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Reviewer: Tiger Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-07 - 03:57 am Title: Bad Move

Ok, it took me two days (including some reading during Asian Culture class) but I got through the whole story so far! I was a little confused at first and nearly started laughing during class during the stripper scene. lol you should put a "Do not read in public" warning on that part! Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: A lot of people stepped into that scene, thinking Logan was going to be the stripper. Glad you got a kick out of it.

Reviewer: Wylong06 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-23-07 - 01:47 am Title: No More Words

i seriously love this story! haha myspace, that cracks me up. keep it coming!

Author's Response: ...I had to sneak that in there, so sue me! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-22-07 - 02:32 am Title: Bad Move

That was a GREAT Update!!! Pietro needed to get his a*s kicked and Logan was the man to do it. But I REALLY REALLY wanted to see Jean expoused for the slut she is/was before Scott. And then we would see how long Scott's friendship with Pietro would last, if at all.

Pietro clearly took Ororo for granted. And he liked to be the one to say good bye, not the other way around. But don't let Jean pull the wool over Scott's eyes any more. Somebody should speak up, if not Ororo, then one of her friends, but SOMEBODY should not let her get away with her lies to Scott anymore.



Author's Response: ...Jean will get hers. Chickens, as my momma says, come back to roost. I don't like to reward liars in my stories! (smile)

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 11:49 pm Title: Bad Move

Wow. There's so much going on here. First, THANK YOU for letting Logan kick Pietro's ass. I was hoping for a booted kick to the groin, but Logan's a man. Men are sensitive about their lower region. So I understand. And poor 'Ro! Her insecurities make me hurt for her. Pietro did a number on her, didn't he? What a bastard! UGH!

Jean... When is she gonna get her own ass whupping from Ororo? Homegirl has it coming in spades. First for sleeping w/ Pietro. Second, for betraying Scott and Ororo's trust. Third, for being snide to Logan. And finally, for inviting Pietro to the party w/o telling Ororo as if it's okay. WTF is wrong with her?

Thanks for shedding a little light on Logan's background. He had it rough, but he also made the choice to stay in that toxic relationship. Logan's situation reminds me of people I know. They can't let go of something that's bad for them until it's too late.

When will ALL of the shit hit the fan? Man, I want to read Scott's reaction to the truth. I'm waiting on the edge of my seat! Great update!

Author's Response: Well, that's just it. Ororo actually WENT BACK to her toxic relationship; at least Logan found his "rock bottom" with Mary so we know he won't go back. Yeah, ALL this shit is just waiting to be flung and spread over a wide, wide radius. It would have only been good to see Pietro take a hit to the nards if Ororo or Luna's mom did the honors. Glad you liked the back story. I've been tossing it around in my head for a while, because I didn't have a full idea of it back when I hinted at it in the third chapter or so. Thanks for reading. And yes, Jean will get hers.

Reviewer: Wylong06 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 09:39 pm Title: Bad Move

this is the best fucking story in all-time rolo history =]

Author's Response: *grins* THANK you! That made me smile, and I needed a smile today. Thank you for the review. I like to read, I like to write, and I like to toss ideas back and forth with other people. Peek at my Favorites list, too, and read some of those authors, you will not be sorry.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 03:20 pm Title: Bad Move

How do you do that? With every chapter I hate Pietro more LOL Gawd, what an ass. I'm glad he finally got his ass kicked a bit. But I feel so sorry for Scott, he deserves the truth. I wonder if he's gonna ask Jean about why she the hell invited Pietro.
Dang, when he kissed Ro I so wanted her to punch him in the face, or just pull up her knee fast and hard. Ugh, bastard. *shudders*
Ohhh, Logan's past. No wonder he's afraid of standing in the middle. He's had his fill of that shit already. Poor guy. I'm glad Ro showed him the middle is the last place he stands with her :)

Author's Response: Right now the only redeeming quality about Pietro is his family, they may come back into play. Scott will ask. The facade of Jean and Scott having a shiny, new perfect marriage will crack a little. She'll have more opportunities to convince him. But there was a little snag back at Harry's that will also come back to bite Logan in the butt. (spoiler)

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 01:44 pm Title: Bad Move

Ya know, this story is better (and more addicting) than booze, dope, and sex combined. I'm gonna need to check into rehab after this is all said and done.

SO, Logan had a traumatic lovelife as well. I feel so bad for him. But he and 'Ro have each other now and all is well, right.... RIGHT?!?

I only have one request CeeCee. Please don't make this into one of those stories where the other woman / best friend is forgiven. Jean knew what she was doing, therefore that skeezer deserves every bit of humiliation that's coming her way. That ole stankin heifah (as my mother would say) need her ass beat.

Keep 'em comin', CeeCee!

Author's Response: Nope. It ain't one of those stories where the friend gets off scot-free. Logan and 'Ro have a few things to think about. Jean's gonna have some stuff to answer for. We've seen Logan doesn't want to be with anyone else, per se, but we know he has reason to have cold feet. Glad you like it. Thanks.

Reviewer: Pandora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-21-07 - 01:03 pm Title: Bad Move

Ahhhh, my fix. Thanks so much. Feel better now. Pietro is just a loathsome individual. And Jean is a real piece of work. So glad Logan opened a can of whup ass on 'Tro.

I am looking forward to the next phase in Ro and Lo's relationship.

Author's Response: The thing about Pietro that might make most people reading about him want to smack him is that he doesn't think any of this is his fault. If I made him more accountable, he would be likable. Ah, well...this isn't his story. Jean isn't much different from Pietro, so that's why she overlooked his selfishness and disloyalty to her best friend to take a dip. Jean won't walk away unscathed. Now, when I figure out that "next phase..." well, I don't know!

Reviewer: smalltowngirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-04-07 - 11:33 pm Title: No Man's Land

This is a great story. You are a great author.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm flattered. You craft a great story yourself! I appreciate the visit.

Reviewer: Pandora Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-07 - 04:22 pm Title: No Man's Land

This story is my RoLo crack! I haunt this board to get my fix. You have done such an excellent job. Just on principle alone I dislike Jean, so of course I am tickled that not only is she the red-panty girl, but That Ro found out and clocked her ass!

Author's Response: RoLo crack...that's hysterical! Thank you. I get my fix from this site, too. So many great authors, so many neat stories, and so many interpretations of these characters to be enjoyed. Yeah, the red panties under the bed, those were random. I thought "who among Ororo's friends would wear red panties?" The conflict needed to hit close to home when I thought about where I wanted the story to go, and it became more relevant to me when "I have a perfect man, perfect relationship, perfect home" Jean extended her reach too far. Ororo knocking Jean upside her face was a scene that I visualized as soon as Ororo found the underwear! Thanks for reading and reviewing, it made my day.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-03-07 - 01:34 pm Title: Side Stepping

Oh god, who the hell invited Pietro? Gah, I bet it was Jean. Insensitive to no end. I'm so glad Ro finally found out. "Wasn't that a set?" Heh, I was like "uh oh, here it comes... Go Ro!" And who cares how it looks when she leaves? Geez, I'd probably made a scene just for Jean, had she told me that kinda shit... But then again, there's Scott. I'd have held myself in check for him. He deserves better. Much better! Poor guy. When's he going to find out? His wife and friend cheating behind his back, that's just horrible.
Damn, this chapter was good and so full of OMG-moments LOL :) I laughed a lot when Ro, Marie, Logan and Remy were having lunch, that was great. All of Ro's friends are on her side, they all hate what Pietro did to her and would love to kick his ass. That's always good to know :)
So, they just ran into Mr. Cheater... now who's gonna kick is ass? :D He's soooo asking for it!

Author's Response: Yeah, he's asking for it! (grin) I bet it was Jean who invited him, too. Ororo held back with Jean because, yes, she cares about Scott and not hurting him, she's always been good friends with both Jean AND Scott. Glad you enjoyed this, Steph.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-07 - 12:54 pm Title: Side Stepping

**Pffffrrrrtttttttfffffffffffttttttttttt**

You know what that sound is? That's the shit hitting the fan. Wheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee. More? Please?




Author's Response: Ya just had ta give me the sound effect and take me to an ugly mental place...bahahahaha. More is coming! Thanks, girl.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-02-07 - 04:32 am Title: Side Stepping

1. I so saw that! The minute Lorena asked for the scarf, I thought 'uh oh'. Ater years of watching soaps, i know a set up when i see one.
2. Whoa! 'Ro should have punch her..just to make sure the bitch really felt the slap.
3. I loved how Logan was so protective of her when she started to have an attack--so sweet.
4. Jean is such a bad friend (and then some). The only thing she really cared about was that she didn't look bad. Forget the fact that she slept with her BFF boyfriend. Tricks!
5. oh shit? oh fuck!
6. kick ass chapter Cee

Author's Response: 1. I love soaps, so yeah, that would have been what inspired me! 2. The handprint she left behind was still fun, to me. Now Pietro, HE will get a punch. 3. Logan's nothing if not protective of someone he cares about. 4. Jean forgot herself when she got caught up in her little tricks. She's needful. She will pay for that selfishness, and she will miss Ororo. 5. oh, f*** indeed! 6. Thanks! Hugs and smooches, thanks for reading.

Reviewer: darkhorse2763 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-07 - 07:58 pm Title: Side Stepping

ohhhhhhhhh, the plot is so thick i could cut through it with a knife! i have been thoroughly enjoying this tale; in fact, everytime there is an update, i squeal loudly and start to do a happy dance. as i haven't left a review in a while, i shall say the following: this has got to be one of my favourite logan incarnations ever. the combination of sweet, protective, growly and domineering are just fantastic. he's exactly what ro needs: someone to be there to take care of her, to treat her like she's something precious and special and important. ohhhhh, and these plot twists: pietro's kid! pietro cheating on ro with jean! keep 'em coming, 'cause i like the way this is going. is there going to be blood in the next chapter? can logan FINALLY punch the asshole's daylights out and totally throw the party into a tizzy? and are we going to get back to sage and piotr? now i'm sounding like a petulant child, but that's how giddy and excited this fic makes me. can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: ok, this has got to be one of the most awesome reviews ever! *gasps* THANK YOU!!! Glad you like Logan. I like him, too. I like Sage and Piotr, too, there is some plot coming their way soon, particularly a little side thought Sage had to herself walking back to work from lunch with him...read back to that, and you have your spoiler. And yes, Logan finally gets to punch his lights out! yay! Thanks again.

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-01-07 - 05:30 pm Title: Side Stepping

that fucking bitch
It makes me happy that Ororo didn't beat around the bush about exposing Jean. She didn't go home and cry about it or keep quiet about it and try not to sulk through the party. I hate that. Pietro is such a snake.
I love that you use my favorite term of endearment in this, heifer!
Glad you updated babe. You're the best

Author's Response: Ororo already had to play the martyr at Jean's wedding, the woman who was supposed to be her sister and confidante. We took away her reason to beat around the bush this time!! Woo-hoo! Heifer is one of my favorite mad words, I use that one every now and again in Never Been One for Wine and Roses, too. Thanks for visiting me, Barb. Great to hear from you, I'm smiling now. :-)

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