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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-06 - 08:50 pm Title: Six Degrees

Small world indeed. I love how they all seem to be connected to each other somehow - same working place, same gym, same friends... So, where will they meet again, now that he gave her the Daffy Duck band-aid LOL... at the wedding perhaps? Would be nice if she'd go there alone, so Logan had someone to dance with, heh... if he dances that is... and if he decides to go there :)
As for Vic... *rolls eyes* LOL Love him! :D

Author's Response: They will meet at the wedding. Ororo won't quite start out alone. Yeah, they are all connected on some level. The band-aid was silly, I will admit it, but I like to set the stage of Logan kissing her and making it better, starting with the small stuff like that. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 11:41 pm Title: Six Degrees

Excellent chapter! Elsie Dee is one of my favorite characters so it was nice to see her here - fun. The whole kids thing, Luna, Selene's kid! LOL! Good fun. Great dynamics between Vic and Petey too, loved the steroid comment. Really loving Pietro here which makes it so interesting for me. Well done as always.

Author's Response: thank you, darlin. i like the idea of high maintenance stage parents and pageant moms in this. i needed some "background noise" for my plot.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 09:14 pm Title: Six Degrees

1...can you do rolo later? lol this is all your fault! I'm liking Pietro...doesn't seem much of an ass like he did in the first chapter.
2.Never thought Logan in a hospital as inworking there....different
3. Victor was funny lol..jackass
4. Is she pragnant? Is that why she got dizzy for no reason? I bet she is pragnant! although she did say she was on the pill...but that isn't 100%

Author's Response: 1. yes, i will do rolo later, because i also like 'Tro. he will have his assholic moments, though. 2. why not? i figure him to be versatile, and to be able to have a physical job like being an LVN. 3. yeah. gotta love vic. 4. nope, not yet.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 07:14 pm Title: Six Degrees

Loved it! I felt so sorry for Peter. How old was she when she died?

I can't say how much I loved the image of Logan in scrubs... Weird, but I loved it.

I need a 'Ro/Logan moment.

This story reminds me of something I heard awhile ago about how were all only seperated by 5 people. It should really interesting when they all meet for the first time.

Author's Response: Illyana will be a child in this fic, with the occasional flashback. Logan in scrubs appeals to me, he is short, burly, and built, so he will fill them out nicely. Six degrees of separation is just what i was thinking of, since itis a game that people play at parties.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 06:32 pm Title: Six Degrees

ROFL! Well obviously Roro & Girl company will be at Harry's. Wow...it's so weird to imagine Logan in scrubs. I mean...really. That's so cute! Hopefully actual ROLO will come soon!

Author's Response: RoLo will come soon. They have to get to know each other first. now they at least know each other's names. i like the idea of Logan having a real profession.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 03:04 pm Title: Six Degrees

YAY! I loved the glimpse you gave into everyone's backgrounds. I felt so sad for Petey and Logan. It's amazing how they're all connected and don't even know it yet. The part that cracked me up the most was your characterization of Victor. He's so huge and crude. The image of him acting dainty when he talked about the dolls tickled me pink!

I love this story and can't wait to see more of the 'Ro/'Tro relationship. *big grin*

Author's Response: victor is going to be the character you love to hate, or hate to love. yes, he is a big doofus, but he will have some good lines. i hope...

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 05:12 am Title: Six Degrees

LOVED THIS! It's nice to see Tro care. OMG that was so sweet to see him scared for her. Logan's reaction was so cool too. Ro as a pre-diabetic was a nice add too.

It almost looked as if Tro realized that he was a little guilty for not being there...

Loved Peter, Remy, and Sage btw. More more more

Author's Response: thanks, girl. you know i like to write in quirks. i don't like characters to be perfect, so 'Ro having a medical condition was something that spoke to me. my sister has sugar like that. 'Tro cares, but he has to grow up.

Reviewer: cbreezes82 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-05-06 - 03:48 am Title: Six Degrees

Love this story! I can clearly picture everything that's happening in the story. Update again soon!

Author's Response: glad you can picture this. i go for the visual when i write, as well as what the characters tell me in their own words. thanks for visiting.

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