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Reviewer: rory Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02-16-07 - 03:53 pm Title: Black as death

You should add more soon

Reviewer: ororo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-29-06 - 01:39 am Title: Black as death

i would like to know when this will be finished! (it was good)

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-07-06 - 12:06 am Title: Black as death

Very short but promising.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-31-06 - 12:22 am Title: Black as death

Good first person narrative, it pulls the reader in quickly.

Hyphenate "smoke-filled" if you get a moment, it is a compound adjective in the tense you are using it in.

I hope you write us more of this neat story. I love the title, too.

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