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Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-07-06 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 5

Perfect. A letter from Logan. I sensed it coming around the corner, but didn't want to suggest it prematurely. Good internal narrative. Now I wonder if Ororo sensed him sneaking around reading her diary? ;-)

Keep it coming.

Author's Response: Lets hope she didn't notice him... Was it really that predictable? ;P

Reviewer: modernbard Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-07-06 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 5

Wow; I guess I understand where Logan's coming from. Anyone he's ever cared about has gotten hurt one way or another. How can he expect his child to be any different? Still somethings are worth the risk.

Author's Response: True, somethings are still worth the risk ;D

Reviewer: Dd75k Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-06 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5

Sad to see, Logan doesn't want to be anything nothing but an uncle to his and Ororo child. Hope he'll change
his mind, and talk to Storm about this important matter
at hand and be by her side through hard time she's having. I'm enjoying this story and I go back and read it
with a little music. Write more soon.

Letter to my Unborn:

I'm writing you a letter
This is for my unborn child
I wanna to let you know, that I love you
I think about you everyday
I have so much to say
So i'm letting you know I feel this way.

Just know that your Daddy was a soilder
Me against the world
Bless all the boys and all my little girls
To the Lord i'm enternal resting in peace
Please take care of my seed and my unborn child
Writtin by: Tupac Shakur



Author's Response: Lets see shall we, Logan might change his mind yet...

Reviewer: Kendall15 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-06 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 5

Wow! That's a surprise chapter, words cannot describe this chapter. It's simply great! It's good to see what Logan really meant and felt, keep on going gurl!
-Kendall15

Author's Response: I knew you'd enjoy this chapter, thanks alot for all your support. more to come soon.

Reviewer: Pari Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12-06-06 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

Another good chapter, more please:)

As a side note I have removed all the other pictures you added to your story, there's was an ad attached to them that was placed to the site. Sorry but the only ads I want here are the one I place. On this chapter I realized I could just remove the ad part from the coding and just left the code for the actual picture, please take care to watch out for that in the future.
Please remove any ad coding attached to your pics, it seems the space you have these pics stored attaches ad coding. You could just upload the pics to your account here and post that link. ~ Pari

Author's Response: If I had known that my pics had ads attached to them I would not have uploaded them in the first place, my apologies. Glasd your enjoying my story, more to come soon.

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