[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:06 am Title: Sit Tight
O.o NC-17! My oh my. I so should not have read this! ;D
Author's Response: oops...did I forget my warning? I did, however, try to tone it down a wee bit from my standard smut and not make it an overly detailed gropefest. It was hard, though, since I had been building up to it for a while. Pietro's love scenes with Ororo were briefer and less intensive, with more "suggestive" text because I wanted to downplay their intimacy, especially since things were rocky between them. With Logan and Ororo, though, my imagination cut loose, and I let everything hang out. Oh, well. I promise there will be more meaningful goings on than the whoopee in this story.
[Report This]Date: 12-11-06 - 08:23 pm Title: Sit Tight
Mmmmh, that was sooooo good :) Exactly what both of them needed. Exactly what I needed to read LOL :D I was hoping for something like this by the end of last chapter, but was afraid that something/someone might get in their way... Good thing it didn't :D Mmhhh, yum. Can't wait to see where they go from here.
Author's Response: You know me...I'm greedy about love scenes, half the time they consume most of the chapter that I insert them into, it's bad. I'm hopeless. Glad you enjoyed it, Steph!!!
[Report This]Date: 11-30-06 - 07:48 am Title: Sit Tight
just wanted to let you know that i definitely make time to read this fic. it's so much fun but has enough serious moments to keep it realistic. i gotta say, i was really waiting for ro to slug pietro. or hey! maybe, in the future, wolvie and tro could have a DUEL! ahem. keep up the good work, cee!
Author's Response: a duel?! shoot, don't put it past me! maybe not in this fic, but it sure sounds fun. maybe in a future story, more of a oneupmanship thing. i like the idea of two alpha males having a pissing contest in a story, over a girl or not. thanks for reading, Charmer!!
[Report This]Date: 11-30-06 - 07:32 am Title: Sit Tight
Pity sex, rebound sex, its all sex to me. lol Seriously though, I loved this chapter. My absolute favorite parts were when she told him he hadn't kissed her knee yet hen he did and when she told him that he didn't have to wait and he said "yer comin' with me"...*sighs*
Beautiful.
Author's Response: *heeheehee* thank you (blushes) She was teasing him and only half-meant it. But he delivered! That was actually quieter than most scenes I have written. I've been leaning away from sound effects ever since a review I got for Never Been, and surprisingly, I don't miss them. Much...
[Report This]Date: 11-30-06 - 07:08 am Title: Sit Tight
after what ro has been through i am glad that she is getting some good loving and attention. lo is the man in my book
Author's Response: yes, yes, yes. Logan is the man!!! Pietro was the guy who always said "don't get too close." Logan will jump in and snap her up, and won't let her get away. He's greedy, too!!!
[Report This]Date: 11-30-06 - 05:04 am Title: Sit Tight
1) I almost died laughing when you said Logan could hang a hat off his erection...that got my attention lol
2) this chapter was the best! I loved the simplicity of it, loved how Ro apologize to Logan for 'using' him
3) that was SO sad! When she told him he didn't have to wait for him...my heart just dropped.
4) I can't believe how much of a bastard Pietro was......
5) Go LOGAN! I've SO come off my Pietro/Ro ship...
Author's Response: 1. hey, the guy was hoping for a chance to be close to her all day long! 2. i wanted Ororo to get to the point, and not mince words. she's just lost her "placeholder" man that she's been settling for going on five years. Logan "rescued" her. That doesn't come without having to explain yourself later. 3. Logan would wait for Ororo, any length of time, if she treats him right in return. He needs that. He will in subsequent chapters. 4. Believe it. He always had that potential. Ororo is one of only, let's say, three people who have seen his good side in this story. That is a hint. 5. Yes. It was time for RoLo.
[Report This]Date: 11-29-06 - 10:34 pm Title: Sit Tight
**wipes fogged up monitor**
Wow.
Yeah.
Wow.
If I was a guy, I could hang a hat too.
Author's Response: He's half crazy about her already; he will suffer more...ahem...discomfort soon. I still laugh about Reiko's "redwood" from Aint No Business! Best euphemism for "got wood" so far!!! I've been trying to make my love scenes less clinical and read less like porn, but once you get started with the old "I can't move my legs" climaxes and other gritty details, it's hard to turn it off. My muses are dirty, DIRTY people!
[Report This]Date: 11-29-06 - 09:43 pm Title: Sit Tight
Ay, muy caliente! I can't wait to see what else you have planned for these two?
Author's Response: Trouble. Lots of it. More steam, definitely love, but they will have to work hard for it. Thanks for reading, N'Dare D.
[Report This]Date: 11-29-06 - 07:28 pm Title: Sit Tight
Read it...HOT!!! And MORE Rolo, in any way you see fit.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed hearing my muses murmur that scene in my ear. Particularly the scene with the Band-Aid, and her telling him to take his time with her. Ironic, since they hopped right into bed, but hey, you know me. Queen of One Night Stands in fanfic!!! I'm bad about that. I just like these two together.
[Report This]Date: 11-29-06 - 12:54 pm Title: Sit Tight
i like the last scene but was a little confused.Right before he backed away from her because she was on the rebound then they are in bed - just a little fast for me. I am interested dinn how they deal with it in the morning. Ororo still has to deal with Pietro and I don't get the feeling that he is going to be an easy guy to get away from.
Author's Response: That is fine. Confusion just challenges me to work harder on the next installment. I have a bad, BAD habit of rushing a love scene for love scene's sake. I could have had these two wrangle with each other's hangups a little longer, but I wanted to see how they handled the repercussions after giving in to their physical needs. And you are right, Pietro will be a hard guy to get away from. The morning after will be both joyous and ugly, and offer a different confusion. I had Ororo and logan hop into the sack early on in Rubbing Me the Wrong Way, too, but let's face it, sometimes people are impulsive. Booty call one moment, psycho person tossing your laundry out the door the next...sigh. Thanks for reviewing, Mercy.
[Report This]Date: 11-28-06 - 06:06 pm Title: Sit Tight
I really liked how you showed Logan's sensitivity to Ororo's needs. The end of the chapter was about more than sex. It showed that there is someone out there that will value Ororo and won't take her for granted.
Author's Response: Well, yeah. That was what I wanted. I think that is what we all want, someone to value us, and for the reasons why to be clear. Logan will ponder that a little soon. He wants someone who will value him, too. He has a past...hint, hint.
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