I read this earlier this morning and had to come back to review. It is well worth the time to do so, you wrote both characters so emotionally open. I really liked it. A A

Good story and good chapter. ;)

When the opening line read "The next morning was weird as crap," that hooked me into reading the rest of the chapter very happily! This story is warm and cute and makes me smile. Nice dialogue between the leads. Logan is written in character. Good job.

Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I wasn't really sure if Logan was in character or not, I haven't seen any of the movies or cartoons in ages, and I've only read one of the comics (I'm trying to locate more), so I was just hoping that his behavior at least slightly resembled the Logan in the movies and etc. I'm glad you liked it!