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Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 12:14 pm Title: Awkward

Hi CeeCee, Sorry I haven't left feedback to this story, I've been enjoying it too much. It's copied to my pc so I just read straight through. :)

That Peter is an interesting fellow. He seems very selfish, but most guys are. They're big babies. He's probably a nice guy, he's just with the wrong girl. He needs a girl who will put him in his on a daily basis and wouldn't mind doing it through love. Ororo could be that person but she's not right for him. Right?

Underneathe Logan is waiting to make his move even though he's seen her only a couple of times. YES!

Now on to chapter five.

Rolletti

Author's Response: Hey, I'm just glad you're enjoying it, Rolletti! Pietro is selfish, that's his biggest fault here, and it won't get any better as the story goes along, so be warned. His personality is such that no one woman will have all the qualities he's chasing after, or so he thinks. And yes, Logan has quietly been watching Ororo from the wings. He has issues, but he's nice, I promise. The basic underlying theme of this story is the Logan seemingly started out with nothing, and Ororo seemingly started out with everything, only to lose it. I'm a romance novel addict and I love soaps, so that comes into play in my stories. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-24-06 - 09:12 pm Title: Awkward

Ugh, Pietro is such an ass. Always thinking about himself... Ro doesn't really want to have a ring from that guy?! ... Oh man, I hope she'll come to her senses and just throws him out or something.
I had to smirk at the fast channel flipping though. That's so typical man! Well, mine does that all the time and it unnerves me to no end :)
Harry's, heh - so that's where they'll meet again, right?...

Author's Response: YUP! Ororo is realizing things the hard way. She loved him the first time around, but she's getting an education on how he really is after taking him back. It'll hurt, big time. And the channel flipping, naturally, is straight out of my own house!!!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 11:58 pm Title: Awkward

Tang! For some reason that's so cute to me just imagining Tang in their cupboards. After reading through to the end however, I've learned it must help stave off a diabetic episode, very informative.

You just write so completely, CeeCee taking us into these characters life as if we're flies on the wall. Your knowledge of everything you write is excellent as if you've lived it or either you've superb research skills. Another great chapter and nothing but admiration for your skills.

Author's Response: my pops used to drink it when his sugar got low, he is type one diabetic, like 'Ro's dad in this. my mom said once he had an attack while he was mixing his Tang, and kept slopping the juice out of the cup. thank you for the vote of confidence and lavish praise. it means a lot coming from you.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 08:12 pm Title: Awkward

1. I was hoping she was pregnant...*sigh*
2. still don't want rolo lol
3.Pietro is a jackass!
4. Five year and no ring? hell no...she better get to walkin...she is wasting all of her youth on him...
5.I'm still hoping that Pietro will step up....

Author's Response: 1. nah. not yet. 2. i kinda do, but not yet. 3. yes, he is. i like him that way. 4. yes, she will learn that soon... 5. he might, but not for 'Ro.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 06:59 pm Title: Awkward

Wow...if was Roro i would've left Pietro a lng time ago. He sounds like a college student, and like he's cheating on her. Get on with next update! I want the ROLO!

Author's Response: he is acting like that, yes. but that is fine. makes the buildup worth building up to. should be interesting, i hope.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 03:24 am Title: Awkward

I'm worried,why was Tro late that day? *Inhales* Uh oh... I love Eric, omg. He's the ideal father-in-law-ish guy.

Author's Response: Eric will be riding Pietro's butt in this story, like he does in the books. They are at odds.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 01:06 am Title: Awkward

Pietro is a jerk! He's really got that its all about me thing down pat and the only time he wasn't like that was when Ororo sugar went low.

I know she loves him and all and I know she's just not going to be able to turn that off over night, but she seriously needs to realize that this relationship isn't going anywhere.

We're off to Harry's.

Author's Response: she knows it. she just has to act on it. i love these two, though, even as individual characters.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-06-06 - 12:37 am Title: Awkward

Wow... 'Tro's insensitivity knows no bounds does it? I just kept reading it thinking, "He can be a real jerk!" I love how you make the reference to his mutation with his abruptness in this fic. He's always so quick w/ everything. Poor 'Ro. Does she ever "finish" when they have sex? Maybe a grumpy radiology tech can help her w/ that. *wiggles eyebrows*

I'll wait as patiently as I can for the next update!



Author's Response: His abruptness will be an obstacle for them. He is "fast" in terms of getting in her good graces early on in the relationship, but he will be slow to commic. Ironic, eh? She finishes sometimes, but that will be her clue that things are not on the up and up. *wiggles eyebrows back*

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