Date: 06-20-07 - 10:00 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
OMG!! Wonderful addition to an already fantastic story. Waiting on the edge of my seat for more!
Date: 06-20-07 - 07:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
DAMN. you can't leave things there like that!!! FIC/Fix IT!
Date: 06-20-07 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
oh my! pls don't let anything happen to them. can they change the future without losing anyone? pls pls
Date: 06-20-07 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
....evil. You are so evil for stopping like that!!!
What happened to Storm? Where'd Rogue get the new powers? Is Storm okay? UPDATE!!!
Date: 06-19-07 - 08:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Great chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to read what happens to Storm and the baby so keep on writing and update soon.
Date: 06-19-07 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Metal plated armor sound absolutely ridiculous going to battle against magneto. I mean Ororo would know better. Really. Otherwise...it was a good chapter. But the exposition was a bit long. They love each other a lot and they know they might not all come back. We got it. Loved the ROLO moment at the beginning. Very fitting. I love Ali. She just had to kick Pyro's ass! :D I hope you write more soon! Just one more chapter doesn't seem enough though.
Date: 06-19-07 - 07:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
There are so many cookies in here, I love it. This is better than the movie.
Date: 06-19-07 - 07:14 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
Whoa. Um..... Whoa.
Excellent. I have no idea where you're going with this next, and I like it! :D Bravo!
Date: 06-19-07 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Twenty: Stand
WOW! That'll shut yer lyin' mouth, Rogue!!! Logan told her to stick it in her pipe and smoke it! That was awesome. Everyone reaching for barf bags was priceless, and Ali kicking Pyro's butt was perfect and just what I needed today.
If Logan just took himself out, and he's unconscious on the ground, that doesn't bode well... I'm good and anxious now. You didn't mention what was in store for him next chapter, just Ororo and Erik. I'm on pins and needles to see what happens next.