Reviews For Breathe me 'til your last breath
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Reviewer: rory Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02-16-07 - 03:53 pm Title: Black as death
Date: 02-16-07 - 03:53 pm Title: Black as death
You should add more soon
Reviewer: ororo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 01:39 am Title: Black as death
Date: 12-29-06 - 01:39 am Title: Black as death
i would like to know when this will be finished! (it was good)
Reviewer: Darlin Signed [Report This]
Date: 11-07-06 - 12:06 am Title: Black as death
Date: 11-07-06 - 12:06 am Title: Black as death
Very short but promising.
Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10-31-06 - 12:22 am Title: Black as death
Date: 10-31-06 - 12:22 am Title: Black as death
Good first person narrative, it pulls the reader in quickly.
Hyphenate "smoke-filled" if you get a moment, it is a compound adjective in the tense you are using it in.
I hope you write us more of this neat story. I love the title, too.
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