Date: 02-28-07 - 03:07 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
Awww...what will now happen to ro?
YES! logan finally saw the cam...yei yei!
Date: 02-14-07 - 11:04 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
ooooh...i really love it! i'm reading the whole story over and over again!!!
pure talent gainee
Date: 02-06-07 - 04:00 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
NOOOO! oh gosh! what will happen to storm now? and another preggy?
can't wait, can't wait.
Date: 01-20-07 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
Cool opening pic and the story so far is incredible. Everything was well described and beautifully put together.
This is an awesome story and i cant wait to read more.
RoLo forever
Date: 12-25-06 - 06:19 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
that's a twist, throwing in some lovin' in the first chapter. Ororo coming unglued as the catalyst is familiar theme that I have not see other authors do half so well as you do. You can feel how much she needs him, and it is tangible and believable. And of course, that line about "Stay with me tonight," coming from his lips, is enough to turn a person into butter. Butter, I tell you. That lets us know that he needs her, too.
This does not let you off the hook from giving us more of Best of Intentions, mind you, since Ororo and Piotr ballroom dancing conjurs beautiful images in my head. But this was good.
Date: 12-25-06 - 03:41 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
OH MY!!!!! ilove your story!!!! pls update soon!!!!! i can't wait!!! oh my! i'm soooo excited!!!!!
Date: 12-24-06 - 10:37 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
Wonderful start, update soon. ;)
Date: 12-24-06 - 08:08 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
OH MY, OH MY! Whew, that was intense and HOT! And there is more? I'm frikin out here waiting in anticipation. "a flash, Logan realized two things. One: Storm was coming unglued. Two: He depended on her to not come ungluedation." How amazing is that.
Rolletti
Date: 12-24-06 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter One: Escape
omg... u made me cry!!!.... *sobs*
beautiful. thats the onli way i can describe this story!
all hail gaineewop!
Date: 12-23-06 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
I had thought this was a one shot. I am overjoyed to know that more will come!
Date: 12-23-06 - 05:37 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
That was great! Intense, emotional, beautiful. Just everything that makes up RoLo :)
I'm pretty prone to tears lately, so again I shed a few here, heh :)
There's more to come, right?
Date: 12-23-06 - 04:40 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
I LOVE the pic, it took me a minute to realize it was from Swordfish. Great story, it could have easily been a one shot...but I can't wait for more.
Date: 12-23-06 - 03:13 pm Title: Chapter One: Escape
Well, Here it comes. A heaping of mad praise for your goddess like talents. Loved the whole thing from first word to last. Touching, hot, emotional and fitting. Perfect for them. :D But you knew that already, didn't you?