[Report This]Date: 09-16-06 - 02:45 am Title: Chicken Soup for the Unlucky Soul
Hmmmmm...someone's being naughty with the plot bunnies!!! Love this. Love it, love it, love it. I grinned from beginning to end. Scott tryin' t'step with Logan's lady? Whooooooooooo!
[Report This]Date: 09-15-06 - 06:54 pm Title: Sweet and Savory
love this story so far...
by the way, i seen last dragon... man it sucked.
O! one more thing "daswidania" means in russian "goodbye" so Piotr should say "zdrastwujtie" (welcome)
[Report This]Date: 09-15-06 - 10:18 am Title: Chicken Soup for the Unlucky Soul
This fic is so much fun to read! Loved the two Peters, Logan and Hank laughing about women. It was hilarious. I LMAO off at this line “Logan, um...how knarled is Jean’s red bush?” Ouch! That was harsh, but funny as hell!
Poor 'Ro! Being sick is never fun. But having a warm body like Logan's to cuddle up with is always a plus. Great update!
[Report This]Date: 09-15-06 - 05:18 am Title: Chill and Serve
I hoped I did good with the follow up. I can't tell you how relived I am that you took the skiing part. I don't think I've ever seen a real mountain before.
I can't wait to see what's up next!
Author's Response: You did great with your part, but I already told you that. The follow up to the skiing was priceless.
[Report This]Date: 09-07-06 - 07:24 pm Title: Chill and Serve
Poor 'Ro! I laughed so loud and hard at your description of 'Ro skiing, I think I scared my dog. Another great chapter to a fun story.
Author's Response: Reiko and I talked about that scene before it was created. The visual made us both laugh during the conception phase. Glad you liked it!
[Report This]Date: 09-04-06 - 01:22 am Title: Get It While It’s Hot!
OOooh you did it again! The imagery was beyond spectacular. I loved the parking lot scene. Kawaii....
The next chappy might be unintentionally funny because I too know nothing about skiing. Hmmm....oh yeah I could see Roro making a mess out of herself on a slop know! LOL
Author's Response: I found pics on someone's photo library that they linked to Wikipedia of the fountains. It was very pretty. Yeah, that skiing scene just speaks to me. Woo hoo!
[Report This]Date: 09-03-06 - 04:39 pm Title: Get It While It’s Hot!
A part of me feels sorry for Jean, I still say its what she gets, but I feel for her. Maybe Scott didn't have to mess around with her sister, but paychecks a b*tch.
Those scenes in the helicopter were beautiful. I've never seen snow before, except for little snipets on tv, but the way you described it, I could picture it perfectly.
Great update!
Author's Response: Well, sure. Feel free to feel sorry for her. She isn't meant to be hated so much as misunderstood. She has some growing up to do. I grew up where there was snow, and it looks really pretty from overhead. I flew into Logan Airport in Boston a couple of Januaries ago when it was zero degrees, and everything was covered in snow as the sun came up. Gorgeous view. That inspired this. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 01:44 pm Title: Holding Your Nose Doesn't Make it Taste Good
This story is a fun, fun ride. Keep it up!! It's so neat to watch you two bat the fic back and forth like a tennis match. Hee hee.
[Report This]Date: 08-23-06 - 01:06 am Title: Holding Your Nose Doesn't Make it Taste Good
I was actually thinking Madelyne was conveniently single with Scott's kid, so that she had the appeal of giving him a kid and being unattached, but being Alex's wife is okay, too. Especially since Lorna is with Bobby Drake!
The chocolate gift basket...priceless. Love it. Bumble Fuck Chuck...see if that doesn't have me in stitches all week now thinking about it. Even the chapter title was funny! I hope you are posting this to the groups.
Author's Response: I had planned on her being single too, but it wasn't until I posted and several people read it that I realized I called Maddie's son Nate Summers. OOPS! It was soposed to be Nate Pryor. The name Summer's kinda gave away his paternity. Then I remembered that Scott had a bro. How convientant...it was my bad.
As for posting it to the groups...oopsie again. Forgot all about it. I'll work on that too.
Glad you like the gift basket. That totally came out of nowhere. I really wanted Ororo there when she found out about what was going on, and I kinda still wanted Rolo close platonically but on the verge of something more, so what says that better than a present, a chocolate present! :D But now its all broken :( *hint hint*
[Report This]Date: 08-22-06 - 03:52 am Title: Bad Taste in My Mouth
You guys have a great story going here! You've got just the right amount of tension and drama. I can't wait for some RoLo time to start burning up the pages.
Author's Response: Reiko gets to write that action next, as well as some more scandalous moments! It's her plot, and we're both having lots of fun with it!
[Report This]Date: 08-22-06 - 12:48 am Title: Bad Taste in My Mouth
freaking awesome love your story awesome
Author's Response: Thanks, 'moon.
[Report This]Date: 08-22-06 - 12:05 am Title: Bad Taste in My Mouth
lmao! That lunch scene was priceless. Its a good thing Dani and Shan wasn't there. Tabloids would have all of the dirt.
I hope the three of the remember they're in the hallway...or maybe not.
Keep it comin'.
Author's Response: I thought back to the scene in "In and Out" when Matt Dillon tells his girlfriend "Eat something, ya look like a Swizzle stick!" and she hollers after him, "Eat?? FOOD???" That totally inspired the dialogue between Jean and Scott. I am glad you are continuing to read this, Libra.
[Report This]Date: 08-21-06 - 06:48 am Title: Bad Taste in My Mouth
DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMN! Tempest was right this is like Melrose, but with a huge helping of Young and the Restless, and Acess Hollywood. Oh...omg.
Ya know, I was going to have Scott find out about Jean before she found out about him, so fantasitc job with that.
I am such a huge fan of yours so working parallel with you, even blindly, is a total fun ride.
I'm going to have to read this a few more times before I can update again. What a cliffy...
My heart is still racing and in my throat. This was just uber!
[Report This]Date: 08-20-06 - 04:40 am Title: Cutting the Fat is Harder than it Looks
That's great. Sara and Callisto as troublemaking spies. Great cliffhanger. And I love the back story for Logan's career with helicopters. I almost pictured him as a paramedic doing ambulance air transports, but this was just as good. Madelyne Pryor as Jean's less manic but equally bitchy twin? Love that. We could get some mileage out of that.
Ororo with FRECKLES! Ingenious. Fresh angle. She almost never has freckles in any story I have ever read. The thought occurred to me that I don't think we've even established what kind of hair Ororo has...now I have to look back at the chapters. Ororo with airsickness is new, too. Claustrophobia? Definitely. I love your creativity, kid.
Author's Response: Yea I thought the freckles would be kawaii. I always thought that once a plane was in the air Ro wouldn't have problems, but the pressure from take off would not mix so well. There are a ton of things that the minor and supporting characters to do. I'm working on alot of stuff. I know you're gonna knock it out of the stratosphere again
[Report This]Date: 08-19-06 - 11:24 pm Title: That’s the Joint, That’s the Jam
Once again, reading this story is so much fun. I fangirled at the mention of the Last Dragon, and the use of the nickname Anna Bananna (ha! that's what I call one of my personal friends). This story is like watching a tabloid come to life--Melrose Place set in the X-Verse. I'm muchly amused.
Author's Response: Reiko came up with the basic plot. I wanted to add tabloid bits and pieces, because most good "celebrity" pulp books and romances I have read usually have a hearty dose. I read a book called "Mr. Maybe" by Jane Green that was really funny and had a lot of name-dropping in it and tabloid incidents that made me laugh my butt off. Read it if you haven't. The Last Dragon...the best worst movie I have ever seen, with the exception of Never Too Young to Die with Vanity, John Stamos, and Gene Simmons. I was hoping someone would remember the Last Dragon.
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