Okay. This turned the tide, a little. I love the graphic, by the way.

I'm wondering why the baby's name is still nobody, though, since she had assigned it enough personhood to apologize. Good to see she's motivated by a fear of ending up alone, but again, we don't have a clue quite yet of who left her alone. We assume it by what we know of her character's history as an orphan, granted, but...give us more. Good structure, nice prose, but sell me on this. I am off to read your next chapter.

Author's Response: Don't worry the baby will get named very shortly. i'm glad your still reading though.