Thanks, Roxxi! Trying to keep it going, still fiddling with plot bunnies.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 07:31 pm Title: Things That Go Bump in the Night

Oooooooooh, this is getting goooooooooooooood. (If you couldn't tell by all the 'o's I am excited.) Brilliantly written as always and just as soon as I get off of work, (5 more hours) I will mosey home and add you to my favorites. *grin* You rock--out loud. Or as Ali would say "That shit was slicker than my ass after Mexican on Tuesdays"...

Author's Response: ...so help me, I'm dying with laughter here. You HAVE to use that in your next chapter of Convergence, now, or I will hunt you down. "slicker than my ass..." too funny. Mosey over with updates when you have time again, girl.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-19-06 - 12:18 pm Title: Empty

Go Cee...it seems you've got me for another one..great start. why does 'Ro eyes have to be brown? Well at least Logan isn't short in this one...u win some and lose some i guess :)

Author's Response: I'm writing a movieverse story, and going with the appearances of Hugh and Halle, so Logan will be tall in this story, too. But thankfully, Ororo will have more hair. I hated her wig in X3!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 07:00 pm Title: Empty

Oooohhh...shiny!!! I mean interesting. lol Well an very interesting begining. Is the Phoenix coming back again? What is Stryker planning, and why is he alive? Very nice moment between Ororo & Logan. He actually took care of her and managed to calm her down. It was too short! Should have been more descriptive there! Well you got my attention, i'm waiting for an update.

P.S. How can a story be movieverse and AU at the same time?

Author's Response: Movie verse, because it picks up where X2 and X3 left off, and where they fear to tread (grins). And alternate universe, because there are bits and pieces of comic history thrown in, particularly with the characters that I have in here. This is definitely off-canon. Sometimes, Logan can be the one to act calm when everyone else around him is going nuts, I wanted to convey that. Shiny...I love Firefly. My sister walks around saying "oooooh, shiny" all the time. Phoenix is not really coming back, not the way you would think. But someone else close to her just might...stay tuned.

Reviewer: Jasmine Shigeru Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07-15-06 - 06:02 pm Title: Empty

I really like this. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I actually did, Jasmine. Thanks for visiting.

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