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Date: 01-25-07 - 09:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

*cheer*

Loved this chapter. The fights and all were very real. And it's great that you made it so that Ali owned Betsy. Most people, including me, would go for Psylocke winning without a doubt.

Glad you didn't kill anyone off today. Ali/Piotr = amazing. You write them really well.

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Date: 01-25-07 - 01:20 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 01-25-07 - 12:13 am Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

yeah...what does that mean, better marie than kitty?

oh my love love this story...rolo dooo hot!

Reviewer: Jade of Purple Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

"Better Marie than Kitty" Wait! what does that mean?
Now I'm starting to get worried.

Great chapter. I almost cried when I thought Ali had died.

Reviewer: Burnz Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

Holy big battle Batman! Ali took a heck of a risk! So Leech is the key. Whoa nelly what a chapter. I a so glad that Bishop didn't get nabbed. *Whew* Well done.

Reviewer: N'Dare's Daughter Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 10:17 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

Ladies? Bitch, we’re in a fistfight. There’s no ladies here.

Best. Line. EVER!

Reviewer: Steph :) Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 07:22 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

Wow, that was fantastic! This chapter had just about everything!
LOL, Bishop needs to learn how to knock ;D
Loved how Ali described the attacking mutants LOL I knew exactly whom she was referring to.
And damn, Petey actually just wanted to let it happen! Dammit boy! And those uniforms need a re-design! Ali almost died, aah!
"Better Marie than Kitty"?! Whoa, what's that supposed to mean... I absolutely can't wait to find out! :D

Reviewer: Ashatay Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

You are kickin ass with the updates, thanks!

Ali & Pete...I need more of that, pleaaaaase.

Reviewer: Voli23 Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 06:08 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

You make my day with our updates. Yay! Awesome stuff, as usual. Ooo! Marie and Kitty!!! Yet, I'm always hardcore RoLo. :)

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Date: 01-24-07 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

And the plot keeps winding and winding... You weave an intricate tale with a multitude of layers. Steamy sex, violent action, tender moments AND foreshadowing...dayum. You are a muses dream writer. **is jealous** I can't wait for more of this--of anything you write really. I am also really into the Peter/Ali Romance. Smokin' hot they are. ;) Keep up the womderful story telling!

~Your biggest fan

Reviewer: Blackpanther Anonymous Liked

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Date: 01-24-07 - 05:20 pm Title: Chapter Eleven: Salvation

Woah! Such a cool battle scene! I absolutely love Ali & Piotr together! Just a question - how come Ali got an uniform & became an official X-man only a week after joining? Anyhow i'm loving this, so please update soon!

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