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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-07 - 10:15 am Title: No More Words

Oh no he didn’t! That’s a serious bad breakup. I love it when Marvel characters are used like Jennifer as the lawyer. And Logan, he was like a knight in shining armor. You made this so real somehow. An excellent chapter that for some reason had me tearing up.

Author's Response: oh yes he did!!! I threw in a lot of minor characters from Marvel, albeit veiled. Crystal, Santo, Jennifer, Mary...I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm still grinning over African Skies.

Reviewer: Wylong06 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-07 - 01:47 am Title: No More Words

i seriously love this story! haha myspace, that cracks me up. keep it coming!

Author's Response: ...I had to sneak that in there, so sue me! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 03:14 am Title: No More Words

1. I'm a little put out about him getting with Sage..
2. I *so* don't want to read about him getting with Sage
3. I hate them both! lol...are you sensing that i don't like them so much?
4. rolo smut was hot (when isn't it?) and i loved how protective he got when he saw the bump on her head.
5. Logan saying he didn't want to give them(the police) a free show had me laughing all over myself

Author's Response: 1) awwww, I like Sage and Piotr! Sage never gets to have anyone, in any fic! 2) ok...I gotcha. 3) well...what the heck, I had a clue...it'll be Piotr and Kitty in the next one, 'kay? 4) Logan will be more protective of her as time moves on. 5) So sue me. I like Logan. He's neat sometimes. I like giving him silly lines.

Reviewer: Noir_Libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-23-06 - 05:59 am Title: No More Words

I can't believe Pietro trashed the picture of her parents. That messed up. I can't wait until he gets his.

'Til the cops come knocking...I love that song by Maxwell. Logan is going to be so pissed when 'Ro tells him what he did.

Poor Sage. Its never easy working up the nerve to ask a guy out. And then to have him reject you too (even if it was politely)? Must be awful.

I need 'Tro's beating

Author's Response: The scene with Sage came from something my mom told me, a quote from a Bill Cosby skit: "The only thing longer than the walk across the room to ask a girl to dance is the walk back when she says no." I need 'Tro's beating, too. Maybe not broken teeth, but definitely a beatdown.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-06 - 12:31 pm Title: No More Words

Wheee! Pietro is so dead. ICU at least.

Go you. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Wish I could slap my muses into shape. Yeah. Pietro is gonna regret acting the mule with 'Ro.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-22-06 - 03:50 am Title: No More Words

i love this story. so what if it has its moments of smut. i love the fact that she delt with Pietro on her own. something tells me however, that it may not be over quite yet. can't wait to read logan hitting the proverbial roof.

Author's Response: It ain't over!!! Not by a long shot. She will have those moments of trying to deal with him on her own, but let's remember everyone in her circle of acquaintances knows 'Tro, so he will be hard to shake.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 11:55 pm Title: No More Words

Does Logan really want the answer to that question? I can't wait to read his reaction to what Pietro did! Speaking of 'Tro, he's an asshole. Seriously. Petey and Sage should stop being afraid and take a chance. They'll never know if a relationship would work if they don't try.

Author's Response: Well, of course they won't know if they don't. You coulda kinda hear Petey mentally kicking himself as soon as he saw her leave in a rush. He will wise up soon, I promise. Logan's already miffed about the fading goose egg on her forehead, so he will file that away with every other reason that he as so far to kick Pietro's ass.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 05:16 pm Title: No More Words

I cannot believe you had 3 quarters of this chapter filled with Sage and Piotr after the last chapter! I mean this is the ROLO realm you know....Loved this chapter! I can't wait for more ROLO closeness! Loved the Sage and Peter too...but both of them are so sad about their decisions...I hope you get them back together. And keep Jean away a little longer (it's been like a week from the wedding it's honeymoon). Logan & Roro need to get to know each other a little better before she starts messing things up...

Author's Response: How'd you know she would start messing things up???? Yes, I'm transparent. She will be a big, flapping, twitching, buzzing fly in the RoLo ointment. I like Sage and Piotr, yes, I know what Realm this is, and they will show up again in subsequent chapters. I just like them too much.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 04:31 pm Title: No More Words

Smutty! Gotta love it. I don't think I've ever read a fic that had a love scene that made me think, "damn...they are so going to have to spackle that wall when they get the chance." But I just did.

Peitro is an asshole. If he had broken my sentimental stuff after he had a slew of affiars, I would so set his lawn on fire. THAT PUNK!

And, omigod, you said Hope Diggin Potatoes!! Love that phrase.

More more more!

Author's Response: Again, we have my lovely mother to thank for the phrase, and thank the Lord she will never see it copped and quoted in a smutty little fic like this!!! Yeah, spackle...*wahahaha* Pietro will get his, by golly. Oh, yes he will.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 03:04 pm Title: No More Words

Smut is good. Smut is niiiiiice... Mmmmm... Ok, on with the story!

Author's Response: Couldn't turn it off, the power button was stuck...darn it. Ah, well. Wish I could find the story...it's rolling around on the floor with my marbles. I think...

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-21-06 - 01:12 pm Title: No More Words

Mmmm, me likes smut :D The more RoLo the better, heh. Can't get enough of those two.
I enjoyed Piotr and Sage a lot, awkwardness and all. It didn't end that well for them... but who knows :)

Author's Response: Who knows, indeed. *winks* Piotr and Sage I never would have put together in a fic of their own, but the more I filled in their back stories, the more I realized they connected. I love Piotr and Kitty, but Sage needs a boyfriend in fanfic, and she seldomly has one.

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