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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-06 - 08:27 pm Title: Trippin’

I'm glad I don't feel sick myself right now LOL Reading about drunken girls wouldn't be such a good idea otherwise... *ugh* ;)
MMMMhh, you found a way to bring Vic into this :D Short scene but he's still so droolworthy, heh *drools* Can't help it, I love the big hunk :)
Pietro's "nearly hairless" body made me "eeeek" LOL *shudders* So not my type :D I need me some hair, mmmhh...
Sooooo, Logan's thinking about her,eh... I wonder when and how and where they'll meet again.

Author's Response: They will meet again! In a couple of the least likely of places. 'Tro I can't picture as having a lot of body hair, I see him as being sculpted and smooth for some reason, maybe with a cute little happy trail and a sprinkling of hair on his legs, but not much more. The contrast between him and Logan needed to be evident for me, I don't know why. Vic was fun. I have met guys like that in college, at bars, and in menial labor-type jobs I have held. Braying, macho, and occasionally right on point is what I was going for with him. Glad you liked him.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-29-06 - 11:06 pm Title: Trippin’

You write with such detail it's as if the reader's there in every scene, just excellent! Now, I love Storm with Pietro, ever since AoA, but of course I want her with Logan but this is so good the way it is that I'm a little torn. Pietro or Logan? It's going to be one heck of a wild ride this story of yours but 'm sure it's going to be all kinds of fun! Superbly done!

Author's Response: "Wild ride" is what I was going for. Glad you enjoy the detail, sometimes I beat people over the head with it, but that is what stands out with me when I go about my day. I take in details. Pietro isn't a bad guy, but he might not be the guy for 'Ro. That is what we will gradually find in this fic. Gradually, mind you. Not yet!!!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-27-06 - 01:44 pm Title: Trippin’

1. The beginning of this chapter reminded me of prom but with a lot less alcohol and going to Denny's afterward and being rowdy from 'cutting a rug'
2. The name Endymion...brought back my Sailor Moon days...man I thought he was so hot lol
3. I find myself liking 'Ro and Pietro...i want them to make it work. Stop writing them so relatable lol
4. Nothing beats the Cha Cha remix!
5. Can't wait till they meet :)

Author's Response: 1. I never got to get drunk at my prom...I made up for that in college. Tripping up and down stairs, mirror checks, and adjusting wardrobe malfunctions were par for the course. 2. I actually snagged that name and that myth from Selene's husband in Greek mythology, he was granted eternal sleep to stay youthful and desirable. 3. Sigh...I like Trororo, too, but it ain't meant to be. 4. Yeah, the Cha-Cha slide is fabu. 5. Me, too!

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-25-06 - 01:58 am Title: Trippin’

LOVE THIS!!! Tro is such a bastard. I can't wait to see more of him. Does he really care about Ro is there more to him or is he really the selfish prick he appears to be.

I can't wait for another awkard meeting of grumpy Logan and Ro.

MORE MORE MORE!!!

Author's Response: 'Tro cares about 'Ro, and they have been together a few years...but sometimes waiting too long for a proposal doesn't work out. There is a hint of selfishness in him, yes. We'll explore that soon. Yeah, I will develop grumpy Logan too, particularly uncovering the source of his grumpiness.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-06 - 11:45 pm Title: Trippin’

“I love you, ‘Ro! You’re my sister. You’re a lifelong friend. I always want you in my corner.” That line made me laugh out loud. Gotta love those late night drunk heart-to-hearts.

Great update!


Author's Response: That was SO out of every drunken night out I have ever had, whenever any of my friends get the staggering attack of melancholy, especially after a bridal shower. Never fails. Guys never do that s**t... they just party and talk about sports. When are we gonna get some stories from you?

Reviewer: BrightLady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-06 - 02:35 pm Title: Trippin’

Wow. This gets better. Loved the drunken conversations b/t the friends. Reminds me of times when my friends and I headed home from frat parties and binged on late night meals at IHOP. Good times. Can Pietro be any more of an ass? Goodness! He got his jollies off and then that was it.

I'm eagerly awaiting the first real meeting b/t RoLo.

Author's Response: IHOP...heck yeah. Greasy spoons' taste better after lots of shots. I was more a club girl than a frat party guest. Yes, we proved that Pietro could be more of an ass! Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed it, kiddo.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-24-06 - 10:42 am Title: Trippin’

Thank God you, Cee darlin', haven't lost your muse!!

Author's Response: Missed you! (waves enthusiastically) Thanks for visiting. My muse has been on vacation to Tahiti, and didn't even bring me back a shirt. My muse is a b****... Don't know where this story will go, but I don't have to know yet. I mainly let the opening write itself.

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