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Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-03-07 - 01:34 am Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals

...I can't believe she grabbed his butt... at the wedding.

it's a good thing my roomie left because I was laughing so hard I started snorting. Then I nearly cried during the vows... then burst out laughing again.

lol I liked Vic's toast. He's insane lol Cute images for the rest of the couples. Glad Jean ended up miserable.

hmm... might have to convince the bf into a Vegas wedding... Anyway, I'm sad to see this end, but it was so good!



Author's Response: That scene made me laugh when it jumped into my mind. Vic needed to be on hand to say something silly, I just like him too much. Logan breaking down at the wedding was another scene that for some reason warmed me when I started typing it. No more interfering exes!!! Thanks, Tiger! Glad you liked the rest of the images.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 11:12 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

LOVE Black Velvet! It's one of ym absolute favorites.

Scott and Ali? More please and thank you! Man, who would've thought they'd be that hot? I'm sure the words, "Jean who?" were running through Scott's mind during the kiss. And of course Jean had to show up and attempt to ruin the fun. I'm glad she didn't.

I laughed me ass off at Jean's plight earlier in the chapter. She deserves all of that heartache after the way she treated Scott and Ororo.

Off to read the fina chapter. Great work!

Author's Response: "Jean Who?" Yeah, that was probably running through his mind. Jean had no business telling anyone who they could be with, so she got a little slap in that scene. Scott got to be the bigger person that time, which he deserved. I love that song, too, and used to belt it out in the shower (I was, like, 14 when it came out!). The song was a prelude and teaser for the Elvis wedding in Vegas. Glad you enjoyed this, girl! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 11:03 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Logan and Ororo so deserve to be happy with each other. I can't wait to see what happens next so update soon.

Author's Response: That was it. Tiger asked me about an epilogue, but I ran out of steam. Thanks for reading this up until now, Dragon!

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 10:17 pm Title: The Macarena, and Sillier Rituals

I do!!!!!!!! Love this chapter it's awsome. I'm still at work so I can only write so much. Just wanted to say hello and great chapter. Logan and Ro deserve to be happy. So thank ya. Thank ya very much!

Author's Response: hee hee! And thank you for the review! Hi, Athena!

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 04:38 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

That Ali/Scott scene was absolutely HOT. Those two soo deserve their own story. Loved the cutesy Rolo ending, and overall i LOVED this story!

Author's Response: Last chapter is up, so now it's over. Glad you got to read this, Panther. Scott and Ali might show up again in something I write, and I know Reiko is digging that 'ship, too. Scott/Ali pairings might show up in the background of stories here from now on, you never know!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 04:20 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

Now that’s some ‘real’ reality! I was staring at the screen with my mouth hanging open as I read this, half in shock and half in amusement because of Jean’s predicament and then Ali! Now, that’s good writing.

There was one sentence I wasn't sure of but think you switched Crystal's name instead of Lunas - You say he was hoisting Crystal up into his arms.

Luna had graduated from an unwilling kidnappee to a bubbly chatterbox – loved that line.

Housebreaking a new puppy – how true!


Author's Response: I went back and fixed that. Glad you enjoyed the "reality" of Jean, and Ali's new development. Little girls do that, flipping back and forth. My husband's nieces are always like that with me when we go to visit, and they don't usually warm up to me until it is time to leave, or unless we take them to the store! And yes, housebreaking a new puppy...same principle! thanks for the review, Darlin'!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-02-07 - 03:40 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

Ohhh, Scott and Ali! Me likes :D Loved it when he shoved her up on the stage. Sounds like she's on the verge of starting a singing career now.
I wonder how Pietro will react when Jean tells him the truth. Heh, and here she is having secrets again already ;)
RoLo in Vegas, that's gonna be fun. And Vic's gonna be there, too! Can't wait - I've been enjoying him a lot in this story.

Author's Response: Everyone likes Vic! He was meant to be a minor fly in Logan's ointment. He gained a life of his own, didn't he? Hope you get to read the conclusion. Feels almost anticlimactic, since I had so much going into this one, and the three before it. Thanks for the review and visit, Steph! Jean will want to keep things secret for as long as she can, but I can guarantee she will fail.

Reviewer: athena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-07 - 09:32 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

I really dislike Jean. She deserves all that's she's getting (and more). Can't wait until the next chapter.

Author's Response: You may like the next one, then. She ain't happy. Thanks for reviewing, Athena.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-01-07 - 03:35 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

I'm really glad I didn't read that before bed.

Anyway, I'm glad Luna was mean to Jean. She deserves it. I hope her morning sickness sticks around for a long time.

Loved the RoLo as always!!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed this. Other people's kids are not always so cute when they don't like you!!! And now her own baby is being fickle in utero, so she will be getting it with both barrels. I had fun with this. Thanks for the review, Tiger.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 11:34 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

I'm loving the idea of Ali/Scott almost as much as I love Ro/Lo.

I'm not to big to say that I want Pietro to dump Jean's cheating ass when he finds out she's pregnant. I hope Jean sees real soon what Ororo was trying to tell her.

RoLo getting married in Vegas and Vic's going too? I can't wait for that. Vic is a riot in this story.

Author's Response: Scott and Ali...I never would have thought to want them together myself, but suddenly, they are a pairing I would write again! Funny what a little encouragement will do. Jean and Pietro will have a big helping of "what were we thinking" as time goes by, but this story is too long to go into further detail! My Word file is over 350 pages!!! Glad you like Vic, and he will be at the wedding!

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 11:02 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I so happy that Scot is with Ali but Jean and Pietro is still way to happy with every thing for my taste I think they needs to suffer a lot more. Her being pregnant no child should have to suffer having her as a mom. UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: More unhappiness to come! (hahaha)

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 11:02 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!! I so happy that Scot is with Ali but Jean and Pietro is still way to happy with every thing for my taste I think they needs to suffer a lot more. Her being pregnant no child should have to suffer having her as a mom. UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Jean and Pietro are not that happy, trust me. Visitation, wicked stepmother complex, a new baby that Pietro does not want, Pietro likely to act up like he did with 'Ro, with Jean having been divorced once already...they'll both suffer. Not to worry, Dragon.

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 10:58 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

YOU WANKER! "Let's get out of here." WHERES THE REST??? Ooooh you!

*inhale...* Ok, wow! As you know, I love any Eagles fan, all incarnations of Ali, and anytime Scott is portrayed with a personality. :D This had me doing a seated happy dance.

Now, let me tell you how much I LOVED Ali/Scott. I loved Ali/Scott this-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------much.
It was awesome. Now from here on in, Ali and Scott will always find each other. Rocker Ali (new or old) party girl calming down for Boy Scout Scott who learns to let go for Ali is going to be my brand spanking new #2 shipper. Le sigh.

Oh yea, the Rolo was nice too.

LOL @ Jean. Hahaha.

Author's Response: but...but...there were so many words, I ran out of them for a minute! Forgive my wankery!!! Glad you liked it. Thought you would like that Jean moment, you told me what you wanted in it! Stinker! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 10:47 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

Whoa now that was some high drama at the club! At least Logan an 'Ro are happy. Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: I love my high drama! There is more, because the wedding had to be written. Thanks for the review, Burnz.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-30-07 - 09:52 pm Title: Cover Songs and Eight-Track

1. HAHA Jean! In your face bitch!
2. I love Betty! Hated Veronica! Always stealing Archie from her.
3.I love that after they were done, Ro went back to the matter at hand.
4. yay rolo is gonna get hitched...in Vegas no less. This should be interesting.
5.. Scott and Ali? finally the man will get some peace..and a boatload of fun
6.. I hope Jeans chokes on it whine she realize what she gave up so she can be with a dog.

Author's Response: 1. yeah! In her face! (grinning here) 2. Archie always made it too easy for Ronnie to steal him, which makes him a dog, but yes, I love Betty. She's my homegirl. 3. Yup. Best time to talk to a guy is after you've worn them out...4. Oh, it will! It will! 5. Yup! 6. She was choking pretty good at Harry's on the patio...she owes them a new shrub!

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