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Reviewer: sunnyDaze Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-15-14 - 05:44 pm Title: No Man's Land

This story was fantastic! Brava! Just stunning. I hope you are still writing. Thank you for this.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 07:01 am Title: No Man's Land

what a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. ro and lo are just made for each other no matter what and they know it. i love the hell that jean and tro have built together hope they bask in it for an enternity

Author's Response: oh, they willllllll....wahahahahaaaa. (cue flames and screams) Well, more or less. They will realize that the grass was only greener on the other side because it was growing over the septic tank, like Erma Bombeck once said. (I love Erma) Neither of them will be happy with each other. Thank you for the review, chyti, it made me smile!

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-04-07 - 11:33 pm Title: No Man's Land

This is a great story. You are a great author.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm flattered. You craft a great story yourself! I appreciate the visit.

Reviewer: Pandora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-07 - 04:22 pm Title: No Man's Land

This story is my RoLo crack! I haunt this board to get my fix. You have done such an excellent job. Just on principle alone I dislike Jean, so of course I am tickled that not only is she the red-panty girl, but That Ro found out and clocked her ass!

Author's Response: RoLo crack...that's hysterical! Thank you. I get my fix from this site, too. So many great authors, so many neat stories, and so many interpretations of these characters to be enjoyed. Yeah, the red panties under the bed, those were random. I thought "who among Ororo's friends would wear red panties?" The conflict needed to hit close to home when I thought about where I wanted the story to go, and it became more relevant to me when "I have a perfect man, perfect relationship, perfect home" Jean extended her reach too far. Ororo knocking Jean upside her face was a scene that I visualized as soon as Ororo found the underwear! Thanks for reading and reviewing, it made my day.

Reviewer: Davalyn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-06 - 02:35 am Title: No Man's Land

So I printed this story out so I could read it on the train and I absolutely adore the idea of this story. It's amazing. And Logan's character is just too swoon worthy for me. And I love the girls. Love it!

Author's Response: Logan will step up, I promise. I love alternate verse fics with these characters, which is of course why I love Animals (hint, hint...more???). The girls will make appearances throughout this story. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-06 - 07:34 pm Title: No Man's Land

Oohhhhhh *drools* That was soooo goooood!
I was expecting Logan to be the stripper at first and wasn't sure if I was actually looking forward to that LOL I just couldn't imagine him like that. So I was relieved when it turned out to be Remy :) Logan the chaperone, that was perfect! No wonder Ro was sort of fascinated by him and felt like dying when he gave her that smile. OMG! *fans herself*


Author's Response: It's funny. The consensus for everyone has been that they thought Logan was the stripper at first! But no, I could not picture him that way either, even with my overactive imagination. I see Lo as the strong, silent, growling type. Yup, she will be VERY fascinated by him as time goes by.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-06 - 09:01 am Title: No Man's Land

this is so much fun and memory inducing. is Ro gonna sneak around with logan i kinda want her to stay with Pietro for awhile longer until things with logan becomes more solid

Author's Response: That's very likely to happen. She won't just break up with Pietro overnight. She's had five years with him, so a breakup won't be something she does lightly.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-19-06 - 06:29 am Title: No Man's Land

please update soon and does Ro get a private dance from Logan in this fic. Remy as a stripper i sure can picture that

Author's Response: I don't know about private dance, but she will get some face time with him eventually, if he doesn't tick her off too much.

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-19-06 - 12:57 am Title: No Man's Land

Remy as a stripper... I would definetly pay to see that *drools*!!!

More!

Soon!

PLEASE!

Author's Response: More! Eventually! Promise! (really, I do). Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-17-06 - 03:18 pm Title: No Man's Land

1. no claws and lightning bolts? darn it! well what about tornadoes and enhanced five senses?
2. Remy as a stripper? Is he for hire? lol
3. I love your AU...they are always so original and full of life. So glad your writing another one
4. looking forward to the rolo getting to know each other.

Author's Response: 1. This is AU. Any claws will be the plastic ones you get at the costume shop! That actually might be fun... 2. I want him at my birthday party!!! 3. Thanks for the encouragement, I love getting your feedback. It is always useful and funny! 4. me too. Depends on what they tell me about themselves and each other.

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-06 - 09:23 pm Title: No Man's Land

AHHH! I'm excited. Update soon!

Author's Response: I will. This is a story that has been wanting to write itself for a while, silliness and all.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-16-06 - 12:57 am Title: No Man's Land

Now this is very, very intriguing. Logan and Remy strippers! Sexy and unexpected. But you know as much as I love RoLo I really like Pietro with Ro too so I think I'm really going to enjoy this a lot.

Author's Response: I like Pietro too, but he obviously won't be Ororo's one and only for the purpose of thiss tory.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-06 - 11:07 am Title: No Man's Land

OMG! I laughed through this entire chapter! The best thing about your stories are the details. You pay so much attention to them. Who thinks to put a loaf of Hawaiian bread(which I love, BTW) into their fics? Loved the naughtiness. Loved the relationship b/t Ororo and her friends.

For a minute there, I thought Logan was gonna be the stripper. I'm glad he wasn't. Remy was the perfect choice. I was so tickled when Marie had her turn to take a body shot. LOL! I can't wait to read Logan's thoughts on 'Ro.

Loved this!

Author's Response: Now see, I like it when people enjoy the details. THose usually come from impressions I have about things as I take them in. I'm a people watcher at heart, and I pay attention to my surroundings. That's just me. I couldn't make Logan a stripper. It's just not him, to me. Gambit, though, sure. Maybe even more characters, like Bobby, or Roberto, or some of the younger, sillier X-characters, but Logan I can only picture as a bouncer. Yes, we will hear Logan's thoughts on 'Ro soon. I promise!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-15-06 - 07:06 am Title: No Man's Land

Where do I begin? I know!

TRO/RO!!!! *le SQUEeeeeeeeeeee* Ok, Reiko, breathe in breathe out. OmG I just totally fangirled. Tro/Ro is my second Rolo. Did that make any sense? I remember you said once that you didn't know alot about Peitro. Well you nailed him. He was likable, adorable, nefarious, and a jerk. He totally put my Tro to shame! :D I loved how he was all speedy after he got his. Once again you've proved you are a genious.

Naughty Jello shots! Naughtyy cookies!! Was there nauty ice cubes too? If there was it coulda been a scene out of thanksgiving at my college.

Everybody was brilliant. Loved Anna, Ro, Jean, Remy, Lo, Betsy, Lorna, Ali....

Pure undiluted awsomeness!

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. I love Evo Pietro, he was fun. I never really read much of comic Pietro. He and 'Ro make a very sleek, hot couple, in my opinion, from other fanfics I have read (including yours, so good on you for swaying me toward that couple). Genius? Flatterer! And yes, the naughty menu I have sampled at many a bachelorette. Totally been there, done that, got the shirt! Talk to you soon.

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