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Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 11:10 pm Title: Business as Usual

I missed so much! Note to self: no getting more than 1 chapter behind in Cee's fics.

Anyway, I'm still not sure that Lorna should trust Erik. He's up to something. I'm so glad Ororo and Logan finally confessed! And the image thing with Forge was a little creepy but cute at the same time.

Author's Response: Stinker! The thing with the images in the Danger Room are derived from the issue of Uncanny, the "Lifedeath" annual. Pick it up used on eBay. Erik is ALWAYS up to something. Let's see what happens.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-07-07 - 12:44 am Title: Business as Usual

I feel sorry for Forge...not sorry enough to want him with our girl but sorry none the less. I hope that Logan is not thrown to badly for a loop by his parting words. Mags is a sly old bird I hope that Lorna doesn't get to screwed up in the process of him executing his plans. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Poor Lorna will have to deal with his mind games again...and Forge isn't done trying to prove himself.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-07 - 06:20 pm Title: Business as Usual

A chapter full of confessions. Loved it! :D I wonder what Lorna will do now. Following her father no matter what, or making up her own mind. I'm hoping for the latter. She's a good kid.
Ohh, the RoLo! *loves* Can't wait for more, now that they finally said what needed to be said :)

Author's Response: It took me a while to figure out what they were going to say. Lorna will have a hard time pretty soon. She resents Erik, but she still wants to please him for what he's done for her so far, and because of the family connection between them. More RoLo soon, but not quite yet. Thanks for weighing in, Steph!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-07 - 03:27 pm Title: Business as Usual

I still like Forge. Ehn, what can I say, you write him tremendously well. This was a fabulous update, Cee. Your language, always pleasant to read, was somehow different in this chapter, and not in a bad way. I found the way you turned phrases very interesting and I will admit to feeling a bit green with envy. **huggles**

Author's Response: *gah* Pleasant??? I always worry when I hear that word. In the case of this chapter, I did what my muse told me, and she was in a weird mood. Really need to feed her some chocolate... But yeah, the words didn't come easily this time around, and the scene with Logan and 'Ro lost some of its power, as well as between Lorna and Erik. I'm just too lazy to change it. At any rate, my own green-eyed monster is eyeballing your own goodies, particularly Charade. I hope you give us more of it, no matter what you do with it.

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