[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 07:49 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
*dances*
Oh, this is awesome. I bet Ali and Lizzie are gonna get along perfectly fine.
A chance of Betsy defecting to the X-Men is just yay. As for Rogue... ugh.
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 06:39 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
What? No evil cliff hanger to tourter us with? Wow! LOL Great chapter, new character and change of heart. Woah, the tension is smothering. I can't wait for the next update.
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 04:18 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
Blast... This story is too freakin' good. Updates please! :)
[Report This]Date: 03-08-07 - 12:04 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
I hate Rogue. With that being said, I love the relationship between Ro and her children.
You can tell theres a close relationship between Bishop and Shard. They balance each other out much like Storm and Wolverine do.
[Report This]Date: 03-07-07 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
Cute! I wasn't sure if I'd like Bishop and Shard as RoLo kids, but I'm glad I do lol even though watching One Man's Worth is going to be a little weird for me now. Oh well! So worth it!
[Report This]Date: 03-07-07 - 05:38 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
Dang, I hope John convinces Betsy to leave with or without him before they all go down. It looks like things will be even peppier with Shard around. :)
[Report This]Date: 03-07-07 - 01:39 am Title: Chapter Sixteen: Little Sister
i wish there was more of SHard! i really liked the interactions and observations made.
[Report This]Date: 02-18-07 - 12:34 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ok, so like, the next update is in five minutes, right? Cuz you can't just leave us like that. Shard. Shard!
I'm so excited. This is so good.
[Report This]Date: 02-18-07 - 04:32 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
You know, this should be illlegal to dump an addition like that at us in the end and don't immediately add a following chapter. I mean this is so completrely unfair, now I must wait....what? 3 weeks or so for the next chapter just to find out why the hell Shard is there? Damn you Rogue, you evil bitch traitor!!! I wonder how Shard got to where they are to help change the pattern. But it's good they could try to save the future.
Oh, great read by the way, but too much naughty ness, I wasn't too sure how I felt of Wolverine sort of mocking Ali about her and Piotr's sex life, Actually the entire talk seemed odd to me, since those two are teens and Storm and Wolvie are adults. But overall it is a great read.
VB
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 06:41 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
*&@#$#@^& CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
okay, tamtrum over
OH MY GOODNESS! Amazing chapter girl, amazing. Love is in the air, hot sex, A FRIKIN RING, SHARD!!!!
Okay I need a fix, please update sooooon, don't leave us hanging for long with this ending. Great job, SUPER GIRL!
Rolletti
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 05:53 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Oh! Awesome update Gainee! I absolutely LOVED this chapter! And Bishop's got high blood pressure but he's drinking coffee? Seriously? No wonder his heart rate monitor was going crazy...So i suppose Shard bringing news from the future? Update soon!
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 07:04 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Oh...
My...
GAWD!
More please!
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 05:09 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Faster, comrade! hee hee...
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 03:59 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Ooooh! Ring and Shard all in one chapter! Brilliant. Absolutely wow.
[Report This]Date: 02-17-07 - 03:30 am Title: Chapter Fifteen: Shard
Shard!!?
Damn I wonder what Logan and Ororo are going to say when they see their future daughter.
And why did she come back to the past? Do things still go wrong in their time?
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