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Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-28-07 - 05:17 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

Jean freakin' kills me. She just got out of one messed up marriage and know she's think of Eric and Aleytys as her perspective in-laws? Those two stupids individuals deserve each other. They don't need to mess up anyone elses life, but each others.

Piotr and Sage were my favorite part. That was great interaction between Aliyah and Piotr. So cute.

Ro and Lo...what can I say? Ororo got her shit together and got her man. That bit about switching the ring was cute. I totally pictured that whole scene.

Loved it.

Author's Response: yep. like I said before, can't let them run loose with other people and make their lives miserable, but knowing 'Tro, he will try, and likely get his butt kicked again! Ro and Lo finally figuring it out nagged at me for a long time, since she was more in the wrong this time. I pictured that scene, too, with him initially not wanting to hear her out that badly, but getting ticked off when she was about to give him space. I love angst, so sue me! Thanks for the review, Libra.

Reviewer: Wylong06 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-23-07 - 12:50 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

you truly are my hero. haha, nice update.

Author's Response: heh...thanks, buddy! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-22-07 - 05:25 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

Damn. ::dreamy sigh::
You write a hell of a love scene. I loved that you took the words that Ororo said when Forge proposed in UXM. I recognized it right away. The ladies who spoke about Sage, Pete, and little Aliya were a trip. I love Eric for his performance at the dinner. He took no prisoners! Jean better not have chipped Aletys' china! People don't play when it comes to the good dishes. I feel very sorry for Scott. He is a good guy, but I do have a problem with him being mad at Ororo. She is his friend and all but Jean is his wife and its not Ororo's responsibility or duty to settle Scott and Jean's problems. Especially in a situation as twisted as this one. Good chappie! Nice to have a happy ending for a change. By the way , my home team (the sixers) won right? :P Lets pretend they did since this is fanfiction and all.

Author's Response: shoot, your review gave me a synopsis of three chapters worth of writing, kid, you must have spent the past hour or so reading all this!!! I'm totally flattered!!! The thought of Ororo making up for the previous night's awkwardness stuck with me. Scott shouldn't have been mad at Ororo, it's true; but, Ororo was mad at Logan, too, for not cluing her in to Pietro cheating when he saw him at Harry's, so same principle, different couple, equally frustrating struggle. I know what you're saying, Barb, and you're right. Scott will stop being annoyed at Ororo soon enough. He has to step back from his pain for a minute to realize that neither he nor Ororo are to blame. Yeah, ya don't mess with a woman's good plates!!! Every now and again, Sage's situation has happened to me when I have walked around with my own kids, all three of whom look like my husband. Casual onlookers ARE a trip when it comes to that. And yes, the 76ers had a good game, the game went into double overtime and had the crowd up on their feet, three-point shot before the buzzer...the only way Logan missed that recap was from 'Ro distracting him.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 10:31 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

I really enjoyed your Victor which I forgot to mention last chapter. And you fixed it! Very nicely too.

Author's Response: I love your Victor when you write him, too, so thanks! Glad you enjoyed these two putting their doubts to rest. Ororo finally let it sink in what a good man she had, and that he wouldn't pull a Pietro and leave her guessing. Logan finally fessed up to all the stuff that had been eating at him for a long time. I wouldn't have been happy with a "happy ending" unless he had the chance to get some stuff off his chest. Poor guy's been through a lot! Thanks for reading. There is an epilogue somewhere hiding around here...

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 10:08 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued

Ack! It's not fixed! Wthey?

Author's Response: what the hey indeed, that was what Logan was thinking. Read on, McDuff!

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 09:59 pm Title: Kick Down

Whoa! Well! I love the light banter between Ororo and Logan and the conversation he had with Mary had me laughing and I can't wait to read the next chapter to see this all resolved. A very, very good chapter.

Author's Response: I wanted some banter between them. Logan came into this in a good mood, so it was fun to see him acting like a boy with a frog in his pocket. Of course, the next chapter...well, that resolution might take a while??? Hee hee hee...and yes, Mary was meant to be the ex from hell.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:44 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

1. love long!
2. ". Ororo’s hair was supposed to be spread out over the pillow, tickling his lips.
" Could that line be any sadder?
3. "I feel like I must have pissed in someone’s coffee and forgot about it. My karma sucks."
LMAO! you have awesome lines in this chapter
4.oh hell no! she acutally got with him? that tactless ho! I'm glad Scott kicked her to the curb
5.poor Scott! He never gets to be happy in these fanfics...always getting fucked over
6. love Vic! *so* funny
7.i like the sound of forever
8. thanks for anothe rawesome fic

Author's Response: 1. ...it was the fic that wouldn't stop! Thanks! 2. It just about was; I was gonna let Logan let Ororo dangle and suffer some more at the door. 3. Thanks. Yet another line that begged me to write it, since I could hear a real person saying it in a situation like that. 4. Remember how she made it seem like Ororo was making a big mistake throwing away what she had with Pietro just because she found drawers under the bed? We knew Mrs. Summers was shopping for another Mister. Yeah, chickens come home to roost...heh, heh, heh! Poor Jean! 5. He'll end up happy. Just not with Jean. 6. Glad you enjoyed him. He's one of my favorite villains, because even when he is just EVIL as all get-out, he has excellent lines. Patterned him after half my male in-laws. 7. me too. 8. you're always welcome. Thanks for reading me and helping me to think about my characters, Kathy.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:38 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued

1. Why wouldnt he let her touch his knee? I'm feeling loads of angst coming up
2. i'm with Logan, shut up Ro and have sex with the man lol
3. ouch! she didnt 'let go'...this cant be good
4. he left :(
5. She found the ring!...that was so evil Cee

Author's Response: 1. trust that feeling, it won't lead you wrong. 2. I know, poor Logan... 3. whoa nelly, it sure can't! 4. awww, I know... can ya blame him? she needs to grow up! Logan can't always be the hotheaded one. Women mess up, too. 5. yep! she had to get a clue, and that was a big clue. (smiling evilly at my PC now) Hee. Thanks for the review, Kathy.

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:35 pm Title: Kick Down

1. whoo hoo! Ann finally got some!
2. Logan is going to propose? yay!
3. that stupid woman..pretty woman all over again
4. the gall of Mary! Ro should have kicked her ass just for the hell of it
5. oh no misunderstandings :(

Author's Response: 1. I have no idea where that scene came from...but I had fun writing it. I wanted her to have fun showing off for Remy and teaching him some new tricks! 2. yeah, I know! 3. yeah, darn it! 4. yup, but she already just barely got away with kicking Jean's ass. 5. yep...I'm addicted to them! That, and fixing them after everyone has yelled at me a few times!!!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 08:17 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

Ohhh, that was so good! ROLO, wheeee! :D I'm so glad everything finally worked out for them. They both deserve it. "No more games." *sighs happily*
OMG, Eric LOL Straight to the point with his questions. I loved it, but I wouldn't have wanted to be in Jeans position. I wonder how things go from here for Jean and Pietro, now that she knows (and that not even from him) that he's got a daughter. They're both cheaters, they both keep secrets. They're quite perfect for each other - to spend a miserable life together ;)
I'm glad Scott doesn't give a shit about her anymore. Poor guy, but moving on is the right thing to do.

Oh, btw: 14704 words?! Gads, woman! LOL -- I enjoyed every single one :D

Author's Response: yeah, that word count...finding all the typos after the upload has been oodles of fun!!! Eric was always meant to be a fly in Pietro's ointment. Never as a major player, just as someone who would make him think twice about some of his bad decisions. He was definitely inspired by Magneto in comics verse. Scott needed the chance to vent. Comics verse Scott is not a favorite character of mine, but I like movie verse Scott because he is nice. He will find love again! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: chyti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-19-07 - 07:01 am Title: No Man's Land

what a beautiful ending to a beautiful story. ro and lo are just made for each other no matter what and they know it. i love the hell that jean and tro have built together hope they bask in it for an enternity

Author's Response: oh, they willllllll....wahahahahaaaa. (cue flames and screams) Well, more or less. They will realize that the grass was only greener on the other side because it was growing over the septic tank, like Erma Bombeck once said. (I love Erma) Neither of them will be happy with each other. Thank you for the review, chyti, it made me smile!

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 07:13 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

That was a GREAT chapter, wow...I love how this story developed.

Author's Response: Thank you, Asha. I'm glad it looked like I developed it, because writing it was such a mish-mash! I lost my direction halfway through and then threw in everything plus the kitchen sink! Thanks for sticking with it this long.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 06:52 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

Aww... I nearly cried, that was so sweet.

Author's Response: let me hand you a tissue! Glad you enjoyed this. I wanted Logan to get his point across, and for Ororo to grovel to get him back. Hence Anna's joke about the knee pads!

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 12:11 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

I had a good laugh at the title of this chapter. "I put my hand up on yo' hip..." lol

Pietro and Jean...Ugh. Go Scott for not backing down and falling for Jean's "crocodile tears". If she really loved him, she wouldn't have slept with Pietro at all. 'Tro and Jean deserve each other. They're both selfish.

And YAY for Ororo and Logan FINALLY getting their acts straight and getting engaged! It warmed my heart. And 'Ro buying Logan a ring was the perfect touch. *sigh* Another fandom may be screwing me over right now, but this chapter lifted my spirits.

I'm looking forward to the end. :-)

Author's Response: From the beginning, the story was focused on the concepts of "money dances," namely a) the money dance at a wedding reception to defray the cost of the ceremony and bilk your relatives of some cash, and b) the "money dance" at the bachelor/bachelorette where you pay the strippers to take off their clothes for one last fling. That title came from the fact that that particular song was played twice at my own reception when I got married. Yes, you picked up on where I was going with Jean and Pietro. Now, which other fandom is being screwy? Let's whip it into shape with some fic!!! Glad you enjoyed this.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-18-07 - 12:10 am Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip

Hi............... It me again I was reading this chapter again I hope that you don't have That BITCH Jean and Pietro get together because they both deserve to be ALON with no one to love them.

Author's Response: awwww, but half the fun is making sure they are absolutely MISERABLE with each other! That way, they aren't making anyone else's lives a nightmare!!! Jean won't have an easy time, I promise. Remember, she is a perfectionist, and he is full of imperfections and he cheats. They ain't gonna be happy!

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