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Date: 08-24-06 - 10:16 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Yeah! Let's go, man. I'm ready to see the blood flow.

And then Ororo and Logan can have those blast-out argument moments that end up just how we like 'em. Yaay.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-24-06 - 04:27 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

So help me...too much good stuff to describe. The last chapter made me practically cry again, this one just made me beam. You're so ridiculously talented. That's it, I'm never writing again. I'm moldering away here in my own mediocrity!!! I'll just read your stories from now on...

Reviewer: Electric_Claws Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-24-06 - 02:46 am Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Pardon my French, but FUCK YES!

"Well, we do know a girl that can walk through walls." This is gonna be gggooooooooodddddd.... :-)

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

UH!!! so i rambeled on and on in a review i posted only hours ago, and now i have a new update, and you have mentioned most of the things that were bugging me, like who logan was sorry he didnt put up a fight, and she couldda gone traveling with him, and how he thought about their children. I seriously doubt you read my review and addressed them just cos of me, this shows what an insightful writter u are, i mean everythin a reader could pick up on you adress sooner or later, you leave no questions unanswered, and just when i was getting pissed of with wolverine, he's right back in the good books, well goodish, lol, still a bit mad, but i reckon he's gonna make up for ir on chapter 15! Thanks again for the great read

Reviewer: playwiththewinds Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

UH!!! so i rambeled on and on in a review i posted only hours ago, and now i have a new update, and you have mentioned most of the things that were bugging me, like who logan was sorry he didnt put up a fight, and she couldda gone traveling with him, and how he thought about their children. I seriously doubt you read my review and addressed them just cos of me, this shows what an insightful writter u are, i mean everythin a reader could pick up on you adress sooner or later, you leave no questions unanswered, and just when i was getting pissed of with wolverine, he's right back in the good books, well goodish, lol, still a bit mad, but i reckon he's gonna make up for ir on chapter 15! Thanks again for the great read

Reviewer: Rhapsody81 Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

I particularly liked the last line! :D

each chapter you've sped through was amazingly good without losing an ounce if it's "Je ne sais que(?)"

Reviewer: DaughterofthWind Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Are you trying to kill me??? LOL just kidding, well written loveing it so much I really want the next like five chapters, or however amny there are. Loving it good work.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Glad you like the manip :D

And HELL YEAH!
Sparkler... *hee hee*
;)

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked

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Date: 08-23-06 - 05:28 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Well, my RoLo loving heart has healed somewhat from last chapter. I liked how you used the picture to connect 'Ro and Logan's sorrow and regret.

I, like Ali, found Logan's obsessive need to find the people responsible kinda romantic. I know that's weird, but I can't help it. :)

Can't wait to see Wolvie in a beserker rage!

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Date: 08-23-06 - 05:17 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen: Standing Still

Great chapter, hun! Yay for Kenny finally asking Mary to marry him. Aw! that was very cute. And love the interplay between Logan and Alison. Like the annoying kid sister, lol. Works beautifully. And the end? Hee. Nice. Can't wait for the next chapter! :D Continue soon! :)