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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-06 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 4

That was some bombshell to drop at dinner! Cool! Gave me plenty of insight as to why she was angry and scared in chapter one. Good work making the tone easy to read.

Author's Response: You'll love the next chapter then-or so I hope!

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 4

I'm loving this, even though the chapters are way too short they still seem to fulfill the plot well. Please continue I'm really enjoying this and am looking forward to reading much more of it.

Author's Response: Good, 'cause there's more to come soon

Reviewer: RoLoaddict Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4

these letters are so touching but i want more full chapters of what is going on you are just teasing me

Author's Response: The letters are the main focus in the story, but I'll try and add some of the plot here and there, okay?

Reviewer: Kendall15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 07:59 pm Title: Chapter 4

Another great chapter! It is so bad that Logan doesn't want anything to do with the baby and he chose to leave them, I am waiting for the next chapter. I'm happy Ororo stood strong for her child, she is the strong and peaceful goddess of course. I just hope everything goes smoothly for them, I can't wait to see if Logan comes back or not and see the baby. This is a wonderful story written with good interpretation on each of the character's emotions but written in a good poetic format, I'm lovin' this, keep it up girl!
-Kendall15


Author's Response: Are you sure Logan doesn't want anything to do with the baby?

Reviewer: lamisi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-05-06 - 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 4

okay. . .this is getting more and more interesting. i admit that i was shocked at the tone of the first chapter and wasn't sure if i liked it or not. as you show ororo going through the emotions, however, you seem to have captured her humanity. nicely done.

as for this chapter. . . i wanted to slap the sh-t out of logan. must be good writing!

Author's Response: Thanks alot I'm glad you do like my story

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