I liked reading this fic., waiting and even hoping for Ororo's heart not to fully break. I enjoyed her still hoping even after the horrible way Logan left, but babies do that to people. There's so much emotions and actions that go along with having one, even before they get here. It can be overwhelming...at least he knows he handled it wrong and maybe he'll get a fast move on home! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed this story and hipefully there will be a sequel I just havnt made my mind up yet. Thank you for your review.

I love the little couplets that you put at the end of these chapters, they always have the synopsis of the chapter, wrapped up in a neat little nutshell. Makes it fun and easy to read.

The thought of Ororo flying with the baby is neat; it reminds me of Elfquest. There is a character named Dewshine in that book who always climbed trees while she was pregnant with her son, because his father was a Glider elf who could fly, named Tyldak. So she "brought him close to the sky everyday." Good stuff.

Author's Response: I hadnt noticed that I put couplets on the end of each chapter I just wrote what I thought went best, lol. Aww that's cute, I'm ill and that makes me wanna cry-stupid cold.