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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05-04-07 - 06:29 pm Title: Prisoners

Poor Lorna, things seem to get worse and worse for her. I'm glad she got away from those two guys. Even though they got killed in the process.
Loved Logan calling Ro, so sweet. He seems to care quite a lot about her. And so does she, cradling the phone in her hand like that. :)
I hope Forge won't be able to mess things up. I'm always afraid when he's about to come into the picture, while Ororo and Logan are just at the beginning of sorting out their feelings.

Author's Response: Forge will be around long enough to stir the pot. Ororo may be impressed by him, but he's got to go a long way to earn her trust, let alone affection. This story will become more Logan-centric as time wears on. There will be more Lorna as I also develop Magneto and their connection.

Reviewer: BrightLady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-07 - 04:35 pm Title: Prisoners

Wow. Poor Lorna. Will she ever make it to Xavier's? Homegirl needs serious help with her gift. I'm glad Logan called Ororo. That's a positive step in their relationship. But now Forge is coming. Is he gonna screw things up for our RoLo? I hope not. And The Cure wasn't much of a "cure". Hmm. I see trouble in the near future.

I'm eager to read how this story unfolds. :)

Author's Response: She will get help, and a new set of problems, from a different source soon before she ends up at Xavier's. She might not end up there alone, either. This is another "X4" fic with heavy comic overtones, so your guess is as good as mine what they heck the characters will tell me next! Thanks, buddy.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-07 - 03:02 am Title: Prisoners

As hectic as my life is right now--I can always take a minute to review a great fic. This was a wonderful chapter. You never cease to amaze and improve, Cee. **brava!!**

Author's Response: giiiirrrllll, I have MISSED you. And I'm TOTALLY flattered that you took a minute to visit, as crazy as things have been. Glad you enjoyed it. We miss your stories, you know that, but your reviews always make me grin broadly when you have those spare nanoseconds to leave them. God bless you, Hobbins. And thanks.

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-29-07 - 01:53 am Title: Prisoners

I LOVE Ali and Lorna as best friends in this... I feel bad for her, she'll be safe soon right? So cute how Logan called Ororo. I like seeing the bits of Erik's past too. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: she will be safe soon, but not in the manner that she'd hoped. Erik will be prominent in this again soon. His past will be more complex, and based less on the movie.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-28-07 - 03:30 pm Title: Prisoners

Great chapter!!!! I can’t wait to see what happens next so UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Thanks, Dragon! Might update this week, depends on what I have on my mind first.

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