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Reviewer: AngelAloft Signed [Report This]
Date: 06-10-12 - 06:35 pm Title: Reunited

Logan an ass, Ororo badass, LOVE IT!!! Please tell me you are going to finish this.

Reviewer: NemesisBecoming Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04-06-07 - 08:26 pm Title: Reunited

TOTALLY! This story and the action wins. You're so effective efficient in your storytelling.

Reviewer: Darlin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-27-07 - 01:18 pm Title: Reunited

Where do I start? Okay, I like the poem/song (?) at the beginning of chapters, sets a mood, isn't intrusive, like that a lot in fact. I like this story a lot too. The descriptions of her pregnancy were sweet and well done - they say write what you know and it worked here marvelously. I like Ultimate because you can do so much more with them than you can with the older Uncanny characters with histories so convoluted it reads like fan fiction so I will definitely keep tabs on this story. It's addictive - I want more.

That being said I did think Ororo heading up to Montana where she'd stick out like a sore thumb, having lived out west myself and travelled the West, was a little odd. But it certainly made her easier to find. All in all another fantastically plotted and well written story from you. A true pleasure to read.

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-26-07 - 05:43 pm Title: Reunited

This story is absolutely awsome! Really! I'm loving it much more than any of your other stories at the moment! Update this one soon!

Reviewer: Rolletti Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 04:03 pm Title: Reunited

Okay, Thanks a lot for keeping me up til the wee hours of the night. I couldn't sleep after reading this, screaming at Ro to get a brain and fly to make her escape, clenching my teeth wishing Logan could instantly become a telepath and hear Ro's cry for help, panting with him relieving himself, biting my tounge in hopes he wouldn't stab her when he knocked her to the ground, pulling my hair when he noticed her scent changed, heart stopped when he thought some gigalo had HIS RO', blood pressure increased with, "Who hit you!" and cried with, "He wasn't letting them go." The adrenalin was racing through my veins so much I couldn't go to sleep.

Oh, and please do me a favor, UPDATE SOON!

Reviewer: Rising Phoenix Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 03:45 pm Title: Reunited

Thanks for working on this again Windrider! I always liked the idea of it before it went on hiatus. So, thanks for bringing it back. I can't wait for the next Update.!

Reviewer: Sango2 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 10:25 am Title: Reunited

Love it , update soon. ;)

Reviewer: burningnostalgia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 09:36 am Title: Reunited

*grin*

Now that went well. I like how you do simple scenes like that. Means so much more than they appear.

Reviewer: thesupernugget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 07:58 am Title: Reunited

the hunt! showdowns between 2 alpha males are always interesting.

Reviewer: OriginalCeenote Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 04:20 am Title: Reunited

I love battles between Logan and Creed, anyway, but you kick ass when you write Vic. Is he going to ever show up in Divergence?

The exchange was great. No huggy kissy reunion, just Logan stepping up to the plate and claiming his baby and 'Ro. Perfect. I know you will give us the creamy RoLo goodness later, so I can be patient.

Write on, Hobbins. Viva la fanfic.

Reviewer: Mignon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 01:14 am Title: Reunited

Awww. : D

I don't know how times I can say this ( well, write this) but, I love your fanfics.



Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-25-07 - 01:08 am Title: Reunited

I am seriously on a baby kink. Lovin ' preggers 'Ro and protective papa Logan. Oh and the fighty moma thing was well done. I almost yelled "Fly damn you 'Ro!" at my computer. :)

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-24-07 - 10:10 pm Title: Reunited

Oh my gosh! Rubbin one out to the one you miss is great, it's sweet. I really don't think I'll ever like Creed, and he needs to die...in chap 4 if possible. I hope the baby is ok, she got banged up a bit. More please...thanks!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-24-07 - 09:22 pm Title: Reunited

OMG, my heart was racing with Ro's on her wild escape. Gawd, I thought they'd get her!
Yay, they're back together :D And he wants the baby, double-yay! Loved it when he got angry at her when she told him she was pregnant, thinking she'd had someone else, while he couldn't LOL OMG, that was great! :D

Reviewer: Goddessreiko Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01-24-07 - 09:20 pm Title: Reunited

SQUEEEEE! More of this. I'm happy. Loved this all. Logan wanking the noodle, Ro dickin Toothy, Ro giving Logan hell for walking away, Logan going into Feral-Daddy mode.

Le dreamy sigh. This was brilliant as usual. There's a shocker. :P

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