[Report This]Date: 04-17-07 - 11:50 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip
Is this the end or is thier more to come.If this is more to come then I hope that you UPDATE SOON.
P.S. Great chapter!!!!!!!
Author's Response: There is a teeny bit more to come. Logan had packing boxes in his living room, we need to find out why. There is also a bit more to come with Scott.
[Report This]Date: 04-17-07 - 11:30 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
Well that was some first class angst. Whoa!
Author's Response: Heh. Thanks! Angst just jumped up and bit me in the bum when I started writing this chapter. If any other woman on the planet let poor Logan (or any guy like him) dangle back and forth after doing so much for her, they would have told her to bounce. I want a Logan, too!!!
[Report This]Date: 04-17-07 - 11:27 pm Title: And I Dip, You Dip, We Dip
*claps* well done, cee!! i'm glad it all worked out for our favorite duo (but was there every any doubt?? :) )
Author's Response: ...maybe a little doubt for a moment. Glad you enjoyed it. I might have one more chapter to tuck in all the loose ends. Thanks, Charmer.
[Report This]Date: 04-16-07 - 11:00 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
OMG! GIMME MORE, NOOOOOooooooooooooooooooooQ Why this constant game of cat and mouse?
Author's Response: Because I'm evil...muahahahaha. What's funny is that this was initially just going to be a fluff piece. It evolved into a soap opera. But I gave you more...this darn thing keeps growing, 'Queen. So sue me!
[Report This]Date: 04-16-07 - 02:21 am Title: Kick Down
Okay, I have yet to read this - over 9,000 words! Good golly what a chapter but I'm back from my trip and will read this at work tomorrow. Two chapters that I'm really looking forward to.
Author's Response: Take your time. Print it out and read it on a shift when things are dead. This chapter is long, as is the next. Thanks for visting, Darlene.
[Report This]Date: 04-16-07 - 01:25 am Title: Kick Down, Continued
aww Cee, you're a meanie. Why'd he have to leave? Why couldn't Mary show up after he proposed? UGH Cee! Way to make a sick girl feel worse! Update soon! Please!
Author's Response: awww, here's some Motrin and chocolate with a Kahlua chaser! She could have done that, but it wouldn't have been as much fun to write. You know I love to make the characters miserable for five minutes before I fix anything, Tiger! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 04-16-07 - 12:07 am Title: Kick Down, Continued
Doggone it! What the hell is wrong with Ororo? Okay, I get insecurities and all, but Mary is Logan's PAST. WTF didn't Ororo get about that? Man, this chapter wore me out. I had to take a day to cool off before I reviewed. It was excellent, as always.
Please update as soon as you can. I'll be waiting to read the chapter where Ororo finally gets some sense. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, she had issues and needed a chance to smack herself on the forehead and yell "what the flamin' **** was I thinking, letting my man walk out???" Women do some goofy things when they have doubts. Ororo's no exception. And I wrote that chapter!
[Report This]Date: 04-15-07 - 11:16 am Title: Kick Down, Continued
... well, you officially killed me.
Fix it, please! *begs*
Poor Logan, he planned everything and it went straight to hell and way beyond :(
Poor Ro, she found out what he'd planned, most likely feeling like shit right now :(
Poor RoLo *cries* Pleeeeaaaase fix it!
As much as this is seriously killing me I'm loving every bit of it :D
Author's Response: Get back up, this is being fixed! Yes, it went to hell. Yes, Ororo feels like total shit. Yes, RoLo is in a bad place right now, but in a place where they can go forward if they take a good long look at what they have. Thanks for the review, steph.
[Report This]Date: 04-15-07 - 10:50 am Title: Kick Down
Gads, yer killin' me!
Everything started so promising, so perfect... then Mary came around. Gah!
Glad to see there's another chapter already. I'd be dead if there wasn't... seriously. Damn, this needs to be fixed!
*hurries off to the next chap*
Author's Response: Still more fixing to be done, Steph. I promise. (still grinning over the use of "Gads, yer killin' me!" since I say that so constantly...) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 04-15-07 - 02:37 am Title: Kick Down, Continued
what in the heck is wrong with ororo!!!!!! this man practically worships her and she lets the stupidest of things come in between them. she better start acting like she knows something before logan steps for good.
Author's Response: Yup. So often Logan is the one in RoLo fics to act the donkey and do something to endanger his relationship, so I like writing Ororo as someone who occasionally makes mistakes. She'll get with the program, because she wants her man. Initially, I was going to make Logan, Ororo and Mary have this bizarre, awkward scene where they all meet, and things got ugly, but I couldn't put it together in my head. I may eventually revise this, it depends. Thanks for weighing in, Chyti! She is codependent in this, isn't she???
[Report This]Date: 04-15-07 - 12:21 am Title: Kick Down, Continued
*Attempts to find the right words*.........Awww, crap..........just crap. They just can't seem to catch a break. You have me in turmoil and suspense, but I love this!!
Author's Response: Originally it was just going to be a silly proposal with more whoopee. I don't know what happened, but it occurred to me there were other characters I wanted to have resolutions for, too. Sage and Piotr, Jean and Pietro, and Scott and whoever he ends up with need some love, and that wasn't going to happen with a pat ending where RoLo ride off in the sunset in his Camry. And I miss you, Claws, where ya been hiding yourself??? Thanks for the great review, but are you going to write us anything, too??? Pretty please with sugar on top?
[Report This]Date: 04-14-07 - 10:21 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
*sniffle* *SOB* *sniffle* Why are you doing this to me? Why are you breaking my heart? *sniffle* I love the raw emotion in this chapter. Love it! I like angst so I am lapping this up. But seriously. *sniffle* Heart, it is a-breaking.
Author's Response: We'll glue the pieces back together. 'Ro gets her butt in gear after talking to Anna. I like Anna, can you tell??? I like angst, too. Don't know why...it must be a sadistic gene I was born with. I'm nice enough in real life, but I make my characters suffer, go figure!!! And I want...no, crave...no, wait, NEED my update to Sweet and Lowdown, kid, stat!
[Report This]Date: 04-14-07 - 06:56 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
NOooooooooo thing cant end this way. Please uodate soon. I can’t wait to read the next chapter .
P.S. I love the new chapters
Author's Response: see response number one! it's weird when this site posts a review twice, isn't it? Happens once in a while. Again, thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04-14-07 - 06:56 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
NOooooooooo thing cant end this way. Please uodate soon. I can’t wait to read the next chapter .
P.S. I love the new chapters
Author's Response: wait, it's not ending!!! Not yet. One more chapter, maybe two. Thanks for reading, Dragon!
[Report This]Date: 04-14-07 - 12:03 pm Title: Kick Down, Continued
Helpful reading tip: DO NOT read this chapter while Coldplay's "Fix You" randomly comes on your ipod... and the end of the song hits right at the end of the chap. Holy hell... Great update.
Author's Response: now see, you made me curious about that song, now, and I have to search madly for a downloadable clip. I love Coldplay, even though I wrote most of this while listening to India Arie's first disc. Thanks for reading my loooooooong-winded update and reviewing, NemB. And I want more of Eclipse!!! When you have time, of course...
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