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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 06:25 pm Title: Off-Beat

Taking a break from painting *is exhausted*
Whee, Petey and Sage! Finally! Okay, it certainly didn't turn out like Peter had planned it but it still was a great first date sort of thing :)
Yay, the campfire song song! I better make an anti sea-bear circle to sit in... LOL :D
OMG, I love your Vic!I always had a thing for him, heh. Especially if he's written right. He's such a riot here, I love it!

Author's Response: Have to be careful about those sea rhinos, too...I'm grinning here. Glad you liked Vic, he reminds me of my husband and his friends when they get together and have a few beers, even though I was initially inspired by the comicverse Vic. Thanks for the review, Steph.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 02:01 am Title: Off-Beat

I was so happy to see you'd updated when I logged on. Now, things I loved - going to see a Hugh Jackman movie - hah! your Victor, he's a riot; Piotr is a dream; your characters are such real people; everything!

Author's Response: I'll always love your Victor from Dreamin of a Day, so I bow to the master! Glad you were feeling the characters. Piotr is someone who has been through a lot, and the thought occurred to me that Sage had been too, in her own way. Glad you got to read this one, D!

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 01:35 am Title: Off-Beat

1. Could Logan be any more awesome?
2. yay for Piotr and Sage.
3. Jean...grrr.
4. I really liked Victor; he is funny as hell.

Author's Response: 1. what the hey, I like him...2

Author's Response: ...my response got cut off, my husband chased me off the PC. 2. I like those two, they just kind of snuck up on me when I was planning my characters for this story. They seemed compatible, so thank you. 3. Yeah. She gets hers. 4. Vic was meant to be comic relief and an occasional antagonist to stir things up every now and again. Glad you liked him.

Reviewer: Pandora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-07 - 09:11 pm Title: Off-Beat

Sage & Piort. Me likey.

Dave Chapelle and Spongebob both mentioned in the same chappy. My heroes!

I love the pace of the story but I admit I am chomping at the bit for a meatier confrontation between Jean and Ro. I wonder will Jean be remorseful and try to explain what was going on in her head? Or will she be clueless about how much damage she's done?

Also can't wait for the Erik to find out what a unrepentent lBastard Pietro is.

Author's Response: *grins* ...glad you likey! I love those two characters myself! And the meatier confrontation just got uploaded, along with a whole chapter full of "wtf??"

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-07 - 07:35 pm Title: Off-Beat

LOL, go Sage! It's about friggin' time.

Author's Response: So sue me, I like her. The more her character spoke to me, the more I realized that she was a person who always had to work hard for what was hers. So, I let her have her moment! Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-14-07 - 12:05 am Title: Off-Beat

I can't even imagine what Erik's reaction will be when he finds out Pietro kept the knowledge of a grandchild away from him. Loving they way you're writing Sage and Piotr, too. Is Aliyah's father Bishop?

Can Ororo PLEASE beat Jean down? Just once? Because I would be royally pissed if Jean got off scott-free. She's had it too easy so far. A loving husband, loyal friends, a nice house and good looks. That heffa needs to suffer! BTW, Ororo and Logan make me melt. :)

Once again, Vic was a complete ass and I loved it! He tickled me to no end. What a jerk! LOL! Can't wait for more. I love this story!

Author's Response: I think I write just to read your reviews! This one cracked me up, so thank you VERY much! Yeah, Jean needs a beatin' don't she? Pietro will be hearing from his dad, who will likely insist on his grandfatherly rights.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-13-07 - 11:08 am Title: Off-Beat

lol I'm going to be late for my classes reading this! But it was so worth it! Is 'Ro going to go to lunch with Jean? Is Logan going to find out what happened? What's going on with Rogue... er Marie and Remy? Are Piotr and Sage going to go out out soon?

Author's Response: sorry to make you late! but thanks for reading! I am working on the lunch chapter as we speak, and Sage and Piotr are going to have some time together pretty soon, I like them too much not to put them together. Logan will find out what happened, and he will need to deal wtih some details he forgot about previously.

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