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Reviewer: W6C Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-10-07 - 04:28 pm Title: First Recruit

First chapter is wonderful, Reikko! I love the Evo cartoon also and have a soft spot for fics in that style. The postman, Patrick, was a wonderfully original way to begin your story. The characters are likeable and believable. Well done! I'm movin' on now... Ch. 2... Nice job!

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 04:18 pm Title: First Recruit

Wow, I'm impressed with this story. What a great set up. I really liked the part about his dad and wife being psychic. HA.

Onward,
Rolletti

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-19-06 - 02:48 am Title: First Recruit

This seems quirky in a weird way and i like quirky..look forward to chapter 2

Author's Response: Chapter 2 is comming straigt up. Thanks for the review. I hope I can capture the spirit of evo and capture the characters.

Reviewer: vaberella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-18-06 - 05:39 pm Title: First Recruit

You pulled me out of lurking. I really have to jump back on the bandwagon reviewing, all the authors here deserve it. Okay, I really like where this is going, I really want to wait until the next chapter to understand who the first recruit was, but I like the fact that Patrick may be coming in contact with mutants other than Charles, and that's pretty awesome to see. It shows that they've been 'among' us non-mutants for a long period of time and not a new evolution of man, which is always interesting to see.

Anyway great post...and I can't wait for more.

VB

Author's Response: Hi there!!! It's nice to see you. I'm glad this caught your eye. As for the first recruit, well...that's left open for the reader to decide. Because I have this taking place in an evolution style timeline, I want to make the mutant situation realalistic. People will come in humans and mutants, humans and the x-men, x-men with other regular average muntants. All that good stuff. Thanks for the review. You'll see more soon.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-18-06 - 12:23 pm Title: First Recruit

Cool. I can see this as an EVO fic. I like the idea of the mail carrier doing some of the opening narrative.

Author's Response: Yea I looooved evo. I wanted to see more of it, something like a prequel. I wanted to see Ororo being recruited and I wanted to see her recruit Cyke and Jean, and now I will :D Viva la fanfic! Oh yeah, Pat is my first attempt at a reacurring OC. So bear with me...

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