Vic is in a killing mood, no surprise there...but it seems that Logan is too. Hmm...interesting. Thanks for another good chapter!

i just went back and re-read the entire story. this is really well written. from the fight scenes to each character's thoughts, you have successfully written a well-developed, consistent, entertaining story.

i can't wait to see what the next chapter presents!!!

Okay i need an update this story is amazing :)

"Do yo want me to kill him" You have to love Logan with his direct approach.
I wonder what 'Ro will feel about his offer. :) He is so sincere...vicious yes but sincere. It is sweet in it's way.

hmm... seems to leading up tp a huge fight, even if 'Ro says no. But still, that was enough to make my wish for a happy ending that much closer.

Wow! What a cliff hanger! Please up date soon.

Whoa...hold up. "Do you want me to kill him?"

Aw, man, I can't WAIT to see what happens next.

This was moving, because of different factors. Ororo telling Logan he was beautiful, too, is always neat, and seldom done. The fact that someone called him worthless at different points in his life makes you wanna cry. Ororo let her guard down and admitted that Vic was coming after her; again, a huge leap of faith, since all he has seen of her so far is her leaving his apartment before he gets the chance to enjoy their downtime, giving him no real explanations as to where she is going or where she has been.

I'm really enjoying this. Still reminds me of Hard Day's Night, also on this site, but in a good way. Very similar, gritty flavor, but this is tighter, and it's cohesive in that it tells just as much story with fewer words. You never waste 'em!

I read the entire story the other night and forgot to leave a review. FABOO story, oh my god. very original and that's what i love the most. dig that creed and ororo had a relationship and now she's found logan and oh man the shit is gonna hit the fan. AWESOME story!!!