[Report This]Date: 02-03-07 - 10:54 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Okay, this is really, really good! I love how you set this up. Everything fits perfectly falling into place when you least expect it. And the ending! Oh, I just had to laugh – well done!
[Report This]Date: 01-16-07 - 06:07 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Frist I like to say that is a juicy picture.
Love the story, especially the teasing that Logan does with Ororo then she gets him back in the end kinda with his paycheck. Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 04:55 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
CAn I say what an amazing read this is! The use of dialogue is wonderful-I can really picture the scene in front of me as I read these last 3 chapters. Especially this one-I couldn't help but smile widely . You've written this so tightly, keeping the secrets with you closely making us speculate and speculate using every word to try to get an idea/predict what will happen. Love love love it. Esp Bishop/Hank conversation. Keep it up!
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Oh, loves! This is fun!
I love the Bishop-Logan connection. Plus all the RoLo you've been throwing in here and there lately. They do fight very nicely. Hank is big, blue and fuzzy. What's not to like?
Amazing stuff, as usual. Intrigue coupled with amusement. Logan buying Marie tickets to Germany + Ororo busting his ass = icing on the cake.
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
OMG!!!! this is sooo great...update ipdate....sorry i'm just too excited..ur d best men!!!;)
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 03:43 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Oh...I really like this! I suspected that Bishop was Ororo's son, but I didn't expect that he was also Logan's. I thought his father was Forge. I love the way Logan is irritating Ororo without even knowing why. How long will it take for him and Ororo to figure out that all the fighting is intense attraction.
Please keep it coming!
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 02:26 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Ohhh...Logan's busted. It's cute that they find each other undeniably hot but too annoying for words. Hopefully Bishop won't end up witnessing his conception! LOL. It's good that he has Hank to help him out with his displacement in time.
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 01:26 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
Omygosh. Still lovin on Bish. Love Hank, duh.
But the biggest amount of love goes out to the antagonistic Rolo. I almost kinda don't want that to change.
Almost. :D
[Report This]Date: 01-15-07 - 01:13 am Title: Chapter Three: Truth
I love the take on the fighting couple to be. And Hanks reaction to Logan being the father cracked me up and Bishop's confussion over thier hatred for each other. Priceless babe, priceless.
Rolletti (waiting in anticipation like always)
[Report This]Date: 01-14-07 - 09:16 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
i loved this update. i thibnk the concept of the story is great, but this particular chapter is just so right, so well written, lone of my favs! thanks
[Report This]Date: 01-14-07 - 09:01 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
LOL LOL, I love it when they fight like this :D It's too funny. They love hating each other ;) Can't wait to see how things'll go from here. I mean, they're gonna end up together... someday... somehow. :)
Poor Hank. He knows about them being Bish's parents and is forced to keep it all to himself. Loved his reaction when Bishop told him about Logan being his father :D
[Report This]Date: 01-14-07 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter Three: Truth
The last bit between Logan and Ororo was just spot on perfection. Honest. you rock socks, baby doll!
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