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Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-20-07 - 05:35 pm Title: Powerless

Oh, geez! Ro! *stares at screen*
Erik. Ugh. Me no likey. Poor Lorna, seriously. I wouldn't want to be her right now.
It's Erik controlling Logan, right? Damn.
Loved Kitty hacking the system! "Got any fantasies, Piotr?" LOL

Hey, you just posted the next chapter. Whee! I'm off to eat something first, I'm starved. Hope to get to read it after that though. Can't wait. :D

Author's Response: Kitty and Piotr are silly. I miss the old days when Claremont was writing 'em, but I also love Joss Whedon's take on them now. Thanks again for reading. And yeah, darn Erik...

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-20-07 - 04:09 pm Title: Powerless

Can I just say that I really don't like Erik? Horrible, horrible man!

Is 'Ro going to be okay??? I thought Forge was the one dying! Well and Gyrich too, but I'm not counting him as a loss. 'Ro can't die!!!

Author's Response: You might pity him in the next chapter. 'Ro isn't in great shape yet. Me? Kill 'Ro? In this story? Heck, no. And that's all I'm gonna say!

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11-19-07 - 03:41 am Title: Powerless

wow...really good...really really good!

Author's Response: Thank you! Thank you, thank you! Cee

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10-04-07 - 07:06 pm Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

“You’re mine,” she declared. *loves* :D

Ugh, that nullifier really worries me...
... as does this über-evil cliffhanger! AAAaahh! I need to know what's next! *hopes for Gyrich getting his ass kicked, sliced and fried*

Author's Response: Hmmm. Sliced, friend, and ass kicked. Sounds good, Steph. Yeah, let's have some of that! The nullifier will indeed be a problem...and that's all I'm gonna say. :-) Kisses!

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-30-07 - 03:43 pm Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

Man alive! Romance! Action! Drama! Love the chapter. I wonder what surprises await our team. Good chapter.

Author's Response: All kinds of crazy stuff! Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: NoirLibra Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-27-07 - 04:48 pm Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

The shit is about to hit the fan now!

Gyrich needs an ass-whooping and pronto

Please let everyone come home...even Mags.
I'm nervous here. Ororo and Logan were so sentimental at home and that never seems to be a good thing when they're going out to fight. Someone tends never to come back.

.And yay for Ororo and Logan finally getting some!



Author's Response: Yup, something's about to hit the fan! Hee hee. Magneto? We'll see. His fate is up in the air, since there are so many loose ends with him, Lorna, the Prime, Logan, and his goals in general. He was noble as long as he didn't have his powers at full strength, but his agenda might not have changed now that he's back in the game. Logan and Ororo will likely come home (grin), but things may change when they get back! And yes, yay for them getting some!

Reviewer: TigerStorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-27-07 - 11:19 am Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

evil cliffhanger!!! How could you just leave us like that??

The scene between Ororo and Logan was so cute, but it so doesn't make up for that ending!!

Author's Response: You know how evil I am by now, Tigerbaby! And the answer to that is, I ran out of steam. Still stewing about how to kick Gyrich's heiney. Cute, huh? ;-) Hee. More cuteness eventually, too.

Reviewer: Dragon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-26-07 - 01:43 pm Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.

Author's Response: Glad you liked it, Quana. Thanks for visiting.

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-25-07 - 10:44 pm Title: This Youthful Heart Can Love You

As always a spectacular read! You write with a flare and dynamic not easily matched! I love it.


sidenote: "He knew he’d have a mark in the morning..." Uhm, why? He's Logan, he heals. LOL.

Author's Response: Right...oops. What the heck! She bit him, and she bit him pretty good!!! Glad you enjoyed it, and that you had a hot minute to read it. Miss you, Hobbins.

Reviewer: Stormcrow Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-16-07 - 01:03 pm Title: Only Himself to Blame

i liked this. great opening

Author's Response: Good. I'm glad you liked it. Subsequent chapters of this are kinda long. Can't wait for more of your current one, when you get to it!

Reviewer: tigerstorm Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-10-07 - 11:10 pm Title: Business as Usual

I missed so much! Note to self: no getting more than 1 chapter behind in Cee's fics.

Anyway, I'm still not sure that Lorna should trust Erik. He's up to something. I'm so glad Ororo and Logan finally confessed! And the image thing with Forge was a little creepy but cute at the same time.

Author's Response: Stinker! The thing with the images in the Danger Room are derived from the issue of Uncanny, the "Lifedeath" annual. Pick it up used on eBay. Erik is ALWAYS up to something. Let's see what happens.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-07-07 - 12:44 am Title: Business as Usual

I feel sorry for Forge...not sorry enough to want him with our girl but sorry none the less. I hope that Logan is not thrown to badly for a loop by his parting words. Mags is a sly old bird I hope that Lorna doesn't get to screwed up in the process of him executing his plans. Good chapter.

Author's Response: Poor Lorna will have to deal with his mind games again...and Forge isn't done trying to prove himself.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-07 - 06:20 pm Title: Business as Usual

A chapter full of confessions. Loved it! :D I wonder what Lorna will do now. Following her father no matter what, or making up her own mind. I'm hoping for the latter. She's a good kid.
Ohh, the RoLo! *loves* Can't wait for more, now that they finally said what needed to be said :)

Author's Response: It took me a while to figure out what they were going to say. Lorna will have a hard time pretty soon. She resents Erik, but she still wants to please him for what he's done for her so far, and because of the family connection between them. More RoLo soon, but not quite yet. Thanks for weighing in, Steph!

Reviewer: windrider1 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09-06-07 - 03:27 pm Title: Business as Usual

I still like Forge. Ehn, what can I say, you write him tremendously well. This was a fabulous update, Cee. Your language, always pleasant to read, was somehow different in this chapter, and not in a bad way. I found the way you turned phrases very interesting and I will admit to feeling a bit green with envy. **huggles**

Author's Response: *gah* Pleasant??? I always worry when I hear that word. In the case of this chapter, I did what my muse told me, and she was in a weird mood. Really need to feed her some chocolate... But yeah, the words didn't come easily this time around, and the scene with Logan and 'Ro lost some of its power, as well as between Lorna and Erik. I'm just too lazy to change it. At any rate, my own green-eyed monster is eyeballing your own goodies, particularly Charade. I hope you give us more of it, no matter what you do with it.

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08-31-07 - 05:31 pm Title: Don’t Want to Leave You Lonely

"She felt him tremble. Logan never trembled." Mmmhh, I love lines like these :D Brings out the effect they have on each other so much more.
Ohhh, I hope Logan losing his mutation (even if it's just for a while) will remain a threat. Poor guy.
They definitely need to find a way to reprogram the Prime units and send them after Gyrich and his goons.

Author's Response: Logan's mutation might be in danger, but other mutants may be the unwitting target of that device. I'm still plotting this. The idea of the Prime ops being reprogrammed is something that will be explored indeed.

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