OMG!!!! It was wonderful, e xciting, beautiful, sad , bring tears of joy to your eyes, and just wow. I loved the way you did the lyrics of a song in the begining of each chapter and aldo how later on Logan begins to write to the baby also.I t was a great story i must admit i almost cried. You did a great job on writing this story and keep up the great work!

Somehow I figured he would be peeking at her letters. What would have also been revealing, in hindsight, was if Logan had seen the first letter she wrote that showed how upset and shocked she had been, and how afraid she seemed to be of being abandoned. His reactions to that letter alone would have been worth exploring back around the time that he wrote his own letter to Kendall.

BUT...nice job. The story went where it was supposed to go, despite the economy of words. Easy to read, quotable lines, and good characterization once we warmed up to Logan and Ororo. All right, then. Write us some more stories!

Author's Response: He had seen the first letter but I guess I already had the chapters planned out, anyway I'm glad you liked it and when i do write further stories I hope your the one to nitpick-it really does help. Thanks...

*cries* THAT WAS SO BEAUTIFUL!!!...really I'm crying. I loved the ending, Logan came home to Ororo to see his daughter, and Oroor knew of his letters! You are a very good writer, and I advise you keep it up! :), I hope to hear from you soon.

Author's Response: She only knew of his letters because he said he'd been writing them too. I don't know if I'll write any more stories yet...but maybe after a long break. : )