Date: 02-25-12 - 09:42 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
To be honest, you could end it here. This is a decent place to end. Everything is out in the open and they resolved to fix their broken marriage. There's nothing left really. Yet again your lemons are amazing. I really enjoyed this story.
Date: 03-27-07 - 04:20 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
In general, I have always been a huge Psylocke fan. I love the Angel/Psylocke thing here. Well done again.
Date: 01-12-07 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
Whoa, he really attacked her. Damn. I somewhat understand his actions now, he wanted to protect her. From himself. But he should have trusted her. Giving her a say in this decision, too. I'm glad she still wants to fight for them, no matter what. That's Ro, strong and determinded :)
Date: 01-09-07 - 04:23 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
Ohhh. This was a nice Update! I love that Ororo wants Logan back, warts and all. And I LOVE how Angel, not so shyly, goes after Psylocke.
I can hardly wait for the next Update.
Date: 01-08-07 - 12:49 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
I loved War and Betsy in this chapter. So tender and sincere. And of course I loved the RoLo moments. More, please!
Date: 01-07-07 - 02:16 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
Cut straight to the heart, that one did. Logan's pretty solid, but it's duck and run for him when it comes to hurting Ororo. Sometimes I do wonder who's really the stronger one, eh?
Well, Ororo's always been a fighter. Too bad they don't show that bit of her anymore, but you got it down pat.
Brilliant stuff. Betsy's hilarious and Warren's adorable. Perfect.
Date: 01-07-07 - 08:49 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
betsy doesnt love him does she?
Date: 01-07-07 - 04:41 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
Damn this is a great story. I seriously don't know how you do it. After reading chapter 6 I was practically speechless.
Wow I love this story.
Date: 01-07-07 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
I guess some good came out of the "reveal" all the way around. I can really understand Logan's compulsion to cover up the incident especially when she pulled away from him in the wake of it. It was still a bad idea to do it but given his history totally understandable.
Date: 01-06-07 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
Awwwwww. I'm glad she didn't cut out on Logan. And I adore Psylocke and Angel too. :D This was a great update!! Look forward to more!! **huggles**
Date: 01-06-07 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
(sniff, sniff) Holy Canoly that was AMAZING! You paint Storm as a super hero even in her marriage. WOW! Poor Wolvie, is he bleeding or what, because Storm not only twisted the knife, she gutted him wide open.
She puts the D in dedication and that's an amazing feat.
Give yourself a pat on the back for this emotional roller coaster story.
Rolletti
Date: 01-06-07 - 08:00 pm Title: Chapter Six: Pretending
I just love this, 'nuff said :-).