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Date: 12-16-10 - 03:48 am Title: Word Games

Well Jean is having an awful big "it's all about me" party, isn't she? Why do I feel she is up to something with this house warming?

Author's Response: Because Jean is just "Jean." She's a spoiled brat in this, I will admit. It was convenient for her to want Pietro to stay with Ororo, so she would have the excuse to keep seeing him under the guise of them doing "couples" activities without awkwardness. It would also provide a smokescreen from Scott wondering why Ororo and Pietro broke up. Thanks for your interest in this story. I appreciate the feedback.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-24-07 - 10:28 am Title: Word Games

Whoa! What more can I say? I can't believe I haven't been caught up on this! Whoa.

Author's Response: glad you caught up! C

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-24-07 - 02:59 am Title: Word Games

1. She slept with Tro didn't she? What a harlot! I hope 'Ro kicks her ass.
2.She had to sleep with him...why else would 'Ro notice the wired bra thingy? If that isn't a plot point then i dont know what is!
3. Loved Logan touching her...long live pda
4.Jean is REALLY vain...didn't notice up until this point. She is more hurt over the break up then both of them combined.
5. cant wait till the next chapter...

Author's Response: 1) ...just wait...mwuhahahaHAHAHA. 2) plot? what plot??? 3) yup. I love touchy feely Logan, too. He will still be snarly, growly and kick ass in this, but yes, he's cuddly. 4) She was always a little vain, never more until now. She's a Smug Married, like in Bridget Jones Diary. 5) me too, when i get around to writing the damned thing...thanks, girl.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 05:49 pm Title: Word Games

LOL! Gotta love Roro standing up to Jean. And Jean - little miss perfect - she's so annoying! I loved this chapter! Write more really really soon! Really...Oh and more of Officer Oh-my-god Remy, please!

Author's Response: Remy will pop up again, I promise. Matter of fact, you might remember that Logan only owns a motorcycle. What would happen if Ororo had an incident, and she needed four-wheel transportation to get home? Why, Logan would call the next available person with a car!

Reviewer: noir libra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 05:43 pm Title: Word Games

Poor Ro. I feel sorry for Jean when Ro puts it together that those skanky red panties are hers. They are hers arent they? Scott and Logan are a mess. lol

Author's Response: now see, everyone thought they were Emma's! Not the case. After all, Jean got oodles of lingerie at her bridal shower, didn't she? I like Scott and Logan, too.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 04:29 pm Title: Word Games

Scarlet bra... mmh... I wonder where the matching panties are. *fumes* “I don’t cheat!” - Yeh, maybe not on Scrabble... Damn you, Jean. I wonder when Ro and Scott'll find out.
Gawd, Jean and her perfect little universe she already planned out in detail for herself. Gah! These people tend to get on my nerves. Always wanting to be the middle of everything, ugh.
Logan and Ro are so comfortable around each other, I love it. They're good for each other, making each other happy. What's Jean's problem, sheesh. *rolls eyes* “He’s awfully hairy.” Hell YES!!! *drools*

Author's Response: Thought someone would catch on to that line of Jean's...thanks! Jean has always had it pretty easy up until now. The dynamic changed after her bachelorette, albeit subtly. She had already lost touch with Ororo's feelings and level of trust by the reception, Ororo was already on her guard without knowing why. Logan has baggage, he will disclose what it is soon.

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 09:00 am Title: Word Games

Oooh. Stiffy Jean. That's new. It's usually a stiffy Scott.

Matter of fact, I like this Scott. He's fun. As for Logan, he's classic.

Brilliant descriptions, mate.

Author's Response: Normally I hate Scott in the comics, but I liked him in the movie, even if he was a wuss. He had one or two good lines in each, but just was not a strong character. I like stories that redeem him a little. Glad youlike the descriptions. I tend to beat them to death, but I like the image in my head to come across in the story. I have met people like these...

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 05:11 am Title: Word Games

Is this story REALLY completed? Did I miss something?

Author's Response: no. i rolled it into archive, i just have to take off that indicator. i hadn't planned on updating this for a month or two, since I hit some stress in real life. i didn't want people to wait for it if I could not deliver.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 03:53 am Title: Word Games

I'm so happy to see an update for this story! I missed it. And OMG! Jean... I can't wait until Ororo figures out the truth.

Author's Response: Ain't Jean the shit? She'll have some comeuppance coming her way in spades. The dust is still settling in the aftermath of Ororo breaking up with 'Tro. Her being WITH him was Jean's safety net before now.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 03:39 am Title: Word Games

OMIGOD!!!!!!! I HAD A SPORTSFANGASM! LOGAN IS AN EAGLES FAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FLY EAGLES FLYYYYYYYY ON THE ROAD TO VICTORY. E-A-G-L-E-S EAGLES!!!!!!

Oh wait, dammit. The dream is dead.

People who kick ass with "q" words anger me. Damn them and their ability to remember that useless section of the tionary. (The dic belongs elsewhere.)

Jean is obessive compulsive. Aw poo, I was gonna write about a OCD X-character too, and ya beat me to it. Aw shucks.

I love the realism. Bryan Singer wished he could bring something like this to life, that little egotistical self righteous bland boring pretentious ( I know it's redundant, but I can't help it. It's so true.) know it all little *grumble gumble*...

Ne waze. You said cock-whipped. My face hurts from the grin. Everytime that manages its way into a fic I get grinny. So, I still love this like cheap car insurance in Jersey. More please. Remember we wuv ya too.

Author's Response: The dream ain't dead, merely deferred..and yes, I had you in mind when I made Logan an Eagles fan. I love seeing people score a Q word, since it happens so rarely. Logan's blue collar, but he is sharp as a tack, I want that to show. I love the word cock-whipped. It sounds funny when you say it out loud and automaticallymakes people do spit-takes with their drink. Thanks for reading. Go ahead and write OCD Jean, you know what she's like, I bet it would rock....particularly in one of the stories you have already started!

Reviewer: malefiscen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-22-07 - 03:13 am Title: Word Games

ok jean slept with pietro so how long til ro (and scott and logan) finds out?

Author's Response: Not too long. They won't be that cozy of a foursome, because 1) Logan still has business with Pietro, which might affect what he has with Ororo, and 2) Pietro was already pretty open with the fact that there was more than one woman in his life, to the tune of several. Another one is coming back to bite him in the butt, and it will rock Ororo's world. Scott finding out won't be as important as Ororo finding out EVERYTHING.

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