Date: 02-11-07 - 09:50 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
It's taking me a while but I haven't forgotten this story. Now some comments.
"His love for her had been fast and fiery, not made to last." Wonderful, wonderful reasoning here and I love it. For me it always has to be a feasible reason for him to turn to Storm in movie fics. Nicely done.
“She would never tame him, but something about her soothed his inner demons." Another wonderful explanation.
"Storm’s was the faint linger of burning ozone. It would leak into the scent she always carried, reminding him of the way her eyes would swirl from dark to milky as she tapped into her power." I always give kudos to those who can pinpoint what Ororo would smell like and anything realistically original such as this is brilliant.
Finally I had to laugh when poor Bishop was dreading the thought of them doing it on the pool table. I'm really enjoying this.
Date: 01-17-07 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
If you continue to write this good you might just take Holly's best writer title. I am absolutely IN LOVE with this story. It would help if Bishop didn't keep barging in on them though. I mean if he wants to live he has to let them you know...I absolutely loved the first scene with Ororo & Logan waking up in the same bed. It's absolutely wonderful! More soon! Please!
Date: 01-17-07 - 11:59 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
"Logan, perimeter check."
"you got it."
"Did he just... not argue with me?"
Oh, priceless. I absolutely adore you.
Must be tough on Bishop, though. I get where he's coming from, but Ororo and Logan are just always in denial. But then, that's why we love them. *laugh*
Date: 01-17-07 - 11:56 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
I think this is turning out great. I remember the cartoon version of the story and i like this much better. thanks
Date: 01-17-07 - 11:14 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
ohhhh...you did it again!!! i can't wait...for another page!!!WOW!i kinda find it funny when bishop complained about the pool table...LOL!!!! ***you rock!***
Date: 01-17-07 - 07:16 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Can you hear me screaming you EVIL, EVIL KITTY! Urgh!
I love the way Bishop just stepped into 'Mommy"s room'. (because we all know THEY DON'T KNOCK) I'm glad Logan didn't let her get away from him and I'm glad she said, " Too late." (happy dance)
Poor Bishy saw them AGAIN! If you're not careful he's going to end up with some deep psycological promblems. I bet if they knew he was their son, they'd learn to lock the doors.
You did an OUTSTANDING job AGAIN! Give yourself a pat on the back while I present your Pulizer.
Rolletti
Date: 01-17-07 - 02:20 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
i'm soooo hooked!!!! funny how bishop found them in the pool table...i really love the tension and love between rolo...upd8 upd8 ;)
Date: 01-17-07 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Love the fact that Bish walked into 'Ro's room without knocking. That sense of familarity almost got him an eyeful of something he didn't want to see. That is going to be one pissed off weather goddess when she finds out what he went to go do.
Date: 01-16-07 - 11:53 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Wolverine and Storm, those are two hot tamales huh? Poor Bishop is being traumatized! *snickers* Storm is going to kick his butt when she finds out he went after Pyro. I also wonder what happened to the folks that the Brotherhood sent to check out Bishop.
Date: 01-16-07 - 10:40 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
I am so hooked on this story!!!!
Can't wait till next Update!
Date: 01-16-07 - 09:51 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Evil kitty laughter, indeed!
Date: 01-16-07 - 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Five: Spark
Bish's got some horrible timing! Gah!!! I'm glad he didn't interrupt them the second time :D
Must be difficult though to see ones parents like this, thinking everything (maybe even his very existence) started off with a wild romp. To outsiders it really looks like it, but the feelings they have for each other have been there for quite some time. They just didn't show them, didn't want to deal with them, so noone knew. I hope Bish'll find out about that soon, to make him feel a bit better, heh.