Date: 03-16-18 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Needs an ending .
Date: 01-16-18 - 01:45 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
More chapters.Please.
Date: 11-05-06 - 05:21 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Please tell me there will be at least one more chapter soon???
Date: 08-01-06 - 04:30 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
It's been a while since you've updated this story. Is there more??
Date: 04-22-06 - 05:44 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Awesome!!! I can't remember the last time I read a story so fast. I just couldn't get enough of this one. Definitely goin' on my Favorites list and so are you.
Thanks so much for this gem. What an overall good feelin' it leaves ya' with. Really sorry to see this one end, but it ended so well. Great job. *applauds* --- W6C
Date: 04-18-06 - 12:56 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Oh. My. Goodness. This was SOOOO great. Two of my favorite songs, perfectly placed in the context of the story. Def Leppard and Prince's Batman soundtrack are two of my guiltiest pleasures.
And this line cracked me up:
O.k., no rash. That was a good sign.
Please write some more of these. I'm begging you.
Date: 11-19-04 - 07:29 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
I absolutely love this story. I'm not even sure how many times I've read it now, but I always come back to read it again. Excellent work. I'm eagerly awaiting your next fic [Hint Hint]. lol. :-D
Date: 02-15-04 - 03:05 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Ok you can write more of this at any time!! This is rocking good fun!
Date: 10-15-03 - 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Great fic. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10-04-03 - 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
One of the best fics on this site so far. Congratulations
Date: 09-22-03 - 03:16 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Awwwz!! This is really sweet so far!! Please tell me there will be more!! ^^"
Date: 09-16-03 - 10:59 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
Only have two things to say about this fic: Wow. and Please can we have some more. Awesome stuff. (okay that was three things, but what did you expect when you write a fic like this).
Date: 09-16-03 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter 4- Breathe
That was freakin, AMAZING!!! You have to do more, you just have to, please:)