[Report This]Date: 12-19-13 - 03:01 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Liked how you weaved the tales of the various couples and it was good to see vic and logan getting along. Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 12-17-10 - 04:28 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
OK...wow what can I say? This story was absolutely amazing!! Standing ovation!!!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks so much! This is one of my older stories, so I'm always flattered and tickled when people see it floating around out there and actually READ it! *bows* Thanks for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: 08-30-07 - 04:18 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
Okay, you're the blame for me not getting anything done for the last couple of days. lol. Seriously, this was a great read! I especially enjoyed the way you portrayed Jean. I was shocked and intrigued by her. I also enjoyed how you intertwined the other couples into the story. Kudos!
Oh! And thanks for giving Scott a happy ending too!! Totally worth my house looking like a mess!!
Author's Response: hee hee! thanks for the review, I loved it! And I'm letting my own housework go by way of all good things, too, writing these! I'm bad, so help me... I wanted Scott to have a happy ending, and Reiko said "how about putting him together with Ali?" I said "yeah, why not, sounds good!" and there you go. Jean was interesting to write. She started off as Ororo's closest friend, but the trouble signs were floating under the surface; in the end she ended up being needier than Ororo. Thanks for reading me!
[Report This]Date: 06-30-07 - 02:16 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
that was a journey. but it was a real true love. i really loved the ending. it was very realistic. i see jean has taken the role of stupid and is too stupid to let it go. clearly, pietro is a dog and he obviously is never going to change. but enough about him. i love ororo and logan's relationship in this story. it is SO realistic.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! When I started this, it was a fluff piece. The opening chapter was based loosely on different bachelorettes I have been to in terms of the silly things women do when they go with the mentality of "nothing that happens tonight leaves this room." I never thought I could build such a long story off of one chapter, but when I realized Ororo was initially happy with someone else, I realized, why would she be unhappy? All of that occurred to me as I continued to write this. I tend to overdescribe from time to time, but I like visual pictures. So sue me! Thanks for reading and dropping in! I appreciate the feedback.
[Report This]Date: 05-20-07 - 01:57 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
Let' s do another chapter. Hahaha Jea got what she deserved.
Author's Response: hee hee hee...bless your little heart! Thanks for the review. Yeah, Jean...I had fun writing that part.
[Report This]Date: 05-12-07 - 08:28 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
I think this is my favorite story of yours, CeeCee. Sex, lies, betrayal, friendship and love.
This was the perfect way to end. Everyone ending up right where and with who they should be with. Especially Jean. She's getting exactly what she deserves.
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing the sex, lies and betrayal parts the most!!! Jean was tricky for me. On the one hand, she could be anyone in life who makes a mistake, except that she didn't want to treat it like a mistake and own it. Thanks for reading and reviewing this, I've enjoyed your feedback and thoughts. I've enjoyed everybody's!
[Report This]Date: 05-11-07 - 05:25 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
RoLo got married!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This story has been such a joy. I'm such a fan; you had me at Wine and Roses. Loved Logan during the ceremony such a strong man yet hardly able to keep himself up. how sweet.
I adored Vic in this, he was just made of awesomeness.
yay Scott and Ali. the greatest payback he (Scott) can dish out to his cheating ex-wife is his immense happiness. Haha Jean!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you've been enjoying this, Kathy! Initially, I was thinking "I'll just let him squeeze out his vows around trying not to cry," but then I thought, nah! Poor guy bottled his feelings through half the story, might as well let him emote. Glad you enjoyed Vic, too. To me, some of the same qualities that make him Logan's enemy in the comics could make him a great "frienemy" in real life. And yes, ma'am, Scott being happy in the end was what I was gunning for. Neither one of them chasing each other to come back, just a good, clean break-up. Too bad those never happen in real life!
[Report This]Date: 05-03-07 - 05:24 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
That was a cruel ending, even for Jean. However i LOVED the whole wedding bringing all of our favourite pairings together. A fitting ending to a great story. And i still think Scott and Ali deserve their own story. *hint*
Author's Response: Now see, everyone else keeps telling me I didn't give Jean a mean enough ending, Ana!! Jean was kinda given everything on a silver platter before, and she kinda walked away from it. Chickens come home to roost! Glad you liked the wedding. Scott and Ali got to hog up the last couple of chapters. Any other fic I do with them would likely be Ultimate verse or alternate. Or something. I dunno...
[Report This]Date: 05-03-07 - 09:41 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
I LOVED this chapter!
The wedding was perfect. Your closest friends around you and Elvis, what more do you want LOL
Vic did not disappoint either, he was hilarious. His speech! OMG LOL :D Can't help loving the big hunk.
Again, I loved this chapter! No wait, I loved the whole story! What a rollercoaster ride! :D
Author's Response: Man, Steph, it's always great to hear from you! Glad you enjoyed this. Vic was fun to write. Ororo having a scaled-down wedding was likely from the beginning, when she was miserable at Jean's big shindig, languishing over 'Tro, and all Jean could do was blather on about how it was her day. She associated bad stuff with big weddings after sticking her neck out so far for Jeannie, only to have her man stolen away. So, Elvis, just ALi suggested in that scene, was the one who married them. It had to happen!!!! (particularly since I am insane.)
[Report This]Date: 05-03-07 - 02:02 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
YEEEA 200 reviews! This was greatness personified. A perfect story. I loved the open ended storyline for Jean. We don't know if Pietro left when Jean told him she was preggers, or if he's out cheatin, or what. She's so miserable and alone, cause she chased away all her real friends, and its only going to get worse for her. Fabu!
Rolo had the most adorable wedding ever. But as great as they were Vic kinda sorda stole the show.
Scott, our underdog, WINS! Oh my, givin Roro away, awwww. And gettin Ms. Blaire like that pratically on a white horse. Ok ok, greasy pizza and a near foyer romp isn't exactly a thoroughbred but it still counts.
Wow! I love me some epic stories, and this is gonna make me smile forever. Squeeeeeeee Rolo and ScAli, le sigh.
Author's Response: Yeah, 200 reviews! That, like, never happens to me! (grinning like a fool here) Pietro is out making trouble, that is a given, but in the meantime, he's paying child support to an ex that has it in for him, dealing with his dad, and is soon to be a dad again even though he never really wanted a family with 'Ro (the jerk...). Yup, Scott came out the winner this time. Guy needed a break! Glad you enjoyed it. Give me a 'ring' when you have the chance, Reiko.
[Report This]Date: 05-03-07 - 01:34 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
...I can't believe she grabbed his butt... at the wedding.
it's a good thing my roomie left because I was laughing so hard I started snorting. Then I nearly cried during the vows... then burst out laughing again.
lol I liked Vic's toast. He's insane lol Cute images for the rest of the couples. Glad Jean ended up miserable.
hmm... might have to convince the bf into a Vegas wedding... Anyway, I'm sad to see this end, but it was so good!
Author's Response: That scene made me laugh when it jumped into my mind. Vic needed to be on hand to say something silly, I just like him too much. Logan breaking down at the wedding was another scene that for some reason warmed me when I started typing it. No more interfering exes!!! Thanks, Tiger! Glad you liked the rest of the images.
[Report This]Date: 05-02-07 - 11:03 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Logan and Ororo so deserve to be happy with each other. I can't wait to see what happens next so update soon.
Author's Response: That was it. Tiger asked me about an epilogue, but I ran out of steam. Thanks for reading this up until now, Dragon!
[Report This]Date: 05-02-07 - 10:17 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals
I do!!!!!!!! Love this chapter it's awsome. I'm still at work so I can only write so much. Just wanted to say hello and great chapter. Logan and Ro deserve to be happy. So thank ya. Thank ya very much!
Author's Response: hee hee! And thank you for the review! Hi, Athena!
Terms of Service | Rules | Contact Us |
Skin created by Kali