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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-07 - 10:05 am Title: Cold Feet!

I didn't realize I didn't review this when I read it. Lovely ending!

Author's Response: Hey, D! Thanks for the review, and for jumping back into this mess of a story I'm scribbling, I know it's more twisted than a box of spiraled noodles, but for me, that's typical.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-11-06 - 03:49 pm Title: Cold Feet!

What a lousy timing to find out your guy has been cheating on you. And that too in your own house and bed! But I'm glad she did find out and broke off with him. And Logan - mmmhhh :) They keep running into each other, heh.
Gonna read the next chaps soon. I got some time today, weee! Can't wait...
Oh yeah, Logan ironing his dress shirt - that's soooo sexy! :D

Author's Response: I see him as the kinda guy who came to have domestic skills by trial and error, and through heartbreak. Gotta love that Logan...whoo-hoo! He has a way of popping up everywhere...hmmmmmmm...

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 07:31 am Title: Cold Feet!

Let me get this straight...

1. Ro hasn't gotten off in months because Biscotti Boy is a selfish prick 2. Asshole is cheating on Ro in their house and left some skanky woman's thong under the bed...

And then he's got the nerve to be upset because Ro was dancing with Logan? Unfuckinbelievable!

I bet he wishes he kept his mouth shut. I only hope Ro doesn't forgive him ths time. Its time for Biscotti Boy to kick rocks.

Logan dressed in a charcoal colored suit...I'm loving the visual.

Author's Response: 1. Actually, he was cheating on Ororo in HER house! (don't hit me....whimpers) 2. yeah, the thong was skanky. I loved the visual of Ororo shaking it in his face, originally she was going to literally rub his nose in it, like a dog that made a mess. But they were at a wedding. She had a lot of dignity. Yes, Biscotti Boy, we hardly knew ye...and yeah, Logan, in my mind, looked foooooiiiiiinnnn in that suit. I love a buff, beefy man in a suit. Mmmmm.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-30-06 - 03:57 am Title: Cold Feet!

1. tro didn't get enough....
2. Jean is so so vain! But i'll let it slide today...its her world everyone else is just lucky enough to grace it.
3. Logan...glad to see him back...he needs to show 'tro the claws lol
4. poor Roro...i liked her reaction...at first i feared she was ruin her best friends wedding..was she maid of honor?
5. So ready for rolo..Pietro can kiss my ass! And i hope he burns and tries in vain to get her back only to realize its too late

Author's Response: 1. yeah...hmmph. 2. yeah...hmmph again, that Jean. It will come back to bite her. 3. he will! he will! 4. yes, she was the maid of honor. she was determined not to ruin it. 5. yes, yes, yes!!!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-06 - 05:13 pm Title: Cold Feet!

Damn! That was AWSOME! Can't wait for MORE ROLO!

Author's Response: ...have you read chapter seven??? Go ahead, I dare you!!!

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-06 - 04:33 am Title: Cold Feet!

I love the visual I get from your description of Logan all dressed up *fans herself*. I feel soooo bad for Ro. Not only did she discover her man is a lousy bum, she had to find out on her best friend's wedding day which in itself is a very emotional day for everyone involved!

Anyhoo, thanks for passing the pipe ;) *waits for the next hit*

Author's Response: *coughs and falls over* Here, take a toke!!! (grins) And here is the next hit, just uploaded chapter seven. My intent was to turn Ororo's world on its ear so she won't continue to settle for the illusion of happiness with 'Tro. Hope I succeeded!

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-28-06 - 02:16 am Title: Cold Feet!

More! More! I love it!

Author's Response: Goodie! Thank you, thank you!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-27-06 - 08:37 pm Title: Cold Feet!

I flove Ororo and Logan! That was such a Knight in Shining Armor moment and I loved every minute of it! I was really hoping 'Ro slapped Pietro a few times, but I'll just leave that to my imagination. It's funny that Scott noticed something was bothering 'Ro, but Jean didn't.

Can't wait to see what 'Ro's friends have to say about Pietro's infidelity? And is Emma the hussy with the tacky thong? I wonder...Great update!

Author's Response: I love Ororo and Logan too. I can see him coming to her rescue more than once, and growing to care about her in the process. Yes, she could have slapped him, but showing him that she knows what a player he is was good enough for me. Jean is still absorbed in the glow of her wedding and all of the trappings that go with being a newlywed. She'll get an education, too, on being a better friend. Hint...Emma ain't the hussy.

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