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Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 02:54 pm Title: Slipping Up

DRAMA!!!!!! LOL. Damn it's like a twisty turny soap opera. **huggles it** Keep it up, Cee!

Author's Response: Hey, you! I had been wondering what you were up to lately, I missed you. Yeah, I love writing drama, embarrassing moments, arguments and other conflicts, so this chapter had those in spades. I'm evil, so sue me. (although still not as evil as you and Gainee, since you always "cliffhanger" me and leave me slobbering for more every chapter!) Reiko has been encouraging me a lot, as well as our usual sewing circle at the group and on LJ, particularly in regard to making sure Pietro gets his ass kicked. It's been fun. Like, REALLY fun. *hugs*

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 12:14 pm Title: Awkward

Hi CeeCee, Sorry I haven't left feedback to this story, I've been enjoying it too much. It's copied to my pc so I just read straight through. :)

That Peter is an interesting fellow. He seems very selfish, but most guys are. They're big babies. He's probably a nice guy, he's just with the wrong girl. He needs a girl who will put him in his on a daily basis and wouldn't mind doing it through love. Ororo could be that person but she's not right for him. Right?

Underneathe Logan is waiting to make his move even though he's seen her only a couple of times. YES!

Now on to chapter five.

Rolletti

Author's Response: Hey, I'm just glad you're enjoying it, Rolletti! Pietro is selfish, that's his biggest fault here, and it won't get any better as the story goes along, so be warned. His personality is such that no one woman will have all the qualities he's chasing after, or so he thinks. And yes, Logan has quietly been watching Ororo from the wings. He has issues, but he's nice, I promise. The basic underlying theme of this story is the Logan seemingly started out with nothing, and Ororo seemingly started out with everything, only to lose it. I'm a romance novel addict and I love soaps, so that comes into play in my stories. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 04:12 am Title: Slipping Up

I feel bad for Scott... poor guy. And how dare Jean try to blame 'Ro AGAIN! I'm not surprised about Pietro blaming her, but Jean should've learned her lesson with that. I'm glad Scott found out.

But there was fluffy RoLo! YAY! :D

Author's Response: Jean knows she did wrong; it will come back to bite her in the buns in ways she cannot imagine. Yes, there was fluffy RoLo, as there needed to be! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-22-07 - 04:01 am Title: Slipping Up

Finally Scott knows. It was killing me, for real.

Why is it that no matter how much Pietro gets his ass kicked it just doesn't seem like enough? Can you make him a paraplegic or something? He's such a dick.

I whooped for Remy in the Eagles Tee. Thats my team!

Author's Response: *grins* It's Reiko's team, too! Me, I don't even like football that much, but it's such a guy thing I had to throw it in there. Pietro...ahhh, yes, he will get his. Scott had to eventually find out, even though it was gonna hurt him. I just didn't want him to be one more person blaming Ororo, though, when he found out, so Pietro gets what's coming to him, instead.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-21-07 - 11:33 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

I agree with Logan. I wanted him to see her, but not that way.

Tro and Jean need another ass whooping! There Ororo is laying on the floor damn near in a diabetic coma and she's feeling sorry for herself because 2 people that were supposed to care about her *ucked her over. Stupid fuckers!



Author's Response: *smooches* I love you, Libra! And I love the review! Read the last installment, and you shall get your wish!

Reviewer: BarbaraB Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-20-07 - 03:23 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

Good chap. I like Sage and Pioty together. Is Sage's baby daddy Luke Cage or Lucas Bishop? I might have missed the part that clarified although I think its Bishop because I think his daughters name was Aliyah in X-men the End.

Author's Response: You are correct! Yes, Barbara, Aliyah is Bishop's daughter in this piece. I love Bishop and Sage in Uncanny, back when it seemed like Claremont was trying to nudge them together, as well as in Xtreme. I think a baby with those two as parents would be beautiful and bright. Of course, he's playing a mack daddy/mybabydaddy character in this, but still...he's fun. Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 11:14 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

Well, here's hoping they can work things out - Ro & Lo. There simply wan't enough of them in this chapter! But again, your characters are so real. It's very interesting to see Ororo suffering with diabetes like any normal person.

Author's Response: That was my focus on this one. Making her very human. So much of the time, she's a goddess on earth, but what if she were a regular woman who got PMS, broke a nail, did laundry, paid bills, had man trouble, and dealt with a chronic condition? Once in a while, in my comic fics, I bring a little of this in, but this story allowed me to go full-tilt in that direction. Thanks for reading. There will be more of them this next chapter.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 07:14 pm Title: Cheek to Cheek

OMG, Ro! Poor thing :(
The hospital seems to be the place to run into each other ;) This has to stop LOL I hope they'll take the opportunity to talk things out now. *needs her RoLo*
Anna and Remy... LOL, let's find out if that dress is any help :D
Piotr and Sage are just hot! Lucas is a dick, but with his stupid change of plans he actually did something right. He most likely did it to piss Sage off... if he only knew, heh :D

Author's Response: Anna and Remy will show up again! I like them in this piece. Yeah, Lucas, he's hardheaded, and was a horrible boyfriend, but not necessarily a bad dad. We won't let him know he did Sage a favor!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 06:53 pm Title: Floored

O.o - Jean really is something! Geez, I can't believe it! Gah! At least she got her ass kicked a bit. But still, in her eyes it's never her fault. It's always the others who did something to make things happen like they did. *rolls eyes at Miss Perfect* OMG, my RoLo! Whaaa, I want it back! *cries*

Author's Response: They will make their way back, soon. Again, Reiko talked me into giving Jean a good ass-kicking. Notice, though, how she had a few pent-up feelings going on. She and Ororo are better off not being friends, now that we have seen that!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 06:25 pm Title: Off-Beat

Taking a break from painting *is exhausted*
Whee, Petey and Sage! Finally! Okay, it certainly didn't turn out like Peter had planned it but it still was a great first date sort of thing :)
Yay, the campfire song song! I better make an anti sea-bear circle to sit in... LOL :D
OMG, I love your Vic!I always had a thing for him, heh. Especially if he's written right. He's such a riot here, I love it!

Author's Response: Have to be careful about those sea rhinos, too...I'm grinning here. Glad you liked Vic, he reminds me of my husband and his friends when they get together and have a few beers, even though I was initially inspired by the comicverse Vic. Thanks for the review, Steph.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-19-07 - 02:57 am Title: Cheek to Cheek

Cee you're evil... really lol And what's going on with Anna and Remy? Are Ro and Logan going to really talk now or are they going to end up fighting again?

Author's Response: They have time to talk now. Anna and Remy will have time to talk, too.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 04:07 pm Title: Floored

You got me up here popping granola in my mouth like its popcorn and I'm watching a movie.

This was great, CeeCee. Jean so had that coming.

Ro and Logan need to fix this asap!

Author's Response: Reiko talked me into letting Ororo kick Jean's ass! I'm grinning over you and the granola. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 03:19 pm Title: Floored

What the hell happened at the end? My poor RoLo! The both of them were just pitiful in that scene. We go from comfort to hurt feelings. *sigh* I know you're gonna make this right, so I'm not too worried.

What an unrepentant cow Jean is! If that was her way of apologizing, then she can shove that up her ass! That was sorry. And she got too many licks in on 'Ro when they were fighting, IMO. I wanted 'Ro to channel Beatrix Kiddo and lay her ass out! Where's Jean's sense of loyalty? She is so selfish, it's maddening.

She just took Pietro's side after all the crap he put our girl through. I really do hope Ororo keeps Jean out of her life. 'Ro may have her faults, but Jean is just...WOW. There aren't enough words to describe what type of person Jean is in this story. This is cliche but, with friends like Jean, who needs enemies? She REALLY pissed me off in this chapter. Will Scott find out soon? I hope so.

It's a good thing 'Ro has Marie, Lorna and Ali. She's gonna need 'em. Can't wait for more!


Author's Response: Jean doesn't see what damage she did all around, and does not want to admit it, since she thinks she should have what she should have. It hasnt affected her yet, because Ororo was the one who was hurt. that will be remedied soon. Logan will have the chance to mull things over once Ororo comes to her senses. She will, quickly! Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 11:03 am Title: Floored

.....it will get happy again right? Please?

Jean is such a bitch. That was just low... blaming Ororo for Pietro cheating. She didn't even think about how Scott would feel... Does he find out? Please tell me Scott finds out.

And that Logan comes back... well he has to come back right? It's a RoLo....

update soon!!!

Author's Response: Logan has a hard time staying away from Ororo. He's stubborn that way. We'll explore that soon. And Scott's been pretty nice, so we have to cut him some slack.

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03-15-07 - 06:14 am Title: Floored

please tell me that Jean is going to get hers. Scott finding out would be awfully nice.

Author's Response: Originally I didn't want Scott to find out, since he had been pretty blameless, and it would have been fun to see Jean sweat it out a little, wondering when he would find out. But my last chapter blew that intent out of the water. Jean will have to explain herself, and Pietro will also likely sing like a bird...who knows! I'm bad.

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