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Reviewer: NoWhere_Man Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-01-08 - 12:02 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

CeeCee,

You need to be given an award. I've been reading fanfics for a little over eight years now.
This was the first story that ever made me say out loud,
"THAT BITCH!"
90210, Guiding Light and the Young and the Restless have nothing on this story. ^^

Author's Response: That's a wonderful compliment. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I like writing AU while still bringing in some of the character's original traits and other bits and pieces that make you recognize who they're based on. Ali still sings. Jean and Ororo are best friends. And more on a silly note, Cain is still Ali's "best fan" like he was in Uncanny for one issue. Remy is still a flirt. I love your reaction to Jean!!! I had fun writing the scenes where Ororo began piecing it all together, particularly the slap at the party. Some of my stories are a little soapy, I will admit. Catfights, girl talk...those are tools I abuse to death.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-30-07 - 02:28 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

1.awwww he kept hard candy in his pocket
2. I knew something would happen to her when there was no lights in her house :( I’m glad it wasn’t too serious
3. Sage and Piotr are too cute.
4. loved Logan last line.
5. I hope Ro doesn’t let Jean’s stupid words get the best of her.


Author's Response: 1. Logan would do something like that if he cared about her, I think. He's less the gushing romantic, and more practical about showing how he cares. 2. It was serious enough; my focus was to bring them back together in such a way that they couldn't avoid discussion. I still need to work on my foreshadowing, but this scene asked me to write it. 3. Yeah, I like them, too! 4. Thanks. He's fun to write one-liners for. 5. She will try not to let them get to her, if she wants Logan in her life without letting petty crap get in the way of their happiness.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-21-07 - 11:33 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

I agree with Logan. I wanted him to see her, but not that way.

Tro and Jean need another ass whooping! There Ororo is laying on the floor damn near in a diabetic coma and she's feeling sorry for herself because 2 people that were supposed to care about her *ucked her over. Stupid fuckers!



Author's Response: *smooches* I love you, Libra! And I love the review! Read the last installment, and you shall get your wish!

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-20-07 - 03:23 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

Good chap. I like Sage and Pioty together. Is Sage's baby daddy Luke Cage or Lucas Bishop? I might have missed the part that clarified although I think its Bishop because I think his daughters name was Aliyah in X-men the End.

Author's Response: You are correct! Yes, Barbara, Aliyah is Bishop's daughter in this piece. I love Bishop and Sage in Uncanny, back when it seemed like Claremont was trying to nudge them together, as well as in Xtreme. I think a baby with those two as parents would be beautiful and bright. Of course, he's playing a mack daddy/mybabydaddy character in this, but still...he's fun. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 11:14 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

Well, here's hoping they can work things out - Ro & Lo. There simply wan't enough of them in this chapter! But again, your characters are so real. It's very interesting to see Ororo suffering with diabetes like any normal person.

Author's Response: That was my focus on this one. Making her very human. So much of the time, she's a goddess on earth, but what if she were a regular woman who got PMS, broke a nail, did laundry, paid bills, had man trouble, and dealt with a chronic condition? Once in a while, in my comic fics, I bring a little of this in, but this story allowed me to go full-tilt in that direction. Thanks for reading. There will be more of them this next chapter.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 07:14 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

OMG, Ro! Poor thing :(
The hospital seems to be the place to run into each other ;) This has to stop LOL I hope they'll take the opportunity to talk things out now. *needs her RoLo*
Anna and Remy... LOL, let's find out if that dress is any help :D
Piotr and Sage are just hot! Lucas is a dick, but with his stupid change of plans he actually did something right. He most likely did it to piss Sage off... if he only knew, heh :D

Author's Response: Anna and Remy will show up again! I like them in this piece. Yeah, Lucas, he's hardheaded, and was a horrible boyfriend, but not necessarily a bad dad. We won't let him know he did Sage a favor!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 02:57 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

Cee you're evil... really lol And what's going on with Anna and Remy? Are Ro and Logan going to really talk now or are they going to end up fighting again?

Author's Response: They have time to talk now. Anna and Remy will have time to talk, too.

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