Dang, girl. Two updates in one day was fabulous on its own, especially when they were both so amazingly good. But the dreamscapes...the dark feel to their nightmares and the way that Ororo's situation keeps invading the little piece of peaceful happiness they are trying to find together in the wilderness is just addictive. And you once again managed to evoke memories for me of old Xmen tales; I thought of Magneto unburying himself from a shallow grave when he was a child after he and his family were mon down with bullets by the Nazis in Classic XMen, and it made it more compelling that it was Storm this time, with her horrible claustrophobia. I've been digging around with a plot for my own story that focused on Jean being angry at having been killed by Logan in While You Were Out, but I never would have arrived here. Wonderful, wonderful work.

I'm so tired from real Life tonight, I completely missed this chapter before. But, I'm glad I went back and checked again. Sweet Jesus, that was hot. And Logan snapping the plate was too perfect. Such a spot on reaction. Great job on this, hun! Can't wait for the next chapter! :D

I can't stop laughing, picturing Logan's befuddled (yet somehow intense) expression outside of the bathroom door. That was a hot little scene. I'm ready for the real thing, though *hint*

I'm loving these rapid updates. They keep a fiend like myself satisfied. The scene when Ororo climbed out of her grave took me back to Kill Bill Vol. 2.(Love that movie.) I saw 'Ro as Beatrix. Just a beautifully written scene. Great job on that.

Logan's dream was heart-wrenching. So very, very sad. It's horrible that he has to be haunted by something that he HAD to do. If not, Jean would've destroyed the world.

The Shower Scene. *blinks rapidly w/ mouth agape* OMG! That was HOT! Of course, Logan hears EVERYTHING! Loved it! I can't wait to see how they act around each other afterwards.

Update soon, please!

you spoil us. i love it!