Date: 01-16-07 - 09:29 am Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Brilliant chapter. It shows Ororo in many different sides.
Bishop does take after his parents. Calm and stubborn. *laugh* I'm enjoying all their interactions.
Date: 01-16-07 - 05:46 am Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
awesomeness!!!!! Please update as much as those muses visit you! :)
Date: 01-16-07 - 02:38 am Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
WOOOWWWW!!!!! WOW! WOW!
i can't take it sooo good....can't wait for the next update...i mean...WOW!!!
Date: 01-15-07 - 10:02 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Every part of this chapter held my attention. Just wonderful...
Date: 01-15-07 - 09:25 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Wow that was quite the emotional battle with Bishop. I can understand her confusion and feeling lost after such a showdown. It was good of Logan to go the caregiver route. Good chapter!
Date: 01-15-07 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Lil Lucas was beyond cute. That whole scene was just like a fairytale. Omg, the way you write about being preggnat and babies makes me almost entertain the idea of having one myself. Then the idea of having something that big come out the size of a a salt shaker just shakes me back.
But your imagery is spectacular. :prints story out for Fanfiction Folder of Fame:
Date: 01-15-07 - 08:50 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
OMG, the ending! One of the sweetest scenes ever *melts*
I'm so in love with this story! :)
Date: 01-15-07 - 08:42 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO I've come to the end. You are so...AMAZINGLY TALENTED! I can't write because I'm constantly reading your stuff, and if I'm writing, I'm constantly looking to see if you posted. I need help, I'm a fic addict or fic whore. Wait, I think I'm both.
Rolletti (waiting for chapter five impatiently even though you just posted four ) :)
Date: 01-15-07 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
you are amazing, with every story and every piece, i love the way you tell stories.
Date: 01-15-07 - 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
I Love this story! It's so cute the beginning relationship between Ororo and Logan !
Update very soon!
Date: 01-15-07 - 06:10 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
Wow! Wow! And wow again! Awsome story! I LOVED LOVED LOVED the ending! I can not wait for more! Soon! Very soon!
Date: 01-15-07 - 05:30 pm Title: Chapter Four: Embrace
I hate you. You put everyone else to shame. **tosses aside own writing** I'm an addict. Seriously. :P