[Report This]Date: 06-01-07 - 10:27 am Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
great chapter as always but please update soon
Author's Response: I will work on it! Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 06-01-07 - 03:44 am Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Logan makes me all tingly when he comes on the scene. I just picture Hugh Jackman in all his masculine glory. *shudders*
This is a review for last chapter as well. Loved the Erik/Lorna interaction. They have this push and pull going on. Lorna's defiance and Erik's determination may cause problems in their budding relationship. I can only imagine what Lorna will say when she finds out Erik's her daddy.
Darn that Forge. Being all sweet and attentive. I'm sure he has something up his sleeve. He's being too invasive too soon. Logan finding 'Ro and Forge snogging was perfect! Man, was homeboy pissed! lol
And the last line of the chapter, "Someone else might want a taste..." Alright now, Ororo. Logan's temper is a thing of legend. Don't make him angry. *sigh* I love RoLo.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I think she likes making him angry! Glad you left me this lovely, detailed review. Gives me something to work with! Lorna and Erik will pop up again.
[Report This]Date: 06-01-07 - 02:26 am Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Cee! You rock! We'll have to chat this weekend.... anyway, loved the spat between Logan and 'Ro. I loved the danger room part too, well before Forge and Ororo kissed. I've just always been a RoLo girl. I grew up on the cartoon, not the comics lol
Author's Response: There's my girl! Missed you today! Glad you liked the spat. I love writing these two when they're mad, for some reason. Easier to imagine the dialogue when they start to snap. I love RoLo, too, but back in the day, Forge and 'Ro were one of my favorite 'ships. So sue me! Talk soon.
[Report This]Date: 06-01-07 - 01:02 am Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Whoo! Yee-haw! I'll turn right back around....
Bravo! Good stuff! Love it!
Author's Response: All right! Love the review! Thanks! I'm glad you got a kick out of it, Voli.
[Report This]Date: 05-31-07 - 11:57 pm Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
wow!!! that was intense...poor logan
Author's Response: awww, poor Logan? Yeah, he was the one who took a hit in this chapter, but Ororo needs to get busy and find better ways to keep his attention. I figured the least he deserved was a beer. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 05-31-07 - 11:54 pm Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Yay!!! The confrontation I've been waiting for.
Great update.
Author's Response: The confrontation? What confrontation? Oh, THAT confrontation! (grin) ...yeah, the stuff was likely to hit the fan once Logan got home. I'm so glad you liked it, and thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05-31-07 - 11:49 pm Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Yep! That 's what I'm talking about!!! That was great! I can't wait for more....Logan had it coming and Forge is a good challenge for Logan. Now.....what is Logan willing to do to keep Ororo? Ohhh.....I like this....
Author's Response: Logan? He's always been willing to go to the wall for Jean, believing that he loved her, so he will probably do something pretty big, pretty soon. Glad you enjoyed it, 'Phoenix.
[Report This]Date: 05-31-07 - 08:59 pm Title: I’ll Turn Right Back Around
Damn..there was some hardcore truth spoken there....let the chasing ensue!
Author's Response: Let's hope Ororo didn't chase Logan away!!! He's off licking her wounds, but she might have been hasty in her assumptions about Forge...and that's all I'm giving away! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05-30-07 - 06:45 pm Title: You Got to Make Me Change My Mind
Always a delightful read from you, Cee. But the way you write Forge reminds me of the yester years of Marvel when I actually LIKED the man and his direct approach to Ororo. He was always able to hold his own with her in a non-forceful, open way and before he jaunted with Raven, I rooted for him (despite my mad-on RoLo fetish from day f'ing one! lol) and your writing takes me back to those days and I love you for it. I know this is the ROLO Realm and all, but a little FoRo couldn't hurt **wink wink**
Author's Response: It's always a blessing to see feedback from you and to throw ideas back and forth, Hobbins. I always liked Forge too, back in the day, even when his invention accidentally crippled Storm, since he was still in love with her. That's saying something, since she basically gutted him, and had more or less told him previously that they'd meet again, and that she'd kick his butt!!! I liked his direct approach, too. After she found out what he did, he never held anything back. I'm grinning here about FoRo...
[Report This]Date: 05-30-07 - 06:37 am Title: You Got to Make Me Change My Mind
I can only imagine the kind of trouble Magneto and Lorna are about to get themselves in. I loved the interaction between Forge and Ororo. It was sweet. Can't wait to see how that translates once Logan's back in the picture. Excellent chapter. :-) Glad to see you updated!
Author's Response: Glad to see this review! Thanks, Tempest. Erik and Lorna have been talking to me again, and now that he has a partner in crime, Erik's feeling his oats and wanting to stir up more trouble. To me, she gets her feistiness from her father. Forge is still a character I like, even when he was in the Mystique series as a silent sidekick. I worked him into a Mystique fic I started out on Superstories this week. If I didn't love Logan being with 'Ro, I'd write a lot of Forge fic. Very few people do.
[Report This]Date: 05-30-07 - 03:23 am Title: You Got to Make Me Change My Mind
Ugh!! You finally get to the part where Forge makes his move and you stop....Ahhhhhh! I hope that Forge and Ororo get together at least once. And I can hardly wait until Logan finds out...That will be well work reading (smile).
Author's Response: Thanks! I can't wait til he finds out, either! ;-) And thank you for the feedback.
[Report This]Date: 05-30-07 - 03:01 am Title: You Got to Make Me Change My Mind
oooooooooooooohhhhhhhh Logan you better get back to your girl!
Author's Response: Yeah, Logan, go get your woman! (grin) He'll get a clue soon, I promise.
[Report This]Date: 05-30-07 - 02:48 am Title: You Got to Make Me Change My Mind
amazing chapter.... the scene with 'Ro and Forge was very cute even though I don't like them together. I really can't wait to see what you come up with next!
Author's Response: He won't have too much more time in the spotlight, but I won't spoil it for you! Back in the day, 'Ro and Forge were hot. They were my favorite pairing before I discovered fanfic. Glad you enjoyed this; it danced around in my imagination pretty vividly before I started typing it. Thanks, Tiger!
[Report This]Date: 05-27-07 - 03:48 pm Title: Rest Stop
What a team Erik and Lorna are! Their scene was both humorous and heartbreaking. My mom is a Trekkie as well. She prefers Jean-Luc Picard over the other captains.
Forge is laying that charm on thick, isn't he? I'll be glad when Logan comes back home. I like male pissing contests b/t Logan and Forge. lol
Author's Response: I love Star Trek, but I could never embody the personalities of any of the characters on any of those shows well enough to fic about them. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you liked Erik and Lorna. Their story is the one that is asking me to tell it since I started writing this. Forge and Logan will butt heads. I promise.
[Report This]Date: 05-24-07 - 02:32 am Title: Only Himself to Blame
i can't help but like forge in this story, i hope he gives logan a good run for his money, ii am also liking the stories of everyone else. please update soon
Author's Response: I want people to like Forge; Ororo's a desirable woman, and it's fun to have two men chasing after her the way all of them always did after Jean. Thanks for reading and reviewing, Chyti. I may update within the week. Take care!
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