[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 07:38 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
I think i was holding my breath. not the first time in this story!
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
In the words of the infamous sandlot
"you're killin me smalls!!!!"
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
Good Lord, what a chapter. I need ice, lol, and a cigarette. :P And I can't wait to see what happens next! Continue soon!
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 02:31 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
Oh, this was so good, but also so sad. Is there no way that these two can work out their issues????
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
oh no! you have to fix this. something has to give. This break between uuuurrrrrgh!!!
I really like your version of wolverine though. He seems mature- that is the only way I can describe it. Like he is not just the animal but a man.If that makes any sense at all
He has depth.
Sinister cant be done and he must have been up to something while they were waiting for the others to recover.
i cant wait to read the meeting between ororo and charles.
Keep it coming, Good writing
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
wow! how many updates, only just finished lol!!
cos i read them all after each other, i feel like an emotional wreck, i left some chapters on high, and after storm throwing logan out i thought oh god no! then things were finally settling back on track and dun dun dun, logan leaves for newyork!
But i know that wont be the end, since we now have a name, mr sinister. and we also have logans new promise to find them, kill them and bring Ororo back a shred of hope, awwww.
plus i dont belive logan gives himself enough credit, about the whole 'you'll come and go and soon not come back at all', i mean he did refer to the hope as "theirs" you did mean, as a baby of theirs didnt you? i mean thats a huge step!
god if they did have a kid, who would be the surogate?? PLEASE not mary!
i usually dont give OC's the time of day, so that fact i feel anything towards this character shows your capability as a writter to make somthing real. Mary is a tricky one lol, I just dont like who she fancied logan, and how she had the balls to tell Ororo how she was suposed to fell, it's okay for Bets lol something about her just annoys me lol, however i warmed to her when she found the victims lol, those last chapters and Ororos love for her mean i'm starting to like her lol.
by the way, i love the little things that you've added in, like Ororos skin buzzing thats brilliant.
i hated it when logan went and made Ororo jealous that really pissed me off, part of me wanted Ororo to walk of and leave him there, if thats how he felt and he could so easily stray!
Awww i just cant believe Logan didnt have the balls to stay with Ororo , she told him that she loved him, he didnt even put up a fight.
He's seriously gonna have to earn some points back for that! lol
Great read seriously, as you can see from my ramblings i feel alot for this story! THANKS!
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 01:47 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
I can't believe I'm sitting here crying genuine tears for a fictional couple. That last scene was just too much to bear. But, this is an angst fic, so I understand why you had to take the story to this place.
This chapter was so heartbreakingly beautiful. You have an amazing talent. I hope you continue to write more beautiful stories. Fade is quite possibly one of my favorite fanfics EVER! And the story isn't finished yet!
I'm waiting anxiously for your next update.
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 12:54 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen: Letting Go
You know what I think.
*returns the love 10 fold*
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