[Report This]Date: 12-16-06 - 03:55 am Title: Chapter 8
hA! aNOTHER CHAPTER, sorry I didn't review soon. I liked this chap, I see its quite longer. Hope to hear from you again!
-Kendall15
Author's Response: Yay more updates...
[Report This]Date: 12-16-06 - 03:25 am Title: Chapter 8
Hormones...wahahaha. Yeah. Been there, done that, got the shirt. I love the last line...
Author's Response: LOL!
[Report This]Date: 12-12-06 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 7
Wow! I'm reviewing this story for the first time. Just like most people i was put off by the first chapter...But curiosity drve me to read further and ever since the second chapter i've grown fond of this story. It's fabulous! I love the letter style with little information and the fact that it's up to us to piece it together. No full chapters please! I love the way Logan started writing letters too...It's a great story! Update soon!
Author's Response: Glad you like it, I'll be updating soon, keep reading!
[Report This]Date: 12-10-06 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 7
Logan wrote again! Aw I like his second letter, it's nice to see how he really feels for his child. I just can't wait until the child is born, great chapter again, Hope you update!
-Kendall15
Author's Response: The birth isnt to far away I hope...Thanks for another uplifting update.
[Report This]Date: 12-10-06 - 05:45 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love the narrative in this one, particularly Logan calling the baby "sport." That's cute, because Ororo and Logan have both already called dibs on what the gender will be.
Author's Response: Like what most parents may do, choose the childs sex by their own...
[Report This]Date: 12-08-06 - 01:01 am Title: Chapter 6
I liked this chapter, I see maybe Ororo didn't see the letter Logan wrote yet. It's sad she doesn't know what Logan is thinking but she wants him in the picture. Keep on going! You rock!
Author's Response: Ororo didn't see the letter that Logan wrote, but maybe soon she will, I haven't decicded yet.
[Report This]Date: 12-08-06 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay. This line was cute and made me laugh:
Oh and before I forget, Jean wants to know how you enjoyed dinner last night, I told her you didn’t like it because I brought it all back up this morning, I could be wrong though.
That's hysterical and oh, so true. It was made doubly funny by the fact that Jean is a telepath, so it makes sense for her to "ask Kendall a question." Classic.
Author's Response: I'm glad you thought so, lol!
[Report This]Date: 12-07-06 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 5
Perfect. A letter from Logan. I sensed it coming around the corner, but didn't want to suggest it prematurely. Good internal narrative. Now I wonder if Ororo sensed him sneaking around reading her diary? ;-)
Keep it coming.
Author's Response: Lets hope she didn't notice him...
Was it really that predictable? ;P
[Report This]Date: 12-07-06 - 01:28 am Title: Chapter 5
Wow; I guess I understand where Logan's coming from. Anyone he's ever cared about has gotten hurt one way or another. How can he expect his child to be any different? Still somethings are worth the risk.
Author's Response: True, somethings are still worth the risk ;D
[Report This]Date: 12-06-06 - 11:47 pm Title: Chapter 5
Sad to see, Logan doesn't want to be anything nothing but an uncle to his and Ororo child. Hope he'll change
his mind, and talk to Storm about this important matter
at hand and be by her side through hard time she's having. I'm enjoying this story and I go back and read it
with a little music. Write more soon.
Letter to my Unborn:
I'm writing you a letter
This is for my unborn child
I wanna to let you know, that I love you
I think about you everyday
I have so much to say
So i'm letting you know I feel this way.
Just know that your Daddy was a soilder
Me against the world
Bless all the boys and all my little girls
To the Lord i'm enternal resting in peace
Please take care of my seed and my unborn child
Writtin by: Tupac Shakur
Author's Response: Lets see shall we, Logan might change his mind yet...
[Report This]Date: 12-06-06 - 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow! That's a surprise chapter, words cannot describe this chapter. It's simply great! It's good to see what Logan really meant and felt, keep on going gurl!
-Kendall15
Author's Response: I knew you'd enjoy this chapter, thanks alot for all your support.
more to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 12-06-06 - 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 5
Another good chapter, more please:)
As a side note I have removed all the other pictures you added to your story, there's was an ad attached to them that was placed to the site. Sorry but the only ads I want here are the one I place. On this chapter I realized I could just remove the ad part from the coding and just left the code for the actual picture, please take care to watch out for that in the future.
Please remove any ad coding attached to your pics, it seems the space you have these pics stored attaches ad coding. You could just upload the pics to your account here and post that link. ~ Pari
Author's Response: If I had known that my pics had ads attached to them I would not have uploaded them in the first place, my apologies.
Glasd your enjoying my story, more to come soon.
[Report This]Date: 12-06-06 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter 4
That was some bombshell to drop at dinner! Cool! Gave me plenty of insight as to why she was angry and scared in chapter one. Good work making the tone easy to read.
Author's Response: You'll love the next chapter then-or so I hope!
[Report This]Date: 12-05-06 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 4
I'm loving this, even though the chapters are way too short they still seem to fulfill the plot well. Please continue I'm really enjoying this and am looking forward to reading much more of it.
Author's Response: Good, 'cause there's more to come soon
[Report This]Date: 12-05-06 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 4
these letters are so touching but i want more full chapters of what is going on you are just teasing me
Author's Response: The letters are the main focus in the story, but I'll try and add some of the plot here and there, okay?
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