Date: 08-20-06 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
Hey, where did Brian go? The plot thickens.
Man...Mary pretty much echoed every thought I ever had of Hugh Jackman in his Wolverine outfits and wig. From the first moment of the cage fight in the first movie, I remember thinking to myself "he looks like he stepped out of the comics!" That was totally it.
Yup. Evil cliffhanger. Once again, you are an evil genius. This was brilliant, sexy, funny, and deep.
Date: 08-20-06 - 04:09 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
AHHHHHH
you're cruel.
Date: 08-20-06 - 03:09 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
Oh No! I'm really scared for Betsy. I hope she can get out of this in one piece. It's a good thing Warren was still on the phone and could hear what she was saying.
'Ro and Logan. *sigh* I need more of them.
Great update! Can't wait for more!
Date: 08-20-06 - 02:49 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
you are so evil. . . one minute in Alaska. . . the next in Betsy's bedroom. you are killing me here. i have to admit, though, that the passion is rivaled by the mystery. i can't wait for the kicking of some ass to begin.
keep up the terrific writing.
Date: 08-20-06 - 02:25 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
Ooooh. I get more addicted with every chapter. :D Loved this. And the scene in the bedroom cracked me up. Mary's a hoot. And Logan? Hee. That was so him. :D Can't wait for the next chapter! Continue soon! :D
Date: 08-20-06 - 01:09 pm Title: Chapter Eight: Chaos Factor
**wipes drool from lips**
You are mean.