[Report This]Date: 03-15-07 - 02:01 am Title: Off-Beat
I was so happy to see you'd updated when I logged on. Now, things I loved - going to see a Hugh Jackman movie - hah! your Victor, he's a riot; Piotr is a dream; your characters are such real people; everything!
Author's Response: I'll always love your Victor from Dreamin of a Day, so I bow to the master! Glad you were feeling the characters. Piotr is someone who has been through a lot, and the thought occurred to me that Sage had been too, in her own way. Glad you got to read this one, D!
[Report This]Date: 03-15-07 - 01:35 am Title: Off-Beat
1. Could Logan be any more awesome?
2. yay for Piotr and Sage.
3. Jean...grrr.
4. I really liked Victor; he is funny as hell.
Author's Response: 1. what the hey, I like him...2
Author's Response: ...my response got cut off, my husband chased me off the PC. 2. I like those two, they just kind of snuck up on me when I was planning my characters for this story. They seemed compatible, so thank you. 3. Yeah. She gets hers. 4. Vic was meant to be comic relief and an occasional antagonist to stir things up every now and again. Glad you liked him.
[Report This]Date: 03-15-07 - 01:06 am Title: Bad Move
I can't believed I missed this update!
1. Poor Logan. It all makes sense now on why he doesn't what no drama.
2. That ass kicking was sweet!
3. Can't believe I used to like 'Tro, that ass.
4. I find 'Ro lack of self worth interesting. 'Tro (or maybe someone else?) really did a number on her.
Author's Response: Yay! Kathy's back! 1. Yeah, he needed a backstory. 2. Thanks!, It was fun to write Logan's end of it. 3. 'Tro was meant to be likable to a point, but folks had to want 'Ro to break up with him. 4. 'Ro has some issues, mostly with 'Tro, but also with how she sees herself. That will come up again.
[Report This]Date: 03-14-07 - 09:11 pm Title: Off-Beat
Sage & Piort. Me likey.
Dave Chapelle and Spongebob both mentioned in the same chappy. My heroes!
I love the pace of the story but I admit I am chomping at the bit for a meatier confrontation between Jean and Ro. I wonder will Jean be remorseful and try to explain what was going on in her head? Or will she be clueless about how much damage she's done?
Also can't wait for the Erik to find out what a unrepentent lBastard Pietro is.
Author's Response: *grins* ...glad you likey! I love those two characters myself! And the meatier confrontation just got uploaded, along with a whole chapter full of "wtf??"
[Report This]Date: 03-14-07 - 07:35 pm Title: Off-Beat
LOL, go Sage! It's about friggin' time.
Author's Response: So sue me, I like her. The more her character spoke to me, the more I realized that she was a person who always had to work hard for what was hers. So, I let her have her moment! Thanks for visiting.
[Report This]Date: 03-14-07 - 12:05 am Title: Off-Beat
I can't even imagine what Erik's reaction will be when he finds out Pietro kept the knowledge of a grandchild away from him. Loving they way you're writing Sage and Piotr, too. Is Aliyah's father Bishop?
Can Ororo PLEASE beat Jean down? Just once? Because I would be royally pissed if Jean got off scott-free. She's had it too easy so far. A loving husband, loyal friends, a nice house and good looks. That heffa needs to suffer! BTW, Ororo and Logan make me melt. :)
Once again, Vic was a complete ass and I loved it! He tickled me to no end. What a jerk! LOL! Can't wait for more. I love this story!
Author's Response: I think I write just to read your reviews! This one cracked me up, so thank you VERY much! Yeah, Jean needs a beatin' don't she? Pietro will be hearing from his dad, who will likely insist on his grandfatherly rights.
[Report This]Date: 03-13-07 - 11:08 am Title: Off-Beat
lol I'm going to be late for my classes reading this! But it was so worth it! Is 'Ro going to go to lunch with Jean? Is Logan going to find out what happened? What's going on with Rogue... er Marie and Remy? Are Piotr and Sage going to go out out soon?
Author's Response: sorry to make you late! but thanks for reading! I am working on the lunch chapter as we speak, and Sage and Piotr are going to have some time together pretty soon, I like them too much not to put them together. Logan will find out what happened, and he will need to deal wtih some details he forgot about previously.
[Report This]Date: 03-01-07 - 03:39 am Title: Bad Move
Ok ok! You win. I am begging for a cat fight, or a reveal. It's official you should be Cheaters new executive producer.
I hope Scott reams Jean! I mean Pietro. No no no, Jean. Dammit someone give that man two beams to ram them all with.
Author's Response: The reveal has mostly happened already, although Pietro might weigh in eventually! Jean and Ororo aren't done talking about this yet, so you might get that catfight wish. Scott, I haven't figured out how to make him react to this yet.
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 11:04 am Title: Bad Move
Someone’s an addict for dramatics! I loved the fight scenes! I actually loved how Pietro kissed her but of course he had to go down! And boy did he. Nice.
Some back story!
Author's Response: Thanks, kid. The back story was the hardest part, because I thought "what would make Logan, who feels he hit the jackpot with Ororo, shy away from giving himself fully to what they have?" From the third chapter of the story, when we see a little of Logan's life, learn why he chose his current career, etc, we know he left an ugly life behind him. I haven't decided how it will catch up with him yet. Yeah, I wanted to get more elaborate with the fight scene, but they are not my strong suit. Thanks for visiting.
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:52 am Title: Side Stepping
Your characters come to life, CeeCee - so big! I'm loving all the dialouge. And Cyrstal! What a surprise that was. I love your sweet Logan. I love the Remy parts too, Logan and Remy and Rogue and Remy. I have to say even though Pietro's treated her so badly I can't help but like him so much the ending made my heart flutter just a tiny bit. I've long wanted to do a Pietro/Ororo story and never have. Well, RoLo always wins out in the end. Next chapter should be mighty interesting.
Author's Response: Pietro isn't a person worth hating for who he is, so much as what he has done. Once upon a time, Ororo loved him pretty deeply and she had good reason why. So, yeah, I expect someone reading his parts to want to smack him, but to regret having to! Glad you are enjoying this, and I have been meaning to do more with Pietro and Ororo, too, eventually, and more likely on FF.net.
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:28 am Title: Word Games
Whoa! What more can I say? I can't believe I haven't been caught up on this! Whoa.
Author's Response: glad you caught up! C
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:15 am Title: No More Words
Oh no he didn’t! That’s a serious bad breakup. I love it when Marvel characters are used like Jennifer as the lawyer. And Logan, he was like a knight in shining armor. You made this so real somehow. An excellent chapter that for some reason had me tearing up.
Author's Response: oh yes he did!!! I threw in a lot of minor characters from Marvel, albeit veiled. Crystal, Santo, Jennifer, Mary...I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm still grinning over African Skies.
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:09 am Title: Mixed Messages
I didn't read this one. Love the drama, made me laugh. Why does it ring so true? Suppose it's your very realistic writing.
Author's Response: I got a lot of feedback about the phone messages...I've both received and left some like that, back in my youth. Had to have some insanity to draw from ;-)
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:06 am Title: Sit Tight
O.o NC-17! My oh my. I so should not have read this! ;D
Author's Response: oops...did I forget my warning? I did, however, try to tone it down a wee bit from my standard smut and not make it an overly detailed gropefest. It was hard, though, since I had been building up to it for a while. Pietro's love scenes with Ororo were briefer and less intensive, with more "suggestive" text because I wanted to downplay their intimacy, especially since things were rocky between them. With Logan and Ororo, though, my imagination cut loose, and I let everything hang out. Oh, well. I promise there will be more meaningful goings on than the whoopee in this story.
[Report This]Date: 02-24-07 - 10:05 am Title: Cold Feet!
I didn't realize I didn't review this when I read it. Lovely ending!
Author's Response: Hey, D! Thanks for the review, and for jumping back into this mess of a story I'm scribbling, I know it's more twisted than a box of spiraled noodles, but for me, that's typical.
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