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Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 09:59 pm Title: Kick Down

Whoa! Well! I love the light banter between Ororo and Logan and the conversation he had with Mary had me laughing and I can't wait to read the next chapter to see this all resolved. A very, very good chapter.

Author's Response: I wanted some banter between them. Logan came into this in a good mood, so it was fun to see him acting like a boy with a frog in his pocket. Of course, the next chapter...well, that resolution might take a while??? Hee hee hee...and yes, Mary was meant to be the ex from hell.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:35 pm Title: Kick Down

1. whoo hoo! Ann finally got some!
2. Logan is going to propose? yay!
3. that stupid woman..pretty woman all over again
4. the gall of Mary! Ro should have kicked her ass just for the hell of it
5. oh no misunderstandings :(

Author's Response: 1. I have no idea where that scene came from...but I had fun writing it. I wanted her to have fun showing off for Remy and teaching him some new tricks! 2. yeah, I know! 3. yeah, darn it! 4. yup, but she already just barely got away with kicking Jean's ass. 5. yep...I'm addicted to them! That, and fixing them after everyone has yelled at me a few times!!!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-16-07 - 02:21 am Title: Kick Down

Okay, I have yet to read this - over 9,000 words! Good golly what a chapter but I'm back from my trip and will read this at work tomorrow. Two chapters that I'm really looking forward to.

Author's Response: Take your time. Print it out and read it on a shift when things are dead. This chapter is long, as is the next. Thanks for visting, Darlene.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-15-07 - 10:50 am Title: Kick Down

Gads, yer killin' me!
Everything started so promising, so perfect... then Mary came around. Gah!
Glad to see there's another chapter already. I'd be dead if there wasn't... seriously. Damn, this needs to be fixed!
*hurries off to the next chap*

Author's Response: Still more fixing to be done, Steph. I promise. (still grinning over the use of "Gads, yer killin' me!" since I say that so constantly...) Thanks for reading!

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