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Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-07 - 02:10 am Title: Floored

*stunned silence* wow.......


Author's Response: *grins...* is that a "good" silence???

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 06:53 pm Title: Floored

O.o - Jean really is something! Geez, I can't believe it! Gah! At least she got her ass kicked a bit. But still, in her eyes it's never her fault. It's always the others who did something to make things happen like they did. *rolls eyes at Miss Perfect* OMG, my RoLo! Whaaa, I want it back! *cries*

Author's Response: They will make their way back, soon. Again, Reiko talked me into giving Jean a good ass-kicking. Notice, though, how she had a few pent-up feelings going on. She and Ororo are better off not being friends, now that we have seen that!

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 04:07 pm Title: Floored

You got me up here popping granola in my mouth like its popcorn and I'm watching a movie.

This was great, CeeCee. Jean so had that coming.

Ro and Logan need to fix this asap!

Author's Response: Reiko talked me into letting Ororo kick Jean's ass! I'm grinning over you and the granola. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 03:19 pm Title: Floored

What the hell happened at the end? My poor RoLo! The both of them were just pitiful in that scene. We go from comfort to hurt feelings. *sigh* I know you're gonna make this right, so I'm not too worried.

What an unrepentant cow Jean is! If that was her way of apologizing, then she can shove that up her ass! That was sorry. And she got too many licks in on 'Ro when they were fighting, IMO. I wanted 'Ro to channel Beatrix Kiddo and lay her ass out! Where's Jean's sense of loyalty? She is so selfish, it's maddening.

She just took Pietro's side after all the crap he put our girl through. I really do hope Ororo keeps Jean out of her life. 'Ro may have her faults, but Jean is just...WOW. There aren't enough words to describe what type of person Jean is in this story. This is cliche but, with friends like Jean, who needs enemies? She REALLY pissed me off in this chapter. Will Scott find out soon? I hope so.

It's a good thing 'Ro has Marie, Lorna and Ali. She's gonna need 'em. Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Jean doesn't see what damage she did all around, and does not want to admit it, since she thinks she should have what she should have. It hasnt affected her yet, because Ororo was the one who was hurt. that will be remedied soon. Logan will have the chance to mull things over once Ororo comes to her senses. She will, quickly! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 11:03 am Title: Floored

.....it will get happy again right? Please?

Jean is such a bitch. That was just low... blaming Ororo for Pietro cheating. She didn't even think about how Scott would feel... Does he find out? Please tell me Scott finds out.

And that Logan comes back... well he has to come back right? It's a RoLo....

update soon!!!

Author's Response: Logan has a hard time staying away from Ororo. He's stubborn that way. We'll explore that soon. And Scott's been pretty nice, so we have to cut him some slack.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 06:14 am Title: Floored

please tell me that Jean is going to get hers. Scott finding out would be awfully nice.

Author's Response: Originally I didn't want Scott to find out, since he had been pretty blameless, and it would have been fun to see Jean sweat it out a little, wondering when he would find out. But my last chapter blew that intent out of the water. Jean will have to explain herself, and Pietro will also likely sing like a bird...who knows! I'm bad.

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